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Published: 2004-01-08 22:33:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 73; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 6
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Do you listen to yourself?Do you hear the wind?
Do you feel the heat?
Do you smell the smoke?
Do you see the flames?
Do you taste your fire?
It is consuming you
like the fool you are
Shows you the
empty shell
that you are now
Charred, black, crisp and brittle
You were offered another
You were given a light
But you threw it away
You took your chances
And look where you are now
Charred, black, crisp and brittle.
You looked up at the sky
Thrust out your arm
Extended a solitary finger
You live on your own
Thinking you're happy
But why are you burning up inside?
So damn charred, black, crisp and brittle.
Such a far cry from the lovely person that you once were
Such a damn shame...
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Comments: 7
soulpoet [2004-01-09 16:11:08 +0000 UTC]
how mind blowing. i love it. it sorts of expresses how i am feeling now. great work
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sethmath In reply to soulpoet [2004-01-09 16:23:04 +0000 UTC]
The thing is, I've never considered myself a writer.
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soulpoet In reply to sethmath [2004-01-10 14:02:10 +0000 UTC]
never? well you should cos you've got some pretty amazing work here
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sethmath In reply to soulpoet [2004-01-10 18:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Thats what people keep saying, but I think they're nuts. :-D
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