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Published: 2004-08-22 06:00:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 104; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Description The Earth has made it's final turn
And so in turn have we
So come, my friend, before the end
Come dance into the sea

Off into the night we fare
To slay the evil Beast
With you at my side whilst worlds collide
we'll feast a bloody feast

The Earth has made it's final turn
Now I'm inviting thee
So come, my friend, before the end
Come dance into the sea

Into this murky darkness deep
We tread to set things right
To capture Evils of the brine
And bring them to the Light

The Earth has made it's final turn
So come good friend with me
From Poseidon sent & so we went
To dance into the sea

As all are pushed into the throng
Of maddening sea and sky
Upon a safely scuttled ship
Are harbored you and I

The Earth has made it's final turn
And so in turn have we
So come, my friend, before the end
Come Dance into the sea
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Comments: 4

lexman [2004-11-11 15:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Well written.
It makes strange impression...

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secondoracle In reply to lexman [2004-11-11 22:07:58 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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creator07 [2004-11-05 09:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Love that first stanza. It flows pretty well in the first half. The repetition doesn't hurt it at all here.

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secondoracle In reply to creator07 [2004-11-05 09:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I wondered if I was overdoing it.

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