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"Don't.""Don't?"
"Just...don't."
"Why not?"
A pause. Then, "not here."
"Why not?"
"Anyone could walk in and see--"
"Door's locked."
"That is not the point!"
"What's the point, then?"
"The point is don't-- not there--!"
"C'mon. Relax."
"I will not--!"
"You want it."
"I never said I did not I just said don't and not here and-- and-- ...oh..."
"Makes things different, don't it?"
"I...yes...just...you are positive the door is locked?"
"Yeah."
"Then don't--"
"Don't?"
"Don't stop."
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Comments: 13
plunger02 [2008-07-22 06:42:34 +0000 UTC]
holy cow i read this a while ago and i couldn't remember where!!! I FOUND IT!!! It's so simple but brilliant!
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serzero In reply to plunger02 [2008-07-22 12:57:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! It might have been on MediaMiner, I had an account there briefly. Thanks for reading!
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serzero In reply to NTLDR [2008-03-07 00:57:02 +0000 UTC]
Doesn't it, though? This was a burst of genius. Wish I could tap into that part of my brain -all- the time.
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Tessombra [2008-03-06 23:10:55 +0000 UTC]
Okay, part of me is thinking Ironhide and Ratchet, the other, Jazz and Prowl. That this evokes this sort of imagry states that this was very successful--at least for me.
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serzero In reply to Tessombra [2008-03-07 00:59:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad. It's amazing what you can do with just words sometimes, and no descriptions.
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