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that bull s... renamon is a lot stronger then those two clowns
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they attack her from behind...read story and you'll see
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it still wrong man even if they attacked her form behind
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renamon is a rookie and those two were a armor level who are backup whit partners.
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it dissent mater she can still beat them no mater what
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then why did you make that then if you know it is true
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Because I need a reason for takato death
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sorry for spoiling....that is if you read it
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are you talking about the renamonxtakato your story
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man that sucks man big time you know i'm making my own story to
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you do? did you upload chapter 1?
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well no becouse i'm not done with it but i can give you about a few pages of it so her is the first
my name is Jordon and I'm aloner that doses everything by him self and dose not care about no one until one night every thing changed. BANG, "What was that" i said then i got out of bed and garbed my sword and went outside to see what is was. when i was outside i heard a scream i followed the scream when i got to the the sight of the scream i saw a female fox like creature that was under attack by a big spider. "Hay leave her alone" i said and pulled out my sword. then i charged at it and sliced it i half then the spider disappeared. Then i turned around and saw the female fox was knocked out and was hurt. I picked her up and took her back to my house (luckily my parents was gone on vacation) then i lade her down on the couch. then got the first aid kit and fixed her up. after that i got a closer look at the female fox she was yellow and had on purple gloves that had a taoism on it. after a few hours she rolls over and slowly opens her eyes and says" where am i and who are you? i smiled and said "my name is Jordon and i saved you from that spider like creature". She sits up and mutters, "My name is Renamon and i thank you for saving my life and taking care of me". renamon explains what she is and why she was under attack. "Let me get this start you are a digimon and that spider was a digimon to. "Yes" " wow i never new digimon ever existed" i said. then i look at the clock it said 11:50" man we need to get sum sleep. "Renamon you can stay here with me as long as you like" "I can....oh Thank you Jordon" Then renamon hugs me overwhelmed by her joy i hesitated then hugged her back. then she slowly brakes the hug "so ummm... where am i going to sleep at" "you are sleeping in my bed and i will sleep out here if that's alright with you" (While i was blushing). " Jordon... I hope i,m not being a burden to you" " No no no Renamon you are not being a burden to me" "well we better get sum sleep renamon" "your right Jordon we need to get sum sleep" I picket renamon up (since she was to week to stand) i carried her to my room and lad her down on my bed. i covered her up as i was walking away Renamon said "good night Jordon" i looked back and said "good night Renamon". then i walked to the couch and lad down ( Man i must be the luckiest person alive) then i fell a sleep.
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when i woke up i checked on renamon she was still a sleep so i decided to fix her some food. when i entered the room she woke up "good morning renamon did you sleep well" "yes i did how about you" " good" "I made you some food" "oh thank you jordon" well...ah...your welcome"(i blushed a little when she said that). after renamon was done eating she asked me a question" Jordon do you have any friends? i looked at her and slowly lad my head down. "you do not have any friends do you jordon" 'No i do not" "why" " well when i was a kid everyone called me a freak because i hade some sort of power that is not human" "what do you mean Jordon" " well i shoot energy blasts out of my hands" " the only one that understands me was my grandfather he said to me let no one get to you and use your powers to protect people i was 14 when he said that" "what happened to your grandfather? " he past away a few years ago. "i so sorry Jordon" "it not your fault renamon" i could see in her eyes that she felt sorry for me. " how are you filling? "i fill a lot better thanks to you jordon" i blushed "hay it was no big deal renamon" "well i,m going to take a shower" as i was walking out "wait Jordon" "yes renamon" "wood it be alright if ....if. i joined you in the shower? i looked at her and said "i so pose it wont hurt so yes you can" renamon got up and almost knocked me down when she hugged me. " oh thank you jordon" "ah.. your welcome" then i hugged her back. after that we both got in the shower and got cleaned. after we got dried off i asked renamon a question "Renamon do you have a tamer? "yes i do" "what is her/his name? "her name is Rika Nonaka" " do you remember where she lives at" yes i do jordon" "It's about time that i head back to her" renamon said "wait renamon i wont to go with you. "ah .... ok Jordon you can come with me" hold on renamon i got to grab something first. i grabed my sword. "what is that Jordon? " oh this, its my sword that i had when i saved you, this sword was a present that my grandfather gave me before he passed away it has a taoism on the blade just like the ones on your gloves" but before we could leave there was a knock on the door "hello" "are you jordon" "yes i am" "you have a package sign here and here ok thank you" "what is that Jordon" renamon asks "i don't know? i opened up the package and in side it was a guitar. it hade a letter in side the package. Dear Jordon i found this in your grandfathers attic and i knew how you like to sing and play the guitar i hope you fall in love with some one and sing for them love mom" "this is my grandfathers guitar" "one more thing i have to take with me. i put the guitar on my back and my sword around my wast. "Jordon are you going to sing for some one you like?" (Renamon was blushing) "i don't know? i said "well jordon are you ready to go? "yes" "ok get on my back" i got on her back (wow she is soft and worm it feels like i,m on a cloud) i blushed a little. "wait renamon where am i going to stay if rika dues not like me? "well you can stay with takato and i will visit you when rika is at school lets just hope rika will like you" Me to but as long as i get to see you that will be fine by me" "oh Jordon your making me blush" "sorry" after that renamon teleported us at rikas place her place was big there was only one way in and out that was the front door. " this is a nice place renamon this is where you live" Yep" "wow this is nice" then the door opened a girl with red hair, a blue shirt that had a broken heart on it. and blue jeans was standing at the door. " RENAMON YOU GET AWAY FORM THAT TWERP" "Hay who are you calling a twerp are you rika? "Ya what's it to you" "my name is Jordon and i saved renamon,s life" "i wont to know if i can stay here" "NO NO NO NO you can not stay here" "But Rika" renamon said. "No renamon that's ok i can see that i,m not welcome" " Rika can i show where jordon will be staying at? "hm....... fine but i wont you back as soon as possible" OK Rika" Rika slam's the door behind her. "How can you handle this renamon she treats you like she dus not care about you" "its ok jordon" No its not... no body should treat you like that" "Oh...Jordon" then renamon kissed me on the cheek i blushed a lot when she did that. "well jordon are you ready to see takato? i was still in the trance when she kissed me then i snapped out of it. "Yes" "ok get on my back then" i got on renamons back and i thought in my head " i must have one of the best and cutest friends ever" "Jordon... you know i can read you thoughts" both me and renamon was blushing. then a few seconds later we was at a bread store. "is this where takato lives at. "yes" we landed on a ledge that hade a window. i got off of renamon and she told me to stay out of sight. renamon knocks on the window "Takato, Takato wake up" "ren... renamon is that you" Takato opens the window. "what are you doing here renamon" Takato can you do me a favor" "what is it" takato said. "jordon come over here" so i stepped in front of renamon.when i did i saw a boy with brown hear that had on a blue shirt and had on big goggles around his head. "Ho is this" takato said. "Hi i,m jordon and i saved renamons life from a digimon" "you did WHAT" takato said. " takato wood it be alright for jordon to stay with you" "yea he can stay here" "thank you takato" i said "well renamon you better get back before rika throws a fit" "your right jordon but before i leave...." then renamon kissed me on the cheek i almost passed out when she kissed me. i blushed a lot " Bye renamon" i said " Bye jordon i will see you tomorrow" then renamon winked at me. then renamon teleported back to rika. " so jordon... do you and renamon have something going on" "ah..........i cant answer that. " so takato are you a tamer to" "yes i am" " can i see your digimon to takato" "not to night maybe tomorrow" "ok" "so where am i going to sleep at" "you can sleep on the top bunk" takato said. "its late and i have to go to school tomorrow " "ok" i said. then i toke off my sword and my guitar then climbed up on the buck bed. takato was already a sleep. "i hope renamon is alright"i said then i fell a sleep.
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nice 
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well he is human that has powers hes like a saiyan
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when i woke up i notice that takato was at school so i went to the restroom to get a shower. after that i opened up the window then i turned to my left and noticed a note on takatos desk. "dear jordon do NOT let my parents see you at all Ok. (lucky for me takatos parents was not a home) " i think i,m going to play the guitar for a while" at rikas house renamon was laying on a tree "bye grandmother i see you when i get back"rika said "now i can see what Jordon is up to since rika is gone" renamon said. renamon teleported right at the window " do i hear a guitar and someone singing? renamon looked in and saw me with my guitar in my hand. (i did not know renamon was at the window) i began to play " What day is it?...... And in what month?..... This clock never seemed so alive........ I can't keep up and I can't back down........I've been losing so much time.................. Cause it's you and me and all of the people with nothing to do.........Nothing to lose....... And it's you and me and all of the people....... And i don't know why, I can't keep my eyes off of you......................All of the things that i want to say just aren't coming out right.......... I'm tripping on words......... You've got my head spinning.......... I don't know where to go from here.............Cause it's you and me and all of the people with nothing to do........... Nothing to prove..........And it's you and me and all of the people........... And i don't know why, I can't keep my eyes off of you.........................There's something about you now....... I can't figure out..........Everything she does is beautiful......... Everything she does is right.............Cause it's you and me and all of the people with nothing to do........Nothing to lose.........And it's you and me and all of the people........... And i don't know why, I can't keep my eyes off of you........ and me and all of the people with nothing to do....... Nothing to prove........And it's you and me and all of the people..........And i don't know why, I can't keep my eyes off of you....... What day is it?.... And in what month?......This clock never seemed so alive." oh..... Jordon that was wonderful" "Renamon?....ah.. how long have you been standing there" "when you first stared to sing" I stared to blush. "Well...... you Know" i thought in my head.(man i,m so in barest) then renamon walked towords me and hugged me. " Jordon there is nothing to be in barest about, i know you can sing good" "I do" "yes you do Jordon" after she said that i gave her a hug. "thank you Renamon i needed that" then we broke up the hug. "so jordon what do you wont to do to day" "well how about we go to the park since there won't be that many people there" " Ok jordon lets go to the park" then i got on renamons back and she teleported us to the park. "i,m never to to get used to that" i said. then i got off renamon then she started to laugh" whats so funny" "your hear is all messed up" i fixed my hear. "renamon do you wont to walk with me" "of course jordon" then me and her started to walk then i decide to do some thing gusty i put my hand in to hers. renamon looked down and saw my hand holding hers she just smiled at me and i smiled back at her both of us was blushing. "ah.... isn't that sweet" "ho said that" i said. then we looked up and saw a digimon "ho is that renamon" "oh.... that's impmon" " long time no see fox face" "he calls you fox face" "yah is a thing he keeps calling me, lets just go jordon" "Ok renamon" we shared to walk away " HAY COME BAKE HERE well it looks like i have to teach lover boy some manners BADDA-BOOM" when i turned around i saw fire balls heading my way. the fire balls hit me but i was not burned. "Jordon you are not burned" i look at my arms and in amazement i was not burned. "well renamon do you wont to see my power" "POWER WHAT POWER" impmon said. i lifted up my hand "THIS POWER........ ENERGY BLAST! a ball of energy came out of my hand and hit impmon. impmon fell out of the tree" that hurt"impmon said " WOW jordon that was amazing" "i tolled you i have powers" then me and renamon started to walk away. " I WILL GET YOU BACK FOR THIS HUMAN". after that i got hungry "renamon are you hungry" "No I'm not" then i herd a big growl that came from renamons stomach. i looked at her and started to laugh." ha.....ha......will it sounds like you are hungry renamon" "ha... i guess i am" so i got renamon and me something to eat. after renamon and me got done eating we decided to go in the woods inside the park so no one could see us. "look renamon.. flowers,they are beautiful just like you are" "oh...Jordon that is the sweatiest thing anyone has ever said to me" right when i said that renamon kissed me on the lips. when she kissed me it felt like i was kissing a angel that came down from heaven. when we broke up the kiss i was overwhelmed of joy i did not here renamon calling my name " JORDON YOU ARE FLYING" I finally broke out of my trance. "WHAT I'm FLYING" i looked down and saw renamon on the ground. "YA.....HOO I,M FLYING" i did some spins and some bake flips. "RENAMON I,M FLYING" then i decided to land right beside her. "Jordon how did you do that" "i don,t know renamon i think when you kissed me it released some of my power" then me and renamon noticed that the park was staring to get packed. "Jordon i think it is time to go" "your right renamon we better go but instead of me getting on your back how a bout you get on mine" "really jordon" yep, in stead of you carrying me i will carry you... so hop on renamon. so renamon got on my back "are you ready renamon" "yes" "ok hold on tight" then i lifted up from the ground and we was off. " this is amazing jordon" " i know i,m still amazed about it" me and renamon was enjoying are time flying together " "Jordon we better get back before rika renters back home" "Right..... i do not wont her to yell at you a gene" so i flu start at rikas house to drop renamon off. i landed in the back yard and renamon got off of me. "Thank you jordon for the time that you spent with me" i started to blush " you are welcome renamon i like spending time with you" "well i better go before rika sees me" but before i could renamon garbed me and kissed me on the lips. but this time i kissed her back. but then i heard rikas voice "grandmother im home" we broke up the kiss. "I got to go renamon i see you tomorrow" then i flu off. after i left rikas house i had to hurry back to takatos place so i booked it. when i got there takato was not at the house wet. when takato walked in he tolled me that i am able to go down stares now because he talked to his parents about me. " so... takato can i see your digimon now" Ok but we have to see henry first" "Ok" so me and takato left his house to go see henry. when me and takato got to henrys house takato knocked on the door then a boy with blue hear and a orange vest answered the door. "Hi henry "hi takato.. ho is that with you" "hi i,m jordon nice to met you" "so henry to you have a digimon to" henry looked at me in shock. "how... do you" " I will explain everything latter to you" then henry went back in his house and got a green rabbit that had a horn on top of its head. "what is that" i said "this is terriermon" "your digimon" i gave henry a weird look then i looked at terriermon. What are you looking at... have you seen a talking bunny before" terriermon said. "hay calm down little fella... man henry you have a frisky digimon "yes i do" "Hay momentai henry" after that i explained everything to henry while we was walking in the park. then takato lead us to a big building in the park. "Tokato is this where you keep you digimon" Yea" then we went in side the building when takato got knocked down by something. "guilmon get off of me" "takatomon your here did you bring food" "wow takato that is you digimon it looks like a red dragon" "yep guilmon i wont you to meet jordon" Nice to meet you guilmon" i said. "a new friend" then guilmon stared to run after me and almost jumped on me but i just moved out of the way. then guilmon and terriermon both stared to act weird "what is wrong with them" i said. They since a digimon" henry said. then guilmon took off and we chased after him. guilmon lead us to a baseball filed and when we intrude the fog i saw rika and renamon already there. "IT,S ABOUT TIME YOU GOT HERE AND WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE" rika said. i,m here because you might need my help i said. then rika stared to laugh."HA HA HA YOUR HELP WE DON,T " but rika was cut off becouse of the arriving digimon. "What is that thing" i said. "that is myotismon a ultimate level digimon" henry said. HAAAAAAA I,M FINELY FREE FROM THE DIGITAL WORLD" myotismon said. "came on guys lets go" takato said. every one attacked at the same time."PYROSPHERE" guilmon said."BUNNY BLAST" terriermon said. "DIAMOND STORM" renamon said. there attacks hit myotismon but it had no effect. "HA IS THAT ALL YOU GOT...... CRIMSON LIGHTNING" his attacks knocked down everyone. "RENAMON STOP KIDDING AROUND AND FINISH HIM" rika said. but mayotismon herd raka and decided to attack her." GRISLY WING" then i saw a beam go start for rika. " RIKA WATCH OUT" henry said.then i flu right in front of rika and garbed her and spun her around so i could take the blast. i screamed in pane when the blast hit me. after the smock cleared by back was scared. takato and henry looked in amazement on what i have done. "why..... why did you save me?" rika said "i.... i saved you because you are a friend of renamon and a friend of renamon is a friend of mine. "you guys i think it is time to finish this" i said " Right" all tamers "DIGI MODIFY.......DIGIVOLUTION ACTIVATE" "GUILMON DIGIVOLVE TO GROWLMON" "TERRIERMON DIGIVOLVE TO GARGOMON" " RENAMON DIGIVOLVE TO KYUBIMON" growlmon looked like a dragon that had white hear gargomon looked like a big rabbit that had guns as hands. and kyubimon looked like a fox that had nine tails and she was still yellow. "wow renamon looks great" i said " come on guys lets finish this" kyubimon said. "PYRO BLASTER" growlmon said. "GARGO LASER" gargomon said "DRAGON WHEEL" kyubimon said. with there attacks they where able to defeat mayotismon. after that... the fog cleared and the digimon d digivolve back into there normal self's renamon came running at me. "rika.... jordon are you two all right" "yea renamon we are all right" "Oh my god jordon your back" renamon said "i will be fine it is just a scratch... do not worry renamon. then renamon hugged me. "I,m just glad that you and rika are alright" "you where amazing out there renamon" "oh.. Thank you jordon" "oh give me a brake" rika said. "Jordon" "yes rika" " i wont to.....to thank....y...you for saving me and i.m sorry for what i said to you yesterday" "its ok rika i forgive you" "you....you do" "yes rika i do" " i tell you what how about we all go to the mall tomorrow" "everyone" takato said" "yes everyone even the digimon" "but jordon" "do not worry takato all we have to do is just say that are friends lost a bet" "you know what that might work" takato said "what time should we be at the mall" rika said. "hmmm how about 11:30" i said "that sounds great"renamon said "well you guys we better head back home" "Yah you are right henry" i said "come on terriermon lets go home" then henry left. "we better go to renamon" rika said "bye renamon i see you tomorrow" i said "bye jordon" then rika and renamon left. "come on jordon we better go to" tokato said" "Ok" then me and takato started to walk back to his place when we got there me and him went to sleep.
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when i woke up it was 9:00 so i decided to take a shower when i go out i noticed that by scars on by back were gone. when i walked out takato was still sleeping "TAKATO WAKE UP.. WE ARE GOING TO BE LATE" takato finally woke up " are you ready to go takato" "yea we just need to get guilmon" takato said then i looked at the clock and it was 10:30 "man we are going to be late if we walk" "takato get on my back we are going to fly there" "Ok" we left the house and went to pick up guilmon. when we did i flu straight for the mall. when we got there every one was there. "what toke you to so long" rika said " "sorry i had to wake up sleepy head because he did not wont to get up" i said "well are we ready to go" henry said then we all went inside the mall. no one noticed that there were digimon at the mall. "see i told you this wood work" i said. then we started to walk around "Look you guys" henry said as he pointed at a poster. it said talent show in three days all is welcome it will be held in side the mall grand prize of $ 3,000. "wow Jordon you should enter that" renamon said "you know what renamon i will enter that talent show" "what are you going to do" renamon said "that i,m not going to tell.... you are going to find out for your self and do not read my mind ok renamon" "ok jordon" then we decide to look in side some stores " renamon do you wont to look at some jewelry with me" rika said " "ok rika" rika and renamon went inside the jewelry store. then i decided that the rest of us will look at swords. " wow renamon look at this" rika was pointing at some yin yang necklaces " that nice but look at this" renamon said. renamon pointed at a R shape necklace that looked like a yin yang and it was covered in diamonds and had a blue sapphire in the middle of the R. "Yah look at the price $600 then they left the store to look for us. "come one we better find rika and renamon" i said. then we found renamon and rika. then i decided to go with rika and renamon went with the others. rika grabed my hand and dragged me " rika where are you taking me" "you see" then we where inside a jewelry store "why did you dragged me in here" i said. "because renamon was looking at this" then rika pointed at the R shape necklace. "wow $600... i do not have the money for it but if i win the talent show i could buy it for her" "jordon what are you going to do at the talent show?" " ok if tell you.. do you promise not to tell renamon" "i promise" "ok then.. i am going to sing a song for renamon" "jordon i think that would be the sweetest thing that you do for her" rika said. then we lift the jewelry store to look for the others. it took us a few minutes but we finally found them "what is wrong with you two" i said. takato and henry looked like they where out of breath" " man rika how can you keep up with renamon she was going through stuff like crazy and we could not keep up" takato said. me and rika looked at each other and started to laugh. after that we decided to leave the mall and head home. when me and takato go to his house takato passed out on his bed. i was still up so i decided to go look out the window. "man the moon i beautiful out tonight i wish renamon was here to see this" then renamon poped out of no where. "Hi jordon" "renamon what are you doing here" "well i,m here to give you this" then renamon pulled out a yin yang necklace that had her taoism symbol on it "is that necklace for me" yes it is.. i only give this necklace to a special person that i like. then renamon put the necklace around my neck. "it fits.. thank you renamon" then i gave renamon a hug. then i decided to let out my feelings "Renamon" "yes Jordon" "Renamon ever since i met you i had strong fillings about you and i just wont to say that I.....I.....I Love you" renamon just looked at me and said "I Love You to Jordon" then me and renamon kissed under the moon light. I never felt this happy in my entire life i was alone until renamon came into my life. after that me and renamon just looked up at the stars. "renamon you better had home its starting to get late" "no i do not wont to go home i wont to stay here with you" "but renamon what about rika?" "what about her" "renamon did you and rika get into a fight?" then renamon started to cry. then i held renamon close "it ok renamon i,m here you two just need some space" renamon stoped crying "thank you jordon" " renamon i will do any thing for you no matter what" then renamon hugged me and kissed me. "come on renamon lets get some sleep we can talk about it more in the morning" "ok jordon" then we got on the top bunk trying not to wake up takato then me and renamon cuddled "i never realized how soft your fur is renamon and i do not need a blanket to keep worm because i have you" "Oh........ Jordon I love you" " and i love you two renamon" then me and renamon kissed and fell a sleep. when i woke up renamon was staring at me. "morning renamon" "morning jordon did you know you look so cute when you sleep" i blushed "well thank you" then me and renamon got out of bed i looked and takato was still sleeping. "jordon lets go somewhere so we do not wake up takato" "ok renamon where do you wont to go?" "lets go to the park" "ok renamon.... get on my back we are flying there" then renamon got on my back and we were off to the park but before we did we both got hungry. after that we went in side the woods in the park so we could talk. "renamon why did you and rika get into a fight" "well jordon she got jellies" "jellies...of what "you and me" "but why" because she never had a true friend but me" "what... you mean all the things that happened yesterday she still can not trust me" renamon slowly shirk her head. i was shocked " i can believe she can,t trust me" "do not worry jordon you will win back her trust" then i looked at renamon "i hope so renamon"the sun was going down "well renamon we better start heading back" "OK....."then renamon started to act strange "renamon what,s wrong" "it,s rika she is in danger" "let go.. lead the way renamon" i said then me and renamon left the park and was on top of a building "she is in there" "DIAMOND STORM" "ENERGY BLAST" with are combined attacks we broke the ceiling and left a big hole. when we jumped down i saw that henry and takato was already here "Look rika it renamon and jordon" takato said "ren....renamon and jor...jordon "RIKA" both me and renamon said. "henry what is that thing" i said "that is icedevimon" henry said " "jordon let me handle this" renamon said "ok please be carful" "well what do we have here.... look rika your digimon is here to save you" icedevimon said. "you let go of rika" i said "ha how about you come and make me.. human" then i quickly flu at icedevimon and snatched rika right of his hands then i lad her down "renamon finish him off i got rika" "DIAMOND STORM" renamon,s attack hit icedevimon but had no effect. "is that the best you got let me show you what a real attack looks like FROZEN CLAW" icedevimon said. then his attack hit renamon three times and she went falling down to the floor. "RENAMON" i said. "Look rika your digimon is weak" icedevimon said."THAT IS ENOUGH... I WILL NO LONGER LET YOU HURT RIKA,RENAMON OR ANY OTHER OF MY FRIENDS"i said. after i said that rika finally snapped out of it "RENAMON.......JORDON" then i got in front of everyone and said "KA..ME.. HA.. ME its all over for you HAAAAAA" then a blue beam came out of my hands and hit icedevimon."No i can not be defeated by a human" then icedevimon was deleted. after that i ran tor words renamon "renamon are you alright" "i,m fine jordon" then i helped renamon up. "jordon you did it you defeated icedevimon" henry said "how did you do that" takato said "i don't know.... i guess every time one of you or renamon gets hurt my power explodes" then renamon walks tor words rika. "rika are you alright" "renamon i sorry for what i said to you yesterday" rika said. "you should not be apologizing to me you should apologize to jordon because with out him you or any of us would not be here right now" rika head slowly went down "Jordon" "yes renamon" "rika needs to tell you something" renamon said then i walked tor words rika "yes rika what is it" "jordon i,m sorry for not trusting you and i hope i did not cause you any pain" "no rika i,m just glad that you are safe" i said "well you guys we better head back home" takato said " you guys go on ahead i,m going to take rika and renamon back home" after that henry and takato headed home. "are you two ready to go back home" i said. "yes we are" rika said "then you two get on my back" so both rika and renamon got on by back. "rika i hope you like to fly" then we were up in the sky " wow jordon every thing looks amazing" rika said. then we landed at rika house. "so rika how did you like it" i said "it was great jordon" "well i better go.. good bye rika..... bye renamon i see you tomorrow" then i gave renamon a kiss good bye and i went to tokatos place and fell a sleep.
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when i woke up i decided to take a shower. after that i figured i only have one more day until the talent show so i decided to play the guitar for a little bit. after a few hours playing the guitar i decided to see what rika and renamon are up to so i flu out of takatos window and headed straight for rikas house.when i landed i walked straight to the back yard."rika,renamon" i said . then i heard someone crying. when i finally got to the back yard i saw renamon sitting on a tree and crying so i flu up and sat right beside her. "renamon what is wrong" renamon just looked at me and looked away. "renamon please tell me what i wrong" "i...i... ha..had a dream that...i died and you died with me" then renamon started to cry even more. then i held renamon tight and said "renamon i promise you that i will protect you with my life and i will not let that happen" "you will" "yes renamon i will protect you with all my power" then renamon gave me a long deep kiss. then me and renamon heard someone came out of the house it was rika "jordon what are you doing here" then i picked renamon up and flu both of us to the ground " i,m here just to see how you two are doing" "jordon how wood you like to go out to eat with me and renamon" i looked at her i shock "that sounds great rika but do you think we can get in with renamon because they may mistaken her as a pet" "don,t worry jordon i got it covered" "do i have to where fancy clothes" i said "no you don,t" rika said "so how are we going to get there are you two getting on my back" "no jordon we are going to take this" rika pointed at a white limo. my jaw dropped "how did you pay for that" i said " oh that's easy my mom is a modal" rika said "wow that's cool" i said "well jordon and renamon are you two ready to go" we both said "yes" well then lets go" rika said. then all three of us entered the limo when we entered the limo i saw i big grin on rika,s face "ah... renamon what is wrong with rika she is grinning" "i don,t know jordon" then we arrived at the restaurant when we walked in... it was fancy "hello rika your table for three is ready" "thank you" then we sat down i sat next to renamon "rika i never been in a fancy restaurant before" i said " well this i my way in saying thank you for what you did yesterday" we ordered are food" "man that was good i never had food like that before" then i saw rika grinning" then me and renamon heard dancing music. "ladies and gentlemen it is time for are dancing duet Jordon and renamon" i was shocked with fear. "come on jordon this is going to be fun" renamon said then renamon grabbed me and pulled me out on the dance floor " i don't know about this renamon i never danced in my life" "let me show you then.. grab my hand jordon" so i grabbed her hand "good now put your other hand around my wast" so i did then we started to dance and dance then i decided to shake things up a bit i spun renamon around and then we started to dance like in the move the mask of zorro. then the music stopped everyone was clapping there hands "wow that was amazing jordon where did you learn how to dance like that" " i don,t know i guise it was instinct" "lets here it for renamon and jordon ladies and gentlemen" then we sat back down " rika did you plan this" i said "yes i did" "well you know renamon tomorrow is the talent show" i said "that right it is... please tell me what you are doing" she said "nope you are going to see what i,m doing tomorrow" then all three of us was talking for a little bit" "well we better go because you need to be ready for tomorrow jordon" rika said. then we got in the limo and headed to takato,s place. "thank you rika for what you did" i said " hay don,t min shin it" "bye Jordon" renamon said " bye renamon i will see you at the talent show" then i kissed renamon. after that i played a little longer with my guitar and went to sleep.
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when i woke up i got in the shower. after that takato woke up. "jordon are you ready for the talent show" takato said " you bet i am" then it was time to go so i grabbed my guitar and takato got on by back and we where off to the mall. when we got there our friends where not there wet "takato you stay out here and i will go and apply for the talent show" "ok jordon" when i went inside i saw about five people in line to apply for the talent show. finally it was my tern "name" "Jordon" "talent" i,m going to sing and play the guitar" "Ok you have a half and hour until you are on" "ok that gave me enough time to go to the jewelry story" i said when i got in the story i saw that the R shaped necklace was still there. "i still have ten more minutes until i go on... i have to find the others" "TAKATO where are you" "over hear jordon" then i saw that everyone was here "good you guys made it" i said "hay jordon we wood not miss this" henry said " "renamon i wont you to be in the front when i am on" "Ok jordon i will" "calling final contestant your about up" " i got to go wish me luck" but before i left renamon gave me a kiss "good luck jordon" then i went back stage. "ladies and gentlemen it is time for are last contestant jordon" i walked out with my guitar and saw renamon in the front so i winked at her she blushed a little when i did that "hello this song i,m about to sing is dedicated to someone that i love so vary much" i stared to play...............................I'm desperate for changing......Starving for truth.....I'm closer to where I started.....I'm chasing after you....I'm falling even more in love with you..Letting go of all I've held onto..I'm standing here until you make me move..I'm hanging by a moment here with you ...................................Forgetting all I'm lacking...Completely incomplete...I'll take your invitation...You take all of me now...I'm falling even more in love with you.Letting go of all I've held onto.I'm standing here until you make me move.I'm hanging by a moment here with you...I'm living for the only thing I know...I'm running and not quite sure where to go...And I don't know what I'm diving into...Just hanging by a moment here with you..There's nothing else to lose.....There's nothing else to find.....There's nothing in the world.....That can change my mind.....There is nothing else.....There is nothing else.....There is nothing else.................................................................I'm desperate for changing...I'm starving for truth...I'm closer to where I started...I'm chasing after you.........................I'm falling even more in love with you.Letting go of all I've held onto.I'm standing here until you make me move.I'm hanging by a moment here with you...I'm living for the only thing I know...I'm running and not quite sure where to go...And I don't know what I'm diving into...Just hanging by a moment here with you....Just hanging by a moment.....Hanging by a moment.....Hanging by a moment....Hanging by a moment here with you....................i stoped playing. then renamon got on stage crying.she knocked me down.. and kissed me like crazy "Oh Jordon I Love You, I Love You, I Love You," "I Love you to Renamon" "Lets here it for Jordon" everyone was clapping there hands "remember ladies and gentlemen you need to vote for the person ho has the best talent and we will tell you the winner shortly" then i saw the hole gang run at me and renamon "wow jordon that was amazing i didn't know you can sing that good" rika said. "and the way you played the guitar it was great" henry said "well thanks you guys it means a lot" i said. "come on you guys we better vote to" takato said and they where off to vote but renamon stayed with me "Renamon are you going to vote" "yes but i wont to tell you something first" "what is it" i said "no mater what if you win or lose i will always love you Jordon" "ren... renamon" thin i kissed her "well i better vote" renamon said "ok i see you in a little bit" and she was off to vote. then everyone came back "man you wouldn't believe how many people are voting" takato said "ladies and gentlemen it is time to introduce our winners of the talent show 3rd place go's to matt" then renamon grabbed my hand "2nd place go's john" renamon held my hand even tighter " and the winner to the talent show and the $3000 is" everone was in dead silence "Jordon" I was in shock i didn't know i wood win. "Jordon you won" renamon said in excitement as she hugged me. "congratulations come on up and clam your prize" i went up on stage and clamed my $3000. "thank you all i could not have done this with out your help thank you" then every body clapped. then i got down and walked to rika "rika can you keep renamon with you wile i go get her that necklace" "yea" thank you rika i owe you one" then i entered the jewelry and bot renamon that R necklace. when i got back renamon saw me and came running at me but she stoped and gave me a long heard look "Jordon what do you have in that bag" "you are going to fined out latter" then she gave me a hug. "well are we ready to go home" takato said. "you guys go on a head me and renamon are going to the park. oh takato can you my guitar back to the house" i said "ok" takato said. then that others left to go home "come on renamon lets go to the park" "ok jordon" then renamon got on my back and we where off to the park. when we got to the park i landed in a meadow of flowers "wow jordon this place is beautiful" "Not as beautiful as you" i said. then renamon hugged me and gave me a deep kiss" oh i almost forgot" thin i pulled out a box and gave it to renamon "is this for me? what is it jordon" "open it" when she opened the box i saw tears go down her face "so do you like it" i said with a smile. "Jordon.......i don't like it i love it" renamon polled out the R shaped necklace. "jordon i can't believe you got this for me" then i looked in renamons blue eyes and said "renamon i wood do any thing for you no matter what" then i put the R shaped necklace around her neck. "its beautiful Jordon i love it" Then renamon hugged me and kissed me even deeper then ever before " I Love You Renamon" "I Love You to Jordon" then a digital filed popped up around us. "HA HA HA" "that laugh NO IT CAN'T BE" renamon said "renamon what is wrong" i said "Long time no see renamon" then a digimon came out of the fog. "FLAMEDRAMON" renamon said. "i see you still remember me" "renamon ho is that" i said "that is my enemy flamedramon when i was in the digitolworld i had to face him because he almost killed my family and i almost did not make it as will "lets finish this renamon i will kill you and load your data"flamedramon said "no i will not let you"i said " ho is that with you" flamedramon said "you leave him alone he's got nothing to do with this" renamon said " renamon don't worry about me i can handle this guy" "you got guts kid" flamedramon said. then i charged at flamedramon but i missed "what" he was right behind me "you missed" then he kicked me in the gut and i went flying in to a tree. "JORDON" renamon yelled "ha that kid was no challenge" "ENERGY BLAST" and a ball of energy hit flamedramon "what was that" flamedramon said. then he saw me charge at him this time i hit him in the face and sent him flying in to a tree "hows that for a challenge" i said he wiped his face off "not bad kid but i know your weakness FIRE ROCKETS" and i saw flames shot out off his hand but he wasn't aiming for me he was aiming at renamon "RENAMON LOOK OUT" then i flu in front of renamon and took the hit head on. HA HA HA it is over.....WHAT" when the smoke cleared i was badly scared. his blast annulated my shirt completely off but renamons necklace that she gave me was untouched. "BUT HOW.......you are not human" flamedramon said. "jordon you saved me" "as i... said to you renamon i will protect you no...mater what. then my anger inside me unleashed.( about time you play down with the sickness) "Y-YOU'RE NOT GONNA GET AWAY WITH THIS ....I JUST WON'T LET YOU I WON'T HAAAAAAA" "what" flamedramon said. "what is going on" renamon said then she noticed that my brown hear is started to stick up on its self. "I WON'T LET YOU GET AWAY WITH THIS HAAAA" "I PROMISED RENAMON THAT I WILL PROTECT HER AND THAT'S WHAT I AM GOING TO DO HAAAA" renamon was staring at me and she saw my hear change to blond and i was surrounded by yellow energy and my hazel eyes where green. renamon looked at me in fear "J....Jordon is that you" I looked at renamon "yes renamon it is me" then i looked at flamedramon. " I'm going to make you pay" "oh really do you think you can defeat me" flamdramon said "lets see and find out" i said. then i flu at him with great speed that he could not see me then i stoped right in front of him " ha do you think you can scare me" then flamedramon punched me in the face but i did not move. "WHAT how can this be hm well this will be a fight" he said "your just a beast with no conscience"i said "oh really lets just say that this beast will kill you and renamon" " I won't Let You" then i punched him in the face and kicked him in the gut then gave him a elbow to the back of the head. flamedramon went flying into the trees. then flamedramon charged at me and we started to fight i kicked him in the gut then i did a upper cut to his face and did a front flip kick to his head and he went flying to the ground with great force that it left a big hole where he landed then he got up " it time for you to die human" then flamedramon shot fire balls at me but i dodged them "what no one can dodge that why can't i hit you" i just smiled at him "you didn't say please" "what how dare you mock me fine please" then flamedramon shot his fire balls at me but i did not me.I took the hit and it did not even left a scratch. flamedramon looked at me in fear 'what are you" flamedramon said " I AM HOPE FOR ALL THAT IS GOOD, I'M THE PROTECTOR OF THE INNOCENT, I'M THE LIGHT IN THE DARKNESS, I AM TRUTH, ALLIE TO GOOD NIGHTMARE TO YOU" "no this can't be i will not let a human defeat me" "It's over Flamedramon" " How dare you say it is over to me the way i look at it it's over for YOU" "FIRE INFERNO" a blast of fire came at me. "HA HA HA I GOT HIM...............HE IS..................WHAT" when the smoke cleared i was not hurt at all. " you are going to pay for what you have done to renamon and her family. I put my hands together in front of me."its time to say good bye flamedramon" "WHAT" he said "FINAL FLASH" then a yellow beam came out of my hands and hit flamedramon. "NO THIS CAN'T BE NOOOOOO. then flamedramon was delated for good. "it is over" i said then i walked tor words renamon "renamon are you alright" "yes jordon im fine" "that good" "jordon i like the new look you look cute" then i blushed "thank you renamon" then all of a sudden i felt weak. "jordon are you alright" renamon said. then i passed out and i changed back to normal.
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when i woke up i was in rika's house and i was banged up. i leaned up "Ow man that hurts" i was holding by side then some one came in it was renamon. "hi renamon" renamon walked tor words me and sat down right beside me. " how are you filling jordon" i"m i little sore but ill manage" then renamon hit me in the arm vary heard" OW what was that for renamon" " THAT'S FOR BEING RECKLESS" then renamon grabbed my hand "and I'm glad that you did" then renamon gave me a kiss " oh good jordon you are up" i looked at the door and i saw rika" then rika ran at me and gave me a big hug " i herd what you did" "OW to tight let go rika you are hurting me" "oh sorry" " so jordon renamon told me what happened to you and that you changed your hear and your eyes as well" "that's true yes i did" "can you show me"rika said. "rika we need to let jordon rest first then he can show us" renamon said "yea your right" rika said " but what should we call jordon's new transformation" renamon said. we all started to think. "i got it how a bout we call it a super saiyan" i said. rika and renamon looked and me "super saiyan" rika said. "super saiyan that rings a bell jordon i like it" renamon said. then everyone's stomach started to growl. "ha ha it sounds like we are all hungry" i said. i tried to get up but i could not because renamon was holding me down."No jordon you need to rest i will get you something to eat" "thank you renamon" i said. then renamon walk out and got me something to eat when she came back she made me a sandwich "wow renamon this is good i never had a sandwich like this" renamon just smiled at me. after i got done eating i felt tired then i fell a sleep. when i woke up it was night now " man what time is it" i saw a clock it said 11:30. "i need to get up" so i tried to get up i had trouble getting up but i got up. i walked out side and looked up at the full moon it was beautiful. then i looked around to see if any one was out here no was out. "I think i will try to transform it to a super saiyan" and hour has passed "ah ah i almost had it what triggered me to become a super saiyan" i started to think then an image of renamon getting hurt pops in my head."NOOOOOOO" then i transformed into a super saiyan "what power i never know i could do this" i felt the energy flow threw my body it was amazing. "i wonder if i change back" then i did "that was cool" then i herd some one singing "do i hear someone singing" so i followed the sound and it lead me to the back yard when i turned at the corned and i saw renamon in a tree staring at the moon and singing. renamon started to sing " How do I.....Get through one night without you..If I had to live without you...What kind of life would that be?...Oh and I . I need you in my arms..Need you to hold...Your my world, my heart, my soul...If you ever leave...Baby you'd take away everything good in my Life.......And tell me now...How do I live without you...I wont to know...How do I breath without you...If you ever go...How do I ever, ever survive?...How do I..How do I..Oh how do I Live?.........Without you...There'd be no sun in my sky...There would be no love in my life..There would be no world left for me...And I...Baby I don't know what I would do...I would be lost if I lost you...If you ever leave...Baby you would take away everything real in My life........And tell me now...How do I live without you...I want to know....How do I breathe without you....If you ever go....How do I..How do I...Oh how do I live?......Please tell me baby..... How do I go on?....If you ever leave...Well baby you would take away everything....Need you with me...Baby don't you know your everything good in My life...............And tell me now...How do I live without you...I want to know...How do I breathe without you...If you ever go..How do I ever, ever survive?..How do I...How do I..Oh how do I live....How do I live without you...How do I live without you baby......How do I live..........." then i saw tears go down renamon's face. i walked up to renamon "that was beautiful renamon you never tolled me that you could sing" renamon fell out of the tree but i cote her. "Jordon you scared me how long have you been out here" "for a few hours now i was trying to transform in to a super saiyan and i did then i heard some one singing so i followed it and i saw you singing" renamon just looked at me " I tell you what renamon how about i teach you one of my moves tomorrow" "you will" "yea why not" "but jordon before you can to that you need to rest some more" "will you are going to need it to then" i said. we both stared to laugh " come on renamon lets get some sleep" so me and reanmon went in the room that i was staying in and we both fell asleep together.
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good luck on your story man
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if you won't to see some of my work just get on youtube and just type jordonedwards
Good Luck man
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thank you it took me a while to make them did i do a good job on them?
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so how is the story going
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well thats good man keep it up
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good tell me if you need help
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