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Published: 2011-04-26 13:56:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 10152; Favourites: 58; Downloads: 415
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She was in deep troubles, thinked Dahlie, as she run quickly and stealthily across the forest, to return with the two other drows and the prisioners...
Surely, this was all their fault. Not only they don't know discipline, follow orders, and do their mission.
It was all so simple! Just to capture one Amazon and return to the main column of the Dark Legion for inteligence of the defenses of the Amazon tribes...
But Noooooooooo, these dungeandar drows don't know anything like duty mean, and less about common sense:
Why they attacked a patrol?
Is not like the amazons will not see that they are a patrol less... and for what? To capture prisioners to sell as slaves. Only for some economical gain...
And now, they are all in deep troubles, as the amazons are sweeping all the area, searching for them. And they blaimed HER for their troubles...
She wished she can make them pay for all of this!
She stopped, and crouched behind some bushes... other group of amazons... better was, to avoid detection.
"Oeddech chi'n clywed rhywbeth, Rali?"
"Rhif .. efallai wiwer neu rywbeth?"
"Yr oedd yn fwy"
"Anifail wedyn. Beth rydym yn hela, beth bynnag?"
"Mae Elf tywyll."
"Uh! 'n glws! Yr wyf yn allways eisiau un. Byddwch yn meddwl y gallaf gadw ei os byddaf yn dal hi?"
"Yr wyf yn amau ei"
"Hey, Liviana, beth yr ydym yn ei wneud yma, beth bynnag?"
"cameo. Oes unrhyw beth pwysig"
Luckily, the amazons get away...
Oh, her comrades will pay for all of this, thinked Dahlie, running again to the meeting point...
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The Amazons of your setting sport some really wild hairstyles....
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Hah! Rali and Liviana - working together for once. XD
Keep your head down, Dahlie! Rali will distract you with her super weaknesses while Liviana gets you heheh
Again, I love Dahlie's costume. It's so awesome! When I return to drawing, I think I know what I'll be doing! ; D
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Oooooooooooooooohhh, that would be nice to see :3
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Just to clarify: she is YOURS, right? I don't want to draw one of your fan's characters ; )
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Mine! Mine! X3
Is just that I used them as well in other peoples commission, because fit her!
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Uh Oh! Is that dark haired amazon KO Corral's Liviana Hildred? Even if not literally her, she certainly looks like your world's evocation of her!? Dahl'Arak will not have an easy time facing her down! This pic reminds us how large the amazon's are to the drow!
Ah! What am I thinking? The other amazon has a "helreign helm" on! Funny seeing them here on the same side! XD I rather like the decorative detail on the shield of the "helreign" amazon!
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This is a cameo of Liviana Hildred... and Rali Kocor! XD
But is only a cameo, and Liviana payment is for each hour, and isn't cheap, so I suppose she "didn't detected the drow" due a short budget! D:!!
So don't worry much in this case, they are only doing a Cameo, as I said! X3
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Well avoiding detecion was a goal ahicved! X2
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Well, well, well! Well-known faces
And what a beautiful image on Rali's shield!
So, Rali wants to keep a dark elf as a pet? Not very smart idea, I must say... If only... If only she wants to keep a dark elf on a chain to guard her house... Otherwise it's a big question who will keep whom as a pet
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X3
And thanks! I wanted to do something more imaginative this time in the shield design! XD
And for Rali, I wanted to follow somebody's comment about an amazon wanting as well a "cuddle-bear", like that drow wanted an amazon... but surely, with google translator I wasn't able to achieve that idea, so I tried to simplificate... but really, it would be an horrible idea, specially for Rali, isn't true? XD
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Oh yes, especially knowing that her catch might be nobody else but future General Dahl'Arak, known for her weak and submissive character, LOL
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XD
Yeah, if she get to caught her, is 100% of possibility of a bad ending for Rali XD
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Surely! Take a black mamba as a home pet snake
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i didn't know your amazons spoke welsh ^ ^
rali ac liviana gallant siaradant Γ’ briallen a derwen!
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they don't speak welsh, but use google translator from English to welsh, as is clear in the poorly constructed orations! XD
As you know, the humans of my world are bassed in real cultures, but supposedly, there are some real "orignal" ones:
However, with the Amazons I find a problem: I was thinking them, from an ethnical point of view, be indoeuropean (maybe celtic or germanic) in some point of their past, and then develope in their own...
but for the language, I wanted to make clear that the drow and amazons speak different languages... and among the options I had where danish, german, swedish, irish gaelic or welsh gaelic... so I decided to pic welsh X3
However, they aren't really welsh, but are for "watchers" to translate -if they care- the dialogue.
(I decided my amazons to be celtic/german, rather than greek, for the geographical location I give to them... however, as you can suppose, they culture developed quite differently, if they produced warrior women tribes... and after they where annexed by demons, they culture keep being more differentiated from other human nations of the region :3)
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ah i see - using one language to stand in for another unknown one is quite an established thing to do (e.g. tolkien's comment that the common tongue (westron) was not english, but he had merely chosen to represent it as english as a comparative language, and likewise use old english (anglo-saxon) as the language of the riders of rohan)
hmm, anyway, what was i talking about? oh yes - it's not "welsh gaelic", it's just welsh (cymraeg): they're both celtic languages, as you know, but gaelic only refers to the irish and scottish languages - they're quite different. (that is, welsh is hard. gaelic is impossible.)
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Well, I allways use english when all the speakers are talking the same language, but depend of the speakers, the language:
be Vanili High Elf, NegeΓ©mi drow, Antorian orc, Bazik, Farian dwarvish, etc X3... personally, I would prefeer to use spanish in that use, but since more people understand english... :3
also: thanks!
I thinked welsh was gaelic as well, because in spanish is called "GalΓ©s", wich sound pretty close to "Gaelico", so I assumed it was similar X3
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OOooo... not going to translate for us what they are saying? XD
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they're speaking welsh...
"Did you hear something, Rali? "
"No. .. maybe squirrel or something? "
"It was more"
"Just an animal(?). What we are hunting, anyway?"
"A dark elf. "
"Uh! nice! I allways wanted one. You think I can keep it if I catch her? "
"I doubt it"
"Hey, Liviana, what we are doing here, anyway? "
"A cameo. Is there anything important (?)"
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What I writed in english, before Google translator butchered it when trying to convert it in welsh:
"Did you hear something, Rali? "
"No. .. maybe squirrel or something? "
"It was bigger"
"Just an animal, in any case. What we are hunting, anyway?"
"A dark elf. "
"Uh! nice! I allways wanted one. You think I can keep it if I catch her? "
"I doubt it"
"Hey, Liviana, what we are doing here, anyway? "
"A cameo. Nothing important, anyway "
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looks like google didn't mangle it too badly - only a couple of bits came out wrong when i put it through the translator back into english again. i have to say i'm pretty impressed with how well google translate manages european languages these days!
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Oh, yeah... I remember the first time I used an Internet translator, surely it was horrible!
One must recognice how much they have done to make it an actually more or less useful tool these translators :3
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use google translator like I used! XD
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yeah, how strange, isn't true? XD
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It is strange that they had previously fought among themselves.
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That's the wonderful part of doing a cameo! They differences are forget for a moment! XD
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X3
yay! Cameo!
and yay for poor use of google translator
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