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seto749 β€” Epic Poem, Page Thirty-Nine [NSFW]
Published: 2014-01-01 00:40:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 303; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description "Though I felt some confusion and stirring of fear
I was guarding my purpose and keeping it clear,
And I felt it inside as I came drawing near
Until finally now I've caught up with you here;
Where I see that you've still been indulging your thirst
As you travel the land and keep spreading your worst,
Getting bolder with each town's decorum you burst
Without strong opposition - now I'll be the first;
And I'm telling you now that I'm also the last
Though your might has been strong and your influence vast,
But you can't do a thing once the die has been cast
And your barefooting days of foot tickling are past;

For although until now I've been losing the race
As I eagerly followed the path I could trace,
Now at last that we're finally in the same place
Come, good citizens - look at us both face to face;
For I'm sure you could have quite a beautiful town
Full of elegant life and respectful renown,
It would kill me inside if you let yourselves down
And submitted your sense to the lure of this clown;
I can just understand how he took you all in
With his silvery tongue and his beauty of sin,
And the fun of his path that he's had you begin
But you must now turn back or let decadence win;

For it isn't real freedom he's helped you to feel
But just deviant joy that you're letting him steal,
While you get a few laughs as you're part of the deal
Then he leaves you at sea, without anything real;
When you've laughed yourselves silly to give him a treat
And surrendered your love of the nice and the neat,
He'll ride off in the sunset, conversion complete
And then all you'll have left will be bare tickled feet;
Guard your proper behaviour, too precious to lose
Send this charlatan packing along with his ruse,
I beseech you for this is your moment to choose
Stop the foot-tickling now, and then PUT ON YOUR SHOES!!!"
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Comments: 7

King-Of-Feathers [2014-01-02 02:38:20 +0000 UTC]

yes !!! fantastic entryΒ 

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-01-03 16:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Glad you liked it, given that it was making the opposition case.


Have you come across the photo I mentioned yet?

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2014-01-04 05:24:24 +0000 UTC]

photo? Β  oh are you talking about the album cover thing yea i totally did . did i forget to reply to you in the notes about it my bad :/ but just so youu know i did see it ^_^

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-01-04 20:33:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you found it. It was not so easy to find anyone who was all that close to the right attitude.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2014-01-12 07:25:26 +0000 UTC]

i did take a little bit of searching i'll admit lolΒ 

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2014-01-13 03:21:06 +0000 UTC]

Well, if you had to take a bit of time searching for something, then at least you had a nice payoff at the end. I just got through the first third of the next page; DD has pulled out one shoelace.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2014-01-19 05:26:35 +0000 UTC]

yea your totally right about ^_^ Β i cant wait for there battle oh my gΒ 

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