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Published: 2012-01-07 16:38:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 43406; Favourites: 96; Downloads: 156
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EDIT: I wasn't originally going to end this chapter here, but I realized that the previous chapter had 12 pages as well.
I decided a while back that I would take a break from this fanmanga when I would be done with this chapter, so that's what I'm going to do.
"Wrong Time" is now officially on hold.
I don't know when it'll be back, could be a week, could be a month. What I do know is that, this time, I'll try to draw all of the chapter's pages before actually starting to upload them.
I hope you had fun reading it up til now, and uh... See you soon, I guess! ^^
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Well..Didn't see that one coming at all
Nice work fucking up the entire future Trunks!
To bad this is the only way Trunks could actually make his Dad proud I guess
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Oh no... At least Vegeta didn't shot him on the heart, so I think Kakarot will be alive. (though in real life he might die because the blast went through his lungs). btw, you should have put some exclamation marks on their expressions to indicate their shock. But you did an awesome job on this page, very nice drawings as usual.
This is one of my favorite pages (simply because Vegeta rocks here, ^_^" and I love your story. Keep up the good work! 
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I think their shock is pretty clear; adding exclamation marks would kind of cheapen the feeling I was going for.
Glad you like it! ^^
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yeah i knwo some earth-in-danger $#!+ is abotu to go ndown and they CLEARLY won;t let me tlak to you but let me PLEASE say someth--dammit why;d you die in th emiddle of being attacked?!? SERIOUSLY!?!?? :T
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senzu bean ...someone's not getting one(if I remember right)
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Krillin screwed up BAAAAAAD, he should not have distracted Goku... silly Krillin.
Loving this page and the storyline btw, awesome work as usual.
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Well, I guess anyone would panic if a huge guy in his underwear was hovering over them xD
Thank you! ^^
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lol wow trunks is probaly thinking "i screwed up everything!"
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I haven't caught anything before this panel, but GOD I'm loving this panel. 
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I'm finding hilarious that a panel where a character's getting shot could make your day xD
Thank you! ^^
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YES!!! lets see you save your self now kakarrot
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I just LOVE this page! Expecially the third panel, but it's all so dynamic and neat and expressive! Could stare at it for the next two hours *.*
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I'm really glad you like it! ^^
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Woh ! Trunks, t'as foutu un bazar sans prΓ©cΓ©dent !
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Bah il a rien fait, lΓ , le pauvre...
(Justement, tu me diras ^^)
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Oui aussi mais sa venue a mis un sacrΓ©e bazar
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Trunks is like, "Um... is this supposed to happen?"
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*jaw drops*
Kairi: Oh wow, didn't see that coming o-o''''
This is becoming....AWESOME!!! Though I'd have to guess that's what Trunk's WTF face looks like :3 *thinking* Oh oh! Maybe one of them beats Vegeta and Nappa and they go to Namek for the dragon balls to wish goku back? *thinks again* Then again how will he get his 100x gravity training to beat the Ginyu force and be enough to face Freeza *is now confuzled on the time change* @o@ My head....I'm not gonna think for now I'll just wait ^^''' *sits and waits for new black arrow to turn green* Don't worry I wont break it like the last one ^^''''
Kairi: =O Piccolo's alive? OMG HE'S ALIVE! *huggles Piccolo* X3
Piccolo: WTH, WHO ARE YOU?! H-HEY!! GET OFF!!! *trying to shove Kairi away*
*sweat drops* Goku just got shot and she's suffocating piccolo .-. .....Kairi if you keep smothering him, he'll really die |D and that's not the piccolo back at the dojo.
Kairi: Oh oops *drops him*
Piccolo: *head hits ground* Ow! Grrrrrr Darn Crazy Girl.
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What do you mean, "this is becoming awesome"? It was AWESOME from the START!!!
...Just kidding xD
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Lolz yeah it was awesome from the start but I never said it was awesome till now XD Sorry for that lolz *still staring at arrow*
Kairi: Sorry about that ^^''' my creator is just slow.
Hey |O
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oh la loose, goku doit pas mourir ici sinon c'est encore pire que dans le futur de trunks cette histoire 
encore bien surpris par les choix que tu fait ton scenario et bien plus travailler que la moyenne des fan manga de valeur sur dbz
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Ah mais c'est raconter une histoire qui m'intΓ©resse; les dessins sont le support de cette histoire, et pas l'inverse ^^
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effectivement lβhistoire et tres importante c'est comme certain mangaka qui dΓ©chire en dessin et qui sont nul pour l'histoire
juste pour savoir quel personnage et le plus facile et le plus difficile a dessiner pour toi
tu apporte un soin particulier a trunks en gΓ©nΓ©ral, c'ets mon resenti apres pour moi c'est le plus difficile a dessiner a cause de ses cheveux
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Trunks, Γ§a doit faire au moins 50 fois que je l'ai dessinΓ© depuis le dΓ©but du fanmanga, donc forcΓ©ment j'ai plus de facilitΓ© ^^
Le seul perso qui m'embΓͺte vraiment Γ dessiner, c'est Nappa ; la structure de son visage est particuliΓ¨re, il a de gros muscles partout, se balade en slip, bref la totale quoi xD
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ah oui nappa et ses muscles effectivement plus difficile de trunks
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Wow, three chapters in and Goku's already dead. That's a new record! (Or is it? He dies pretty early in DBZ doesn't he?) Unless of course he's NOT dead. Goku could potentially survive being shot through his ribs. And lungs. Also Vegeta holding his hand out like a gun makes my day. I was half expecting him to go: "Bang!" Still awesome. Trunks you've screwed everything up, and I hope you're pleased with yourself.
In other news, this is as fantastic as usual! I love their facial expressions in the last panels. The art is great as usual! It looks like it could be official Dragon Ball merchandise. They should be paying you for this stuff. You rock.
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Well Goku's not dead yet ^^
But yeah, he does die pretty often, doesn't he?
Thank you very much for your feedback! (:
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Oh good! He's not dead! Good for you, Goku, shrug that off like a boss. And the frequency of death in DBZ is really part of it's charm if you ask me. I'm so excited for the next page.
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Well when he faught piccolo he got a bigger whole in about the same place so im not counting him out yet!
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I wanted to comment on the other pages...but it was so exciting...I couldn't think of a comment.
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Well you did comment in the end xD
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Ouch <.< poor Goku.
And also poor Trunks xD, I guess he feels bad 'cause of the changes on the history XDD. Oh noes, what are you going to do Trunks? XD-
The drawings are amazing as always, it's so close to the dragon ball style.
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Funny thing is that I actually felt a little bad about it while drawing it ^^
Thank you for your feedback! (:
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Oehh...That's not the best turn of events....For Goku's team that is. I wonder what Nappa's doing while all this is playing out, If I were him I'd shot Krillin already. (No hating on Krillin though, I think he's hilarious XD) In how many pieces can you split a Senzu and still have it do it's job, cuz the way it looks now they'll need 4 pieces.
Awesomely drawn. Love the 3rd and 4th panel. I did have to look twice to see what was going on with Vejita's hands. It's not really that clear that he's forming a gun with them. I think that's cuz you can't see the other hand's index finger. Also, I can't get over how you cute you always draw Gohan 
Can't wait for the rest~!
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Oh you know Nappa, he's easily distracted x)
I believe the most they can get out of a single senzu is two pieces, but I guess that half a senzu wouldn't be enough to heal a heavy injury. I mean, the only time they split it, it was to heal Gohan and Krillin? They were both beaten up, but none of them was near death or anything.
Gohan is cute, isn't he? I love drawing that little guy ^^
Thank you for your feedback!
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well trunks you changed the timeline. now is about time to fix it before u get goku killed. and no its not his heart that was hit since the lungs are on the left side of the chest. still gonna hurt though.
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The heart is on the left side, the lungs are on the left and right ^^
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hey i didn't do well in anatomy.
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