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Setsuna-Sakurazaki In reply to SanitysMirror [2010-12-06 17:45:57 +0000 UTC]

It's one of my favorite F/A stories as well! I'm glad you liked the piece. I may be drawing them again soon since they definitely need more love.

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FlowersMustDie In reply to sonamyservice678 [2010-11-08 06:58:50 +0000 UTC]

The other girl is Adrian Andrews, from the second Phoenix Wright game. And yeah, Franziska's expression there is great. ^_^

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sonamyservice678 In reply to FlowersMustDie [2010-11-08 23:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Ohh thanks

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FlowersMustDie In reply to sonamyservice678 [2010-11-09 04:53:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem. ^^

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Setsuna-Sakurazaki In reply to SamCyberCat [2010-06-12 22:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

Yup, Franzika/Adrian and Mila/Lana are my faves. : D
Eheh, it's nice to see how the tables have turned.

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Setsuna-Sakurazaki In reply to Sushizuzoru [2010-05-31 02:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Aha, it's alright. Been busy with school and such? |D

Fufu, sure. My tablet's been iffy so my lineart isn't as great to me as before. I need a new tablet...bleh.

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Sushizuzoru In reply to Setsuna-Sakurazaki [2010-05-31 03:17:50 +0000 UTC]

Nah, I just finished, actually. I'm just still having a bit of trouble navagating with the new DA set-up. It's weird.

Well, it may just be the tablet here, but the lines aren't nearly as smooth as they should be, which I'm sure you already know. Like, Fran's shoulder is really kind of fucked up, but we'll get back to that.

With problems not related to the tablet, you still need to work on proportions and anatomy. Adrian's back shouldn't be so...slouched, I guess? Yes, she's leaning into Fran, but with the arm drawn the way it is, it wouldn't really bend that direction. As for the arm itself, the shoulder doesn't exactly curve that way, especially with the pose, and it should probably be a few inches higher, as well as wider. The stomach is also a bit small, but that may just be the angle. Seeing as we're focusing on the body right now, Fran is a bit off, too. With the way her head and shoulder are faced, the bow shoulder probably be a bit more off to the side, as well as the buttons. They should be more facing Adrian than anything else.

Face-wise, Adrian's ear and her jawline don't really line up like that should. The jaw's too far up - it should either be lined up with the curvature of the ear, or at least dip down a bit below it. Fran's slants too far in. She has a really strong chin, so it should jut out a bit more, rather than just sink into her neck. Her neck is a bit off, too. Don't slant it as much. Their hair is a bit off, too. Adrian's is just flat, really, far too dull, and a bit lumpy near the top, where her skull curves. It should probably be a bit smoother, and the hair trailing down her back should curve a bit more. Think of a snake here, I suppose. As for Fran, her hair is okay, but the bangs are a bit exaggerated, and the small portion above her eye is too far up. It leaves just a little too much skin showing, and should curve more, like Adrian's.

Other than that, you're all good, and despite the long critique, I do like it. <3

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Setsuna-Sakurazaki In reply to Sushizuzoru [2010-06-01 01:15:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thanks for the long critique once again. I'll do my best to improve. :3

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Sushizuzoru In reply to Setsuna-Sakurazaki [2010-06-01 01:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Welcome |D

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Setsuna-Sakurazaki In reply to ChoqueFrontal [2010-05-31 02:54:42 +0000 UTC]

Aha, yes. The blonde woman is Adrian Andrews.

Thank you.

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ChoqueFrontal In reply to Setsuna-Sakurazaki [2010-05-31 07:15:06 +0000 UTC]

okay xD I think I should keep on playing the game xDDD

you're welcome ^^

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