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Bed-oO-Head [2010-11-06 19:31:24 +0000 UTC]

(writing this here since i can't write critique as i'm not a premium member)

First off, I'd like to say that it's a nice angle, fairly interesting as it seems the tracks are going off to nowhere

Here's two tips for making it even better:
~ If you had changed the angle a little bit (gone further down and maybe a little to one side), it'd probably be even more exciting, making the view even less "bland"
~ The coulors are a bit flat.. Maybe if you had changed them a little in brightness/contrast, they'd be even clearer and given the photo a bit more "life"

But still, it's a nice caption

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SeductiveElement In reply to Bed-oO-Head [2010-11-06 22:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I was actually playing around with different angles, seeing which I liked. This one just happened to catch my interest. And also, I'm still learning on the editing plane. I usually try several different versions, giving them each a different feel.. Always learning!

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Bed-oO-Head In reply to SeductiveElement [2010-11-06 22:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Nice :3
Experimenting is good.. ^^
It leaves room for improvements and such

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