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Published: 2011-04-05 00:58:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description
Everylittle
baby step
gets you
closer
to those doors
those windows
of opportunity.
The pathways
you must walk
may be hard,
or long,
or rocky or steep,
but well worth the while.
When you're down
there will
always be the ones
who will help you pick yourself up
and carry on.
Don't forget them,
they're there,
don't misuse them.
Try.
Comments: 5
Uwibutt [2011-04-07 02:46:12 +0000 UTC]
Fffff I'm so slow when it comes to commenting.
It's a small poem but it has a deep meaning.
I really like it.
Maybe because it's easy to relate to, too. And you were able to do it in so few words.
Good job. <3
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Seeshell In reply to Uwibutt [2011-04-07 21:18:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. x3
I'm not really pleased with the very end but...I suppose it's alright.
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Uwibutt In reply to Seeshell [2011-04-09 01:25:34 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. x3
And awww. It is alright. :'D Better than that.
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