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SedonaSummer — You Deserve to Burn [REMAKE]

Published: 2017-01-21 22:34:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 521; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description Remake of this old thing


Im kinda eehhh on how this came out, it only took me around an hour-an hour thirty minutes, but you know, I felt like this needed a remake
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lillianchongart [2017-01-22 09:30:14 +0000 UTC]

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I personally think that the remake is actually better than the old thing that you drew before because it looks more professional, the dragon actually look better than the old one and the fire, is just stunning! You blew it away. This fire I see is way, way, WAY more better than the old one! The way you combined the colors of the the fire is wonderful( thumbs up from me).That old crap, looks like its been drawn by an amateur artist. You can do better than that, and you did it. This artwork is stunning and it is definitely going to land itself in my favs. GREAT JOB!

>u<

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pelaghi [2017-01-22 06:05:51 +0000 UTC]

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This turned out very nicely! I love the fire and the way the sparks fly about. Compared to the original it is much improved, I love how the light catches on them, although personally I would have added more lighting/shading features to the scales and horns. Besides that, it a great scene to look at with the character contrasting with darker hues and shading against the fire, and making the line-art vary in color, which actually complements your style very well! It is a bit hard to see the jawline/under the ear near the horn due to the coloring being too close to the lighting, which I would try to remedy with either a shadow originating from the ear, or darkening the lining right there.


I hope this was alright, this is my first DA critique

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WinterWatcher77 [2017-01-26 23:39:22 +0000 UTC]

*studies flames

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SedonaSummer In reply to WinterWatcher77 [2017-01-26 23:44:38 +0000 UTC]

D on t they're half-assed and awful

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WinterWatcher77 In reply to SedonaSummer [2017-01-27 00:01:07 +0000 UTC]

NO IT'S GOOD

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Moondust405 [2017-01-22 00:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Dayum 

I HOPE THAT YOU, BURNNN-
-proceeds to shut up-

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thatonerudesandwing [2017-01-22 00:15:29 +0000 UTC]

It's great!

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CobraCatDragon2898 [2017-01-21 22:52:42 +0000 UTC]

O:

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TwinSunns [2017-01-21 22:42:05 +0000 UTC]

THE IMPROVEMENT MY DUDE??????????

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SedonaSummer In reply to TwinSunns [2017-01-21 22:42:44 +0000 UTC]

ajr;oishf;

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planttdad [2017-01-21 22:37:07 +0000 UTC]

TH I S IS FLIPPING AMAZING MAN OM F G

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SedonaSummer In reply to planttdad [2017-01-21 22:37:27 +0000 UTC]

whOAH thanKS I hate the fire

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planttdad In reply to SedonaSummer [2017-01-21 22:39:35 +0000 UTC]

same though

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