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serialkidnapper β€” Commission (part 1) - A maiden in trouble

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Published: 2017-08-22 20:08:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 48607; Favourites: 257; Downloads: 150
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Description This is a commission for my friend MinexLaggante1 , based on his story "The chariot has stopped"
In the first scene our sweet protagonist Aurora is kidnapped by Shirke in my favorite way: a classic chloroformed rag on her pretty nose and mouth. She's so cute and beautiful. A perfect victim.
For all the details I advice you to read the 8th chapter of Force Maiden and to completely, I advice you to read the entire serie.Β 

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Comments: 10

BungleBing [2017-08-30 02:46:41 +0000 UTC]

This is a fantastic piece, and you've done a spectacular job of capturing ML's characters. FM is a fantastic series, and I'm glad to see it get the attention it deserves. I won't make a huge comment on this, but there's really no detail about this set that I DON'T love. Everything is perfect - Aurora's shock, the way she struggles, the way her eyes cross as the drug starts to affect her, the way Captain Shirke's arm is pressing her breasts up so appealingly in her uniform, and even Shirke herself, clad in tight pants and with an oh-so-serious face of her own. I just adore everything there is to be had here, and I honestly think this is one of your best series yet!

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serialkidnapper In reply to BungleBing [2017-09-09 01:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Bunglebing! You know I love the comments, expecially the huge ones!
I read the FM stories and I think that Aurora deserves our best treatment. So that's it! Chloroform on face and sweet dreams! I think that the luckiest one is Shrike, that can put to sleep our beautiful heroine, but we're lucky too, because we can enjoy the scene.
I think that the beautiful and innocent OCs must be more careful on those dangerous days...nobody knows if somebody's waiting on the dark with bad intentions...

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Czubrowski [2017-08-23 20:34:24 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic struggles!

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serialkidnapper In reply to Czubrowski [2017-08-24 23:53:49 +0000 UTC]

Poor Aurora tried to resist, but unfortunately she failed.
I'm so sorry for this.

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Czubrowski In reply to serialkidnapper [2017-08-25 05:11:25 +0000 UTC]

Don't be sorry, it's perfect happy ending (well, for us at least)

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serialkidnapper In reply to Czubrowski [2017-08-25 05:29:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm agreeΒ Β 

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Damselbinder [2017-08-22 20:23:23 +0000 UTC]

A perfect victim indeed! Love that third panel!

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serialkidnapper In reply to Damselbinder [2017-08-24 23:58:38 +0000 UTC]

The third panel where our poor heroine is slowly losing her senses and falling in a deep slumber? What could our little Aurora think about?
By the way, thanks for the comment. That's my favorite panel too.

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KnockHerOut In reply to Damselbinder [2017-08-23 16:54:09 +0000 UTC]

Same~

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serialkidnapper In reply to KnockHerOut [2017-08-25 00:00:44 +0000 UTC]

It's always beautiful when our little heroines can't keep their eyes open anymore...

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