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Severflame β€” Mermaid Savior

Published: 2011-05-18 04:09:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 27581; Favourites: 178; Downloads: 434
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Description Lorianna's pearl clasp has been taken, and is wisked off to the bottom of the sea. Without it Lori only has a short time frame before she turns back to a human. Luckily, she knew of another mermaid that can help her retrieve it. It's none other than 's Mia.

Although Mia can dive down to retrieve it on her own, she won't be able to pinpoint it's location without Lori guiding her. Against her better judgement, Mia let's her new friend tag along.

It was a long swim down. Forty-five minutes have already passed. Even if they decided to turn back, Lorianna wouldn't make it. It's do or die time as the finally found the ocean floor.

Lorianna's connection with the pearl is getting stronger. It was coming from an underwater cavern. As the two mermaids swam in, they started to hear gurgling noises. It's possible that it was a creature of some sort set to guard the pearl. Once they reached the end. The girls found their suspicions to be right on the money.

"Lady Tempest has been waiting for you, Lorianna", the octopus said. It may looked like it was a non-sentient sea monster, but it was actually quite intelligent. Lori tries to cast one of her spells, but she was too low on mana. Afterwards, she started to gag a little, as her ear fins which allowed her to breathe had disappeared.

The octopus lunges for Lori, only to be confronted by her friend Mia. With trusty sword in hand, she swims in between the two of them. "If you want her, you'll have to go through me!", she said.

"That'll be fine. I was hungry anyway.", the eight legged monster replied.

Will Mia be able to get Lorianna's clasp from the tentacled tyrant?
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Comments: 43

Eatenmermaids [2016-02-18 21:13:55 +0000 UTC]

Zomglolz123456789 I agree

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KayceeFjord [2011-09-30 10:17:48 +0000 UTC]

I feel sorry for the squid. Unless it grabs Mia. Then I don't know what I'll feel.

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Severflame In reply to KayceeFjord [2011-09-30 14:27:03 +0000 UTC]



Well, I'm glad ya feel something. Thanks.

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Zomglolz123456789 [2011-08-11 10:41:08 +0000 UTC]

I hope Mia gets grabbed

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Severflame In reply to Zomglolz123456789 [2011-08-13 14:00:23 +0000 UTC]

I doubt it. She's good with a sword.

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CSmith12 [2011-07-04 00:37:30 +0000 UTC]

wtf, man?

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Severflame In reply to CSmith12 [2011-07-04 02:23:32 +0000 UTC]

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Kaiden-Zeos [2011-06-04 20:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for favin this one way too many times. It's almost as if you just post this pic but in actuality it's been over a week now hasn't it.

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Severflame In reply to Kaiden-Zeos [2011-06-05 06:57:00 +0000 UTC]

LOL!

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Kaiden-Zeos In reply to Severflame [2011-06-08 22:48:51 +0000 UTC]

I know!!! I'm still not tired of this one yet!!!

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Kaiden-Zeos [2011-05-26 14:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Only an elite few ever make it into the Faves List Folder. This piece is only one of the elite few. I guess why you saved it for last eh?

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Severflame In reply to Kaiden-Zeos [2011-05-26 20:28:14 +0000 UTC]

LOL! I'm glad I made it.

Thanks.

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Kaiden-Zeos In reply to Severflame [2011-06-04 20:19:16 +0000 UTC]

vielen dank(many thanks.).

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D0minatus [2011-05-18 23:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Nous saurons la suite au prochain Γ©pisode.
lol.

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Severflame In reply to D0minatus [2011-05-19 05:13:23 +0000 UTC]

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D0minatus In reply to Severflame [2011-05-19 23:57:37 +0000 UTC]

De rien.

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UWfan-Tomson [2011-05-18 20:53:39 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

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Severflame In reply to UWfan-Tomson [2011-05-19 05:13:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man.

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Technomaru [2011-05-18 18:08:16 +0000 UTC]

nice mermaid story (likes mystical creatures) but was Lorianna born a human or a mermaid?

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Severflame In reply to Technomaru [2011-05-18 18:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Human.

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BiohazardToxic [2011-05-18 15:30:15 +0000 UTC]

omg hurry before she drown but let us see her first as human xD

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Severflame In reply to BiohazardToxic [2011-05-18 17:15:22 +0000 UTC]

You... probably don't want to see her human state. To most people, she's not that attractive (flat-chested, stick figure, thick glasses, the total nerd package.)

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Howiezowie In reply to Severflame [2011-06-28 20:52:09 +0000 UTC]

Show us, anyway!

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BiohazardToxic In reply to Severflame [2011-05-18 17:22:05 +0000 UTC]

ok D:

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Branded-Curse [2011-05-18 15:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh noes! Give her back her necklace

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Severflame In reply to Branded-Curse [2011-05-18 17:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Octopus: No.

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Branded-Curse In reply to Severflame [2011-05-19 09:32:13 +0000 UTC]

Bad Octopus!

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Severflame In reply to Branded-Curse [2011-05-20 12:51:24 +0000 UTC]

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Aya-Wavedancer [2011-05-18 07:07:19 +0000 UTC]

That last line that the octopus says would likely be said by a Sea-Elf.

Though it must be said that I don;t eat celephapods unless I'm starving. O.o

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Severflame In reply to Aya-Wavedancer [2011-05-18 17:13:15 +0000 UTC]

That's a pretty harsh life for a Sea-Elf. Well, I'm sure that the little ones shouldn't be a challenge. But something like a Colossal Squid would probably pose a threat.

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Aya-Wavedancer In reply to Severflame [2011-05-18 17:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Well, Krakens are highly dangerous! But I think this one looks to be a rather tiny one!

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Severflame In reply to Aya-Wavedancer [2011-05-18 17:19:34 +0000 UTC]

True, but this one is definitely smarter than your average kraken.

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Aya-Wavedancer In reply to Severflame [2011-05-19 07:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, most of them just swing away. No time for any meaningful Villain conversations.

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Severflame In reply to Aya-Wavedancer [2011-05-20 12:51:45 +0000 UTC]

LOL! I'm sure of it.

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Aqua311 [2011-05-18 04:47:52 +0000 UTC]

Crap. I'm having one of those moments where I'm conflicted about how I want this to turn out...

Mia's cute.

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Severflame In reply to Aqua311 [2011-05-18 04:59:09 +0000 UTC]

Too many scenarios runnin through your head, huh? I be like that sometimes too.

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Aqua311 In reply to Severflame [2011-05-18 12:55:03 +0000 UTC]

No, I'm torn between wanting the girl to drown and hoping she gets saved...

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RIP-Blue-Galewind [2011-05-18 04:41:02 +0000 UTC]

This is not only an excellent story you wrote, but I was blown away by how you captured this really well.

It is very beautiful work. I can't thank you enough.

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Severflame In reply to RIP-Blue-Galewind [2011-05-18 04:45:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm happy to be of service.

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RIP-Blue-Galewind In reply to Severflame [2011-05-18 04:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, you outdone yourself.


Seriously, many thanks.

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KazeSolarFlare [2011-05-18 04:29:22 +0000 UTC]

Now this is one story I would read on DA.

Pretty awesome job on the commission overall.

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Severflame In reply to KazeSolarFlare [2011-05-18 04:46:01 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it, Kaze. Thanks.

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KazeSolarFlare In reply to Severflame [2011-05-18 05:08:20 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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