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THIS IS SAD, SO TURN BACK NOW IF YOU WANT SOMETHING HAPPY!:“(Name)” A voice cried, “Please open ze door.” Your small frame shook in the agony of your once lover and fiancee’s anguish. “Please, (name). Give me another chance!” You backed away, pressing your hands to your ears. No! You wouldn’t listen.
“Damn et! I know you ‘re en der! S'il vous plaît ma chérie. Pardonnez-moi! J'ai péché, et j'ai pu vous blesser. " He yelled, banging his fists against the door. “Please, mon cher! Please don’t le moi! S’e meant nothing! I know you can ‘ear me!”
You whimpered, a small broken sound. How could he do this to you? Beautiful, funny, smart, playful Francis. You had loved his as if he were the stars. And he had cheated on you with some, some, h-
Hoe, you were going to say. But you couldn't bring yourself to. Yes, surely the girl you had seen the love of your life in bed with, was a whore, a very beautiful whore. Many times more beautiful than you. Likely, the Frenchman had not been able to exist.
It had been, what? Two weeks ago? You were meant to be on a business trip. But you had come home early. It was like a bad movie. You went over to Francis’s apartment, and slipped inside, hoping to surprise him. You had heard moans and grunts from the bedroom, and had run as fast as you could to see if Francis was sick. You concern had turned so quickly into disbelief, rage, and despair. You turned and ran, and didn't stop until you were seven blocks away.
You just collapsed in an alley, and cried, until merciful sleep stole away the pain. It was stupid of course. Falling asleep at night in an alley in a big city. You could have been raped, or killed. But right then, you didn't care.
He’d called, day after day, message after message. You parents and friends had too. Eventually you stopped listening, and let your cell battery die out. The land line cord was ripped from the wall. Silence. With each day, your health got worse and worse. Eventually, you’d stopped eating altogether.
And now France was at your door. Eventually the repeated banging slowed to desperate, of beat thuds. Then silence. You could hear his heavy breathing, and the quiet sounds of his sobs. It would have broken your heart, had it been whole in the first place.
Your entire frame shook violently as you stumbled away from the door, toward your room. Your head hurt, and you just wanted to lie down. But then you turned back again, to stare at the door. Could you really leave it at that?
No. Something resembling determination took up residence in your soul, and you walked slowly toward the door. The once sinecure of turning the knob was now a true task with the trembling in your palms. Finally, with an ominous click, the door opened.
Francis, who had been pacing in front of the door, whipped around to face you. His usually stunning blond hair was tangled and greasy, his face was pale, much thinner than it should have been, and streaked with tears. He immediately stepped toward you, but you held out a hand.
The hope that had blossomed on his face was crushed by your unflinching eyes. “Francis.” Your voice didn't shake, but it didn't sound like you. It sounded, hysterical for some reason. The tone and words were perfectly reasonable and calm. But something about the hitch of your frenzied breath scared you. When you spoke next, thought, your voice was vacant, and cold as steel.
“ I will take my hate for you to the grave. Because god might forgive you, but I will never” On never, your quiet hiss turned into rageful shout “stop despising you, loathing you. Even in death.” And the you went back inside,curled up in a ball, and pressed you hands to your ears, so you wouldn't have to hear his sobs.
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Comments: 44
DelicateHarmony [2015-08-15 17:54:04 +0000 UTC]
Well, we've got the Patron Saint up above so your opinion is invalid. However, I read according to a certain religion- that if you upset someone and they don't forgive you, they have the rights to pray for your failure
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SecretlyaSecret In reply to DelicateHarmony [2015-08-18 01:47:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry I hadn't meant to offend anyone on religious basis. I wasn't trying to make a religious statement at all... at the time I was non-denominational and now I'm agnostic so I hadn't meant to alter or exclude people of any religion at all. The whole sentence is a little melodramatic if I'm being honest... but I was 12/13 when I wrote it so lol.
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hmwwawcciawcccw [2015-07-30 05:36:31 +0000 UTC]
if this is not your best work than please tell me what is because this was f***ing awesome and if you can top this than holy S**t
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SecretlyaSecret In reply to hmwwawcciawcccw [2015-07-31 22:55:28 +0000 UTC]
Aw thanks 0//0... this was a while ago so I could probably rewrite it a bit better (at least in terms of grammar and technique) if I wanted. Not sure anyone would be interested though, lol
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hmwwawcciawcccw In reply to SecretlyaSecret [2015-08-01 00:12:31 +0000 UTC]
i didn't notice grammar mistakes but even if there were some, the story was still great!
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Meowhug17 [2015-03-21 02:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Gil: *hears about the breakup* *walks out the door*
Dude, where are you going?
Gil: To comfort the beautiful Frau keseseeses
Gil: *minute he's out the door* SHE'S MINE NOW BITCH!
7: *facepalm* Why do I even bother with you people?
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LauniSmooth [2014-12-12 23:53:08 +0000 UTC]
Me: France how could you!! *starts crying my eyes out*
Spain: I am so sorry Querida *holds me in his arms while I sniffle and eventually fall asleep.*
Spain: *snickers and then smirks* Finally she's mine now, thanks a lot France
France: *cries in a corner*
I enjoyed it but literally I'm gonna go make myself feel better and go let Spain console me lol
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VixenoftheLeaf [2014-08-20 16:12:31 +0000 UTC]
Despite all of France's antics like constant flirting and stuff I can't ever see him as being a cheater. I think he believes to much in love to ever hurt his partner in such a manner.
But despite that this is a beautifully sad story well done my friend
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SecretlyaSecret In reply to VixenoftheLeaf [2014-08-25 22:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I appreciate it.
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Rmstar01 [2014-05-29 02:31:21 +0000 UTC]
Damn man, the feels. That kinda reminds me of what happened with my dad and ex step-mom.
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SecretlyaSecret In reply to Rmstar01 [2014-05-30 00:02:26 +0000 UTC]
That sounds rough, you ever need to talk I'm always here. I can understand parent problems.
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Rmstar01 In reply to SecretlyaSecret [2014-05-30 01:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Nah, it was like four or five years ago but thanks for the offer, it means a lot.
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Faustita [2013-12-30 00:39:04 +0000 UTC]
this stories awsoooomeee:3 i love this ending its so cooooool XDD
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NightmareViolinist [2013-06-09 03:43:08 +0000 UTC]
;~; Holy crap
You go girl but I did feel sorry when France started crying ;~;
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SecretlyaSecret In reply to NightmareViolinist [2013-06-09 16:42:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. So did I.
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Bluegoldstar12345 [2013-04-13 00:52:43 +0000 UTC]
ooohhhhhhhh!!!!!GIRL GOT PISSSSSEEEEDDDD!! ^3^
....I LIKED IT
I was getting tired of stories where people just forgave people after they did their ridiculous junk!
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Laketree [2013-04-12 13:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Even though I'm suppose to hate him can I cuddle with him anyway? It doesn't feel right making him cry.
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SecretlyaSecret In reply to Laketree [2013-04-12 17:48:14 +0000 UTC]
But he cheated on you.... fine.
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Laketree In reply to SecretlyaSecret [2013-04-13 01:26:32 +0000 UTC]
So? He's crying and basically killing himself over it.
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Laketree In reply to SecretlyaSecret [2013-04-15 00:11:25 +0000 UTC]
So he deserves to be cuddled.
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SecretlyaSecret In reply to Laketree [2013-04-15 02:13:31 +0000 UTC]
.....No...But you can...if you want....
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aibi0608 [2013-04-12 12:32:18 +0000 UTC]
sometimes i wonder do men really like to see us cry or break our hearts
even with all the words that capture us and all , we gave everything to them but they took advantage of it
no offense but some men are just the same : they go for the looks , the outside but never care about how a woman feels
all a girl ever want is someone to after them and love them for who they are inside and out (like the marriage vows)
men should be careful , women are very sensitive and they are ridiculously fragile , they should treat her like a queen or like the most precious thing to them
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aibi0608 In reply to MonteDeNeko300 [2013-04-12 15:18:54 +0000 UTC]
right =^=/
it's really hard to find the 'one'
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MonteDeNeko300 In reply to aibi0608 [2013-04-12 15:35:11 +0000 UTC]
Tell me about it T.T Like I'm social but not that social and the guys I like are either having a crush on my sis or they're gay DX
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AnnaThePolarBear [2013-04-12 07:23:48 +0000 UTC]
Poor Francis, Ahhh well.. I'd probably take my hate to the grave too if the love of my life cheated on me
Awesome story by the way~
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