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ShadeofShinon — Lord Mithril 2009 version

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Description He was sitting on a sunlit window sill watching the gardens of his gorgeous manor. There was something especially pleasant for his eyes, the smirk on the young face told it. No one had told him to do something else than just sit on the window sill every day, no one dared to disrupt the great master of the manor. Besides, he had nothing specific to do.

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"He was sitting there again, I saw him!"
"I bet he's got his eyes on something - or someone."
"What do you mean by that? Do you know something?"
"I bet she's just guessing, you can't tell just by spying him."
"I wasn't spying! I mean, everyone can see him staring at his garden. And we do know who spends her days in the garden, don't we."
"You don't possibly mean-"
"-the new gradener, the young lady?"
"Yes, her. I bet that Lord Mithril is pretty attracted to her. And if I'm not heading straingth to the woods, I'd say that the lady's feeling towards the young lord aren't too cold."
"Eek! They'd be such a cute couple!"
"Shh, someone's coming! Now, back to your work you two."

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And that's the story behind this new version of Lord Mithril. Few of you might remember the old version, it was one of my very first submissions on this site. I still remember when I drew it and how much pain it caused because of the vast areas to colour ith the same shade. This time it didn't. I suppose that the only thing that I have improved in isn't skill but also patience, which I now have, at least a bit more that then.
When I saw the Kick your own @ss contest I wanted to join it. It took quite long to decide the picture to remake but in the end I ended up with Lord Mithril. I'm not an anthro artist and do not draw them very often, almost not at all. And secondly I don't draw pencil pictures very much either. So pretty difficult make make the new version look better than the old one. :'D But I can say that some improvement during these two years and two months has happened, it's clearly visible. It'd be stupid to say that I haven't improved much just to draw peoples "Of course you have improved!" -comments. X) I'll add more rant about my improvement on the actual contest entry which will include both versions.

There are some details that I like and I like the whole composition more than on the original version. I think that one of my favourite details is thta small figure in the garden. He's the head chef's assistant who's carrying fresh eggs to the kithcen. Drawing the garden was very difficult: I didn't know what to include, on which height I should draw it, should the window be on the ground floor or on the upper floors and such. But eventually I think that it came ou pretty nicely. Oh, and that fountain (yes, it is a fountain) isn't the biggest one around. Actually the path the eggman is walking on leads to the kitchen. The head path is far bigger and more gorgeous.
I had very fun with this and making this picture and seeing the result (though it needs some revising anyway) made e feel better. Kicking my own ass was really fun though it hurt a bit. I imagined what I would have felt like two years ago if I saw this version then.

I hope you like it too!

N O T E ! My computer is whinging currently and that's why I needed to use ~Pena-Mies 's scanner which really hates pencil works. She kindly let me scan this for the contest, but I'll try to scan a better one when my computer works well again.

2009 version: Here
2007 version:[link]
Kick your own @ss -contest: [link]

Done with Derwent Graphic pencils H, F, HB, B, 2B, 3B, 4B, 5B, 7B.
Time taken 10-13 hours
Mithril is my character and the drawing is done by me

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Comments: 19

duraluminwolf [2009-10-04 23:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


This pencil rendering is absolutely beautiful. You worked the texture of the paper and the pencil lines into the overall drawing.

Your attention to detail is superb-especially to the scale/s of various objects drawn in the artwork, and the particular attention you've paid to the perspective of the window.

I had noticed a few flaws in this piece. Firstly, there are certain details on the central figure that need more definition. They just seem to look a little "blurry". Secondly, both forground and background tend to merge together in places. I adore the realistic drapery of his coat/jacket, though. That isn't to say that this piece of work is any less for those particular points I mentioned.

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ShadeofShinon In reply to duraluminwolf [2009-10-08 18:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for another great critique! I'm really glad that you took your time to write this one, too, and I'm also glad to hear you like this picture.

The blurrines you mentioned might as well be caused by the scanner, which obviously didn't like this drawing. But there may be some blurriness in the original one, I'm not sure where I put it to keep it "safe", but the scan is really bad.
And the merging of foreground and background - thanks for pointing it out! I didn't think about it before, but now that you said it I can see you're right. I need to pay more attention on it from now on.
Once again, thank you! ^^

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Kivutar [2009-08-04 19:57:57 +0000 UTC]

Kovin on kaunista jälkeä, hyvin piirretty nuo varjot ja heijastukset. kokonaisuudessaan oikein nätti lyijykynätyö.

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ShadeofShinon In reply to Kivutar [2009-08-08 11:14:15 +0000 UTC]

Paljon kiitoksia! ^^

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Kivutar In reply to ShadeofShinon [2009-08-11 03:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Ole hyvä. ^^

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Incarnadine91 [2009-07-01 14:56:03 +0000 UTC]

I really like this - I love the way he's posed, and his little smirk is cool But I especially love the garden, it's perfectly positioned in relationship to the window and the detail is brilliant Well done you! For someone who says they're not an anthro artist, you're pretty damn good at it...
hey, do you mind telling me how you made the glass shiny yet seethrough like that?

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ShadeofShinon In reply to Incarnadine91 [2009-09-12 16:10:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm awfully late again, sorry...
But thank you very much for such a nice comment! I'm glad to hear my anthros do somewhat well. And yeah, the shiny and seethrough windows. I just drew the window and the landscape outside it, maybe with a bit lighter tone that what it would be and when I had done that I simply took an eraser (the smaller the better) and erased some white lines to make the glass look shiny. I hope this made sense It's a simple way, really.

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Incarnadine91 In reply to ShadeofShinon [2009-09-15 06:56:55 +0000 UTC]

No problem I'll keep that in mind!

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NewMadonna [2009-06-30 21:22:51 +0000 UTC]

hei pakko kysyy milt tuntuu olla pro

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ShadeofShinon In reply to NewMadonna [2009-07-24 19:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Jos minut nyt proksi lasketaan, niin itse asiassa aika hyvältä! Aina ei proltakaan kyllä kaikki onnistu :/

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FantasyDog [2009-06-30 07:18:22 +0000 UTC]

Ihan critiqueen en uskalla kirjottaa, mutta nyt potkin kyllä lunta tupaan 8D
Ensinnäkin, tää on upea! Kaikki pienet yksityiskohdat tuolla ikkunan takana saa hymyilemään. Huomaa että oot tehny tätä työtä oikein urakalla. Miten rakastankaan tuollaisia puutarhoja <3
Mutta sitten itse loordiin. Herran jalat näyttävät vähän pieniltä muuhun ruumiiseen verrattuna. Jalan itsessään olisi voinut piirtää hieman pidemmäksi ja leveämmäksi.
Loordin leuka myös katoaa johonkin. Seinä, johon herra nojaa on hieman vino verrattuna muuhun perspektiiviin.
Kokonaisuus on kuitenkin mainio. Arvostan varsinkin sitä, ettet piirtänyt pelkkää sivuprofiilia ^^ tää on upea.

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ShadeofShinon In reply to FantasyDog [2009-09-30 18:33:26 +0000 UTC]

Anteeksi kovin paljon, että tässä vastaamisessa on kestänyt niin luvattoman kauan... u___u Luin kommentin kyllä silloin, kun laitoit sen, mutta vastaaminen lykkääntyi yllättävän kauas...
Mutta suuresti kiitoksia ihanasta kommentista! 8) Ei siihen critiqueen välttämättä tarvitse pistääkään, saman asianhan saa sanottua tavallisessakin kommentissa, ja se on pääasia. ^^ Joskus olisi kyllä kiva se ensimmäinen critiquekin saada XD
Ihmisen ja ihmismäisten hahmojen anatomia on vaikeaa, vielä vaikeampaa se on pistää perspektiiviin, mutta yritän kovasti harjoitella sitäkin lisää. Kiitoksia noiden asioiden mainitsemisesta! Pitäää kiinnittää enemmän huomiota jatkossa. 8)

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Simkaye [2009-06-29 16:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful pencil work =3 This is a magnificent improvement from the '07 version. The clothing is so detailed and dimensional and the textures are awesome. The view through the window really gives the piece a realistic feel, too. Great work

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ShadeofShinon In reply to Simkaye [2009-07-24 19:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the lovely comment!

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Simkaye In reply to ShadeofShinon [2009-07-27 16:17:26 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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AndreasAvester [2009-06-29 01:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Awesome drawing!
I like this pose and feeling of the image.
And also shading and all the details looks great.
And of course improvement compared to your previous work is huge.

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ShadeofShinon In reply to AndreasAvester [2009-07-24 21:11:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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DannFirefeet [2009-06-28 23:00:56 +0000 UTC]

The light effects and the wrinkles in his clothing are really well done. There also seems to be a lot more of the tiny detail in the '09 version. Nice work!

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ShadeofShinon In reply to DannFirefeet [2009-07-24 19:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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