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Published: 2020-08-04 21:38:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 293; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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The day continues, but gets sidetracked.Next - www.deviantart.com/secret-ninj…
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Ooh, sugary treats! Maybe she'll finally get that side-quest done, too.
Trying something new with this page, not sure if I like how it turned out, but glad I tried it~
I think the foreground stuff is just a little too bright maybe? Things to experiment with next time!
I kinda like how the "through the window" part worked out - just needs a little more practice.
Feedback on this page especially would be very much appreciated!
Let me know what you think!
-Is the foreground too confusing/distracting?
-Should the window part be clearer? Can you tell what's happening?
-How can I improve this page?
Feedback is always helpful.
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Art by Me.
Made in MS Paint.
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