seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2013-08-16 03:46:33 +0000 UTC]

I am delighted to have been able to oblige you. And I'm sure none of us, least of all BT himself, would ever want his feet off the hook permanently. Those big bare helpless tender tantalizingly ticklish dawggies were after all the first focus of attention in this story, and can't just leave the spotlight for good.

I hope I'd not be so cruel as to make postings monthly. I am about to sign off now for the night, but will see if I can post the next page tomorrow morning (if my internet isn't dodgy). And, as I said, I might be persuaded to accelerate if someone can think of something persuading.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2013-08-16 20:36:39 +0000 UTC]

HEHEHEHEH yea so true im more of a tickler then a ticklee but your story might just change my mind about that to i just cant believe how much control your story is having over me , you currently have complete control of my mind and am introducing me to new things there is something in your story that i do try to avoid though but seeing as i mentioned that i was straight you probably already know what that is huh ? lol but im not asking you to stop at all im sure gay tickle lovers are all enjoying it  and i'd hate if i swayed you in anyway i think you've been pretty modest with it to begin with so ticklers who don't see men that way aren't forced into liking it either way it doesn't really matter as there bulges haven't been a big focus and you've stuck to talking mostly about the torture upon the various big feet in the story.the only reason i bring it up is it what usually deters me from epic stories like yours as i become uncomfortable since most writers begin focusing more on the guys packages then there feet :/  then i get turned of. but i think your doing a great job catering to everyone im just so impressed. by the way you've been tickled before can you tell me more about that ? i think im starting to open up to the idea of letting some one humble like that.

i dont know what i'd do if you became one of those monthly writers :/  im so happy that your posting  so frequently dude im your NUMBER 1 FAN !!!!! i just cant wait for dd and his introduction especially his inevitable battle with bt which will surely be ended with them both  have been tickled silly by each other by the way have you already written about there battle and who comes out on top ? lol like i dont already know XD 

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2013-08-17 19:03:35 +0000 UTC]

As I assume you've read page 30 by now, I believe you'll see why I didn't say as much as I could have said before posting that page, as it was another flipper. Just when people might be thinking that the focus is about to leave all those big bare bodacious bold beckoning feet, something new is thrown into the mix. But, as you have already sensed from the summary, DD will be presenting to our good citizens a major challenge to their new favourite pastime. I hope you'll agree that I have armed them with powerful motivation to side with BT instead. Sorry to those who may have wanted the poem to go in another direction, but this is a foot-tickling poem and so it shall remain. But it doesn't mean I'd never give a little feint to one side or another. Gotta keep the readers on their toes, so to speak.

Now, for the bit I left out last time, I have been tickled quite frequently in my time, and I absolutely love it - and for its own sake, whether or not anything more happens, and it generally doesn't - not that I'd want it to 90% of the time anyway. There is a humbling element, I suppose, although perhaps not so much for me as for bigger guys who might find it a much more foreign concept to be under somebody else's control. I find it really liberating, as there are so many things we don't let ourselves do, or force ourselves to do, and being tickled can bring a great freedom from that sort of self.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2013-08-18 02:28:03 +0000 UTC]

yes i actually have and will be commenting on it soon i did really enjoy it and like how you introduce dd  at the end it was really awesome it left me in suspense  .that's what i love about your story on paper it seems simple but its actually quite interesting i see why you labeled it as a soap opera i find myself unable to wait for the next entry  you really have me hanging on to you every word man i really didn't expect the entrance to be so epic im replaying it in my head. i dont think you understand what a great writer you are . i can tell already that dd going to be a great adversary to the towns people and bt. and i know dd going to have a challenge against convincing the towns people to stop there tickling frenzy as bt has giving them a incredible gift i don't think dd has a snow ball chance in hell to convince bt and friends that tickling is anything more then harmless fun bt has been way to successful in convincing that that  is exactly what it is .yea i know some readers were probably hoping you'd take it to another level which is why i respect you so much you understand this is a tickling poem not some smut story it doesn't need to turn into some random porn i really appreciate that your trying to keep the story to its roots and that's why the story is kicking so much ass because its a tickling story through and through . but i understand that you wanna keep the readers on their toes no pun intended im sure lol but anyway because of that i respect any direction you take the story in as long as it doesn't stray to far from its roots.

wow thats awesome i myself have never tickled or been tickled by anyone which is why i probably fall under the ticklers view point as it seems like the more superior route  i've never wanted to be a ticklee to be controlled and dominated it seems a naturally feminine  position but im quite intrigued by it and nothing but your story has done that for me ive been watching tickling videos for years and not understanding why any man would offer up his ticklish tootsies to a merciless tickler i originally felt like maybe there arrogance is what made them agree to it but some would come back after being demolished why why would they do this i asked but after reading your story i realized it being humbled can be fun being dominated and made to laugh can actually be a liberating enjoyable experience. 

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2013-08-18 05:22:52 +0000 UTC]

Well, the idea behind my Master Plan throughout has been that almost anyone can write porn (and not many can write good porn), but how many really long poems manage to remain concentrated on foot tickling? I really liked that little cliff hanger - highly soaplike. We shall see if I can manage any other surprises, although I am starting to hope that I can get back to writing lots of new stuff on the other end, as otherwise you'll convince me to post it all very quickly and then I'll be under pressure to come up with new pages.

I actually only had through page 30 printed out (the poem is on my other computer, so that each new page posted has to be typed in fresh each time). Anyway, this evening I printed out and looked at pages 31-48. You may be pleased to learn that there is no longer cause in anything written so far for two different versions. Having served their artistic purpose, the bulges disappear (or at least are left to the reader's imagination), and not just because DD is much better at suppressing wantonness than Kellogg's Corn Flakes.

I am majorly impressed, I must admit, that my passion for something should manage to convey itself so well that it managed to pique your interest. Not that there's anything wrong with being 100% a tickler (or the reverse), but, now that the spark has finally ignited, I shall make so bold as to hope that your tender tingling ticklish tootsies do have the chance to experience a totally thorough thrilling tormenting tickle torture under your ideal circumstances, as your delectable dawgs deserve nothing less. I hope you'll get the chance at least once or twice to try it out and see if being tickled into forced laughter really is for you. It isn't for everybody, but far better for you to find out either way while you're young. There are people all over everywhere on the scale at an absolute end, towards one end or the other or very near the centre.

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2013-08-17 01:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Now that would be really interesting, if just my little epic poem could bring out the inner ticklee of someone who was much more tickler. That amazes me nearly as much as it must you. I'd hope it would feel in the end not so much being controlled as just finding the right way to see things to be able to find the fascination in them.

As you presumably noticed, I was doing a tame version of the poem for a few pages, rewriting the version that TF would most have enjoyed to cater to those who would prefer the story without the TF-style extra touch. That was why I put up the latest journal entry, to see if people wanted that little rewritten version continued. There's nothing wrong with having limitations on how deeply one interacts, and there is room for all sorts in the Honourable Society. One of the great things about MM tickling is that it somehow manages to encompass all sorts of incongruous looking tastes. I think it also provides maximum opportunity for interaction across orientation, all to the good.

In a way, I praise you for exemplifying the sort of freedom we want to bring about. You and people like you straddle the line between not being limited by orientation and not having to do away with it completely. There are straight guys who go farther than you do, and some who don't go so far; tickling can completely invert what ought to make sense. You yourself have done really well it would seem at being able to integrate your interests, which I sus[ect might have seemed highly contradictory and confusing at first.

One point on which I can reassure you is that this was called an Epic MM Foot Tickling Poem for a reason. You may have noted that orientation hasn't played any part in the story so far and I have no intention of letting it do so. I have no plans whatsoever for the tickling to wander away from anyone's feet, even to other "non-explicit" areas. Having gotten this many pages out of feet tickling alone, it would be a shame to dilute the effect now. As for the turn-on aspect, I don't want to say a lot about that before Page 30 is up; I think I'll post it now for your edification. I will mention, though, that I hope you'll agree that it was a fitting next step in the development of the story - their tickling frenzy builds, BT begs for more, they realize just why, and then they notice the same effect in themselves and their friends. You should have no difficulty in being able to imagine that quite a few of the townsmen named could well be just like you; I don't intend to contradict that impression.

I think I'll put up Page 30 now, and see what you think then.

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King-Of-Feathers In reply to seto749 [2013-08-18 02:01:11 +0000 UTC]

hehehehee im really surprised that you've manage to do this to me your really opening up my eyes your making me understand the joys of being a ticklee in all the other stories ive read it comes of as being the tickler is the better position as its superior but it seems like the ticklee has more fun humbling experiences dont always have to be bad experiences .

i think this was the perfect story to make me understand the view of the punished who enjoy there punishment

i notice that you do have different versions but i haven't paid much attention to which was which . can i assume the tf version is the less modest version ? i don't mind it at all but i really appreciate that you understand that people in the tickling community aren't all the same and that you go out of your way to try to please all of us i understand this most be a little tedious for you to have to write multiple versions so im fine with you going which ever version you like to right better i'll let my mind do all the censoring if it needs to hehehehe ^_^ but i don't think ill have to worry about that to much since you focus so much on tickling which is my favorite thing about your stories.

omg i freaking love you now lol  thanks so much for saying that it was wearied at first and for awhile i thought it was a either ither  situation i was so confused because so many ignorant people on the internet couldn't separate fetish and orientation and if you liked male tickling you had to be gay or a girl and that just wasn't the case with me i had convinced my self for a while that i was gay until one day i had a dude come onto me then i realized right then and there i wasn't gay no matter what anyone said i wasn't interested in men past there companionship and seeing there big bare feet being tickled silly. i wasnt gonna let anyone convince me other wise i would walk the thin line and i knew i most be a minority amongst the tickling community and most ticklers didnt feel the same way i did towards guy which made me feel kinda've ashamed wondering what was wrong with me the last thing i ever expected was to be praised in any form thanks so much buddy. 

this is why i love your poem so freaaaaaaaaakkkiiiinggg much its like speaking to me the whole time i was reading it i felt so involved but the minute you started mentioning bulges i was afraid the story was going to take a turn and that i was out of luck once again :/ but i also notice no matter how much times you mentioned it nothing had went pass that which i loved so much because i felt like there was a possibility that they might be like me that as much as they loved tickling as hard as it got them they didn't let that define there sexuality that they could be straight and be turned on by tickling simple as that which is why this story is so important to me its everything ive ever wanted in a story it focuses on feet tickling and feet tickling alone but it also manages to incorporate these cool elements in it i think your a real genius for managing to pull of such a addicting intriguing story of like this 

iv'e been searching for a story like this for years and for a understanding writer like you to ^_^ this story means allot to me 

and im  100% sure that any other tickling series i read after this will always be number 2 

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seto749 In reply to King-Of-Feathers [2013-08-18 04:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, the ticklers are certainly the ones in the position to exercise agency. They get to control most of the experience. But, as I mentioned in an earlier reply, they're the ones doing the work, as it were, which makes it a bit fuzzy. And some of us can take great pleasure in freedom from agency. Being tied and tickled is like a mini-vacation from voluntary choice in some ways. Both sides have their charms, and I can only hope that you have the opportunity to get experience of both and judge for yourself what speaks to you about being on either end of the feather.

I'm sorry you've had such a tough time with certain people who can't stretch their minds enough to be able to accommodate apparently conflicting ideas. It's long been my habit always to believe credible personal testimony as far as possible, and I've known or come across on line people with far more apparently contradictory constitutions than yours. I tentatively think of the general situation as being in this case two different orientations which may generally coincide but quite often don't. And good for everyone who manages to make it work and can be themselves without giving up one side of themselves just for consistency. There's nothing wrong with you, or with straight guys into MM tickling who don't go so far as you do, or who go farther (and quite a few do). It may mean you might have to be a little more careful to avoid hurting people unintentionally, but many other people are in such a situation for all sorts of reasons.

It's quite the revelation to see how something that started as a bit of a lark could speak so powerfully to someone, but you give a most eloquent account of yourself. You're very impressive. I'll admit to the authorial impulse to enjoy the thought of readers expecting the poem to take a turn into fapland only to catch them out at the end of page 30. It just reminds the reader not to take too much for granted. But I certainly didn't mean to depress anyone. As the heart of the entire narrative is pure love of feet tickling, I'm sure a portion of the town is just like you. One reason I'm keeping the tickling so focused is that tickling feet or having my feet tickled has always been a sure positive experience for me with all sorts of guys of all orientations and all levels of compatibility, so that for some that was the entire extent to which I'd want to interact while with a few select others maybe that was the beginning, but the foot tickling could be meaningful fun anywhere on the scale.

That is quite a compliment, though I shall only be pleased for you should you ever happen upon something that speaks to you more deeply. I wish you a life more out of the box than I've had.

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