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You pull the angel to a private alleyway in the Skyworld Marketplace. Dark Pit follows, arms crossed and smirking.
"At least he's no longer annoyingly cheerful," he says.
"Shut up, Kuro!" You say, whipping around to slap the dark angel on the cheek, and you made sure to do it hard.
"Ow! What in Hades, (Name)?!" Dark Pit groans, rubbing the bright red mark you presented him with on his left cheek.
"Don't be so insensitive at a time like this!" You send a glare his way and he puts his hands up in protest.
"Woah! Take a chill pill! I was kidding. Zeus, you must really be in love with him if you care that much about me making a joke about him."
"W-what?! No way!" You protest, a blush forming on your delicate (skin colour) features. The counterpart merely chuckles at your reaction, knowing he had hit the nail on the head. Yet, knowing Dark Pit, he's not done with his teasing, not until you become a blushing mess we he stop... If he stops.
"Methinks the Lovey-Dovey Tomato Lady doth protest too much," he grins and you scoff, secretly holding a giggle in. Pit can't even read but Dark Pit knows Shakespeare?! I mean, sure, they're opposites but still! Did he really have all that knowledge stored inside when he came out of the Mirror of Truth?! You will never understand how the world works...
"Hell is empty and all the devils are here!" You deadpan, "Boom!"
Dark Pit raises an eyebrow, "You ruined it at 'boom!'," he imitates your peace-out action and imitates you in a loud, squeaky voice. And guess what you did next? B***h slap!!!!!!!
"SHUT UP, KURO!!!!!" You shout, finally giving up and turning to see the captain of guards staring blankly at the ground. You gently reach up, taking his shoulders. He looks up at you, sapphire blue eyes gently melting into your (eye colour) ones. You sigh, shivers running down your spin as you breath in and out, a lump starting from the depths of your throat as you stare into a blue nothingness that is your crush's orbs. "Pit..."
He nods gently, eyes never leaving yours. You find yourself unable to speak. Watching him in so much pain, watching his suffer, watching that cheerful face you fell in love with reduced to nothing but a pit of loneliness. It scares you. What if he remains like this forever? What would you do? Is there a way to return him to normal? A way to get the Pit you know and love back? You were ready for anything. Ready to lay down your life if needed... Even if it meant never seeing him again...
"What's up?" You ask.
"Skyworld..." he mutter.
Now it's Dark Pit's turn to get pissed. He pushes you to the side and grips Pit roughly by the shoulders, shaking him hard. Watching the two made you dizzy. Watching the blurs of white and black go back and forth; your head started spinning!
"IDIOT!!! CAN'T YOU SEE SHE'S WORRIED ABOUT YOU?!!!! COME ON PIT STAIN!!!! PROVE YOU'RE NOT ANNOYINGLY CHEERFUL!!! DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH OF A WEIRDO YOU LOOK LIKE NOW?! ARE YOU WAITING FOR YOUR PRECIOUS GODDESS TO FREE HER CAPTAIN OF GUARDS?! PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER!!!!!!!" It ended with you pulling Dark Pit off him, tears in your eyes.
"That's enough, Kuro!" You whimper, the salty drops rolling down your cheeks. The fallen angel's crimson eyes widen.
"H-hey! Don't cry! I'm so--!" More worried about Pit, you push past him and run to help your friend up. He gently takes your hand after a few minutes of staring and trying to comprehend what was happening. You pull him to his feet and hug him. He returns the embrace, holding you tightly in his arms.
"Pit... What's wrong?"
"I think..." he starts. You gulp, never wanting to hear the end of that dreaded sentence," something bad is going to happen..."
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Comments: 55
ShackledFairy In reply to ??? [2015-09-27 00:22:24 +0000 UTC]
All will be revealed very soon~
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LunariaMay [2015-09-22 05:21:40 +0000 UTC]
ERRRG! You made Pit seem so depressed... ;-; Hell, you made me depressed!
On instinct, I get somewhat...protective (if that's the right word...) of people who are depressed (or suicidal).
It also literally hurts when I see (or read!) about someone who is like this. So this chapter really got me in the feels... ;-; This is an amazing story so far! Thank you for writing something like this!
I absolutely can't wait until the next chapter. Take your time though, there is no rush. :3
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ShackledFairy In reply to LunariaMay [2015-09-24 09:16:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far!
Hehe, don't worry~! There's a reason for our sweet little angel's depression
I'll do my best to update soon - I'm just currently piled in requests
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ShackledFairy In reply to FourSwordsFan6 [2015-05-27 10:28:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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ShackledFairy In reply to CaptainElsa [2015-05-03 18:54:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And thanks for the watch!!!
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CaptainElsa In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-03 20:25:15 +0000 UTC]
No problem, keep up the good work!
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-03 08:33:04 +0000 UTC]
It's always funny to see Dark Pit do sometime like shakesphere or anything the opposite of Pit.
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-03 16:55:02 +0000 UTC]
Definitely! xD
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-04 00:39:40 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Though, I wonder, does that mean Dark Pit would suck at what Pit is good at?
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-04 08:55:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... That's what got me thinking.... In the game, Dark Pit used that Midsummer Night's Dream line to describe Pit as a puppet... I'm confused!!!!!!! xD
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-04 23:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... interesting. I do know something that Pit did in some random games he did a cameo in that Dark Pit may not be able to do then.
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-05 09:04:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Did you know Pit, from Kid Icarus: Of Myths and Monsters till SSBB, appeared on puzzle games and celebration screens, playing an instrument? (usually a harp or violin I think)
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-05 16:46:13 +0000 UTC]
No... first I've heard of it!
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-05 17:25:22 +0000 UTC]
Well, he did. I actually wanted to do a picture where I have Pit teaching Dark Pit how to play a violin.
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-05 22:52:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Someone wanted a cute Pit and Dark Pit scene, so I decided on violin lessons.
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-06 17:48:35 +0000 UTC]
So far, I have drawn Dark Pit, who doesn't look happy (probably due to not wanting to play the violin). I just need a happy Pit
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-06 18:28:44 +0000 UTC]
xD I look forward to seeing it!
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-06 20:51:23 +0000 UTC]
Well thank you.
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-07 17:25:44 +0000 UTC]
That picture should be finished either today or tomorrow (I am just redrawing it to not have as many smudges, then colouring it)
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-07 20:29:38 +0000 UTC]
I finished the drawing and outlining. I just need to do the colouring
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-07 21:24:02 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. It's the first time drawing Dark Pit for me.
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-08 09:13:19 +0000 UTC]
Well, I got the drawing done. Just need the coloring (Trying to figure out what color for DArk Pit's wings, as sometimes they're black, sometimes a mixture of green)
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-08 20:27:59 +0000 UTC]
Really? I thought they're always black
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-08 22:48:25 +0000 UTC]
Well, it was just for some images. I'll just use black wings to make it easier
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-09 08:03:28 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, good idea
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-09 08:23:22 +0000 UTC]
Well, I posted it onto my account. Will post into groups quickly.
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-09 11:15:03 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait to see it!
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-09 17:30:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad people seem to like it.
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-09 20:29:14 +0000 UTC]
They should, it's awesome!!
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-09 20:29:49 +0000 UTC]
Well, thank you.
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-09 20:32:21 +0000 UTC]
No problem! XD
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Angel-of-Light-Kelly In reply to ShackledFairy [2015-05-09 20:37:26 +0000 UTC]
To be funny, if you noticed, my Kid Icarus deviations are all different (1 X reader, one dark story, and 1 picture). That surely is a veriety.
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ShackledFairy In reply to Angel-of-Light-Kelly [2015-05-10 16:20:53 +0000 UTC]
Yep, a big variety xD
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ShackledFairy In reply to catlover2103 [2015-05-02 23:00:25 +0000 UTC]
I found it... I don't know how or why but Da deleted it. I'll rewrite it and post it soon!
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ShackledFairy In reply to catlover2103 [2015-05-02 22:56:50 +0000 UTC]
I started writing in Journals before because I didn't know you had to do it in Stash writer? I'll tell you if I find it or I'll just rewrite it. Sorry for the inconvenience!!
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ShackledFairy In reply to catlover2103 [2015-05-02 23:19:56 +0000 UTC]
No problem! It will be tomorrow though, as I have to go to bed now...
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