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SevenSpring — Distracted by-nc-nd

Published: 2011-06-22 07:39:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description She heard something calling her name, but she couldn't see who it was.

Originally, I wanted to draw in paper and just scan it, but then I realized I need to practice more with my digital drawing (which was terrible) :/ I am planning to go to art school next year, so I should keep trying for the best. wish me luck *crossingfingers*

Okay, what do you think about this ? Personally I found the mouth weird, but I don't know how to make it any better, so I just kept it that way and please don't ask about background. Too lazy to draw things other than the main subject
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Navio-Tantra [2011-06-22 13:17:57 +0000 UTC]

the Hair, the hair, the haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirrrrrrr, i'm on the hair of gloryyyy #salahlagu

rambutnya keren we~


for the rest, setuju sama bawah. hahaha

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SevenSpring In reply to Navio-Tantra [2011-06-22 16:14:06 +0000 UTC]

......... demam gaga nav ? ahahahaha stres loooo wkwkwk

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katcrunch [2011-06-22 13:05:43 +0000 UTC]

Well she definitely looks distracted And I'm loving the hair! It looks very soft and flowy. You do shading very well, too!

I don't know if you did this on purpose but she has no eyebrows 0:

I think her eyes could use a bit of toning down; in my opinion it's overly doll-like, and I think the white mouth makes it even more doll-like. If I were you I'd add some dark reddish colours for the inside of the mouth and a bit of tongue showing I think the shoulders are very odd too, as if it looks inflated

SO YEAH. KEEP PRACTICING MY LOVE! You've got a good start here :'D

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SevenSpring In reply to katcrunch [2011-06-22 16:13:44 +0000 UTC]

yep yep yep need hell lots of practice :/
eyebrows : forgotten
and also I think the eyes are misplaced. it should be a bit higher thanks anw

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