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fluffyattackify [2011-07-02 20:03:56 +0000 UTC]

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I absolutely love the mist, the snow, and the bold colors. The shading is wonderful and the snow looks blurred and mistified. I really love the shades of red and purple you put into it, and how the tears aren't bright blue like alot of people make them. I love the furlines on the back and how the background looks 3D and abstract. I admire the eyes, how the glow goes outside of the lines and how there are more than 2 shades inside of it. It really looks fantastic!


A couple things I would suggest:

It's hard to tell where the light source is coming from, therefore making the shading a little strange. The muscle lines on the muzzle look a little uneven. I suggest to make them a little closer and more lined up. The lower jaw seems a bit too thick also. The neck should go a little higher and line up with the jaw, not go behind it. My advice for the jaw, is to make the bottom a little more flat.

It's also hard to tell where the shoulder muscle is, and the chest should be a little more poofy, but those are just REALLY minor, so you really shouldn't worry about it.


This is really one of the best pictures I've seen you draw! You are progressing fast! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="23" height="23" alt="" title="w00t!"/>

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MoonstoneTalaAmaya [2011-08-29 01:19:19 +0000 UTC]

For critque i would suggest raising the nose a bit from the muzzle to give the nose some definition rather than a black spot. I would also add a few more teeth, and the snarl needs a bit more definition on the folds of it. the ears I like as well as the glow on the eyes and the way you did you fur. the shading and snow are really good.
All in all its epicness!

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ExtroInferno [2011-07-17 05:45:57 +0000 UTC]

The only critique I have is the lighting is way off and the snarl looks odd.
The muzzle is to rounded the nose isn't accurate.

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TheGirlFlippy [2011-07-05 09:23:40 +0000 UTC]

I don't know!! D:

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Sorrow106 [2011-07-02 21:43:19 +0000 UTC]

if only i can help you or something like that

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Goodnight-Kimberly [2011-07-02 21:31:57 +0000 UTC]

awww so pretty! <3

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TilyerWolf [2011-07-02 20:50:32 +0000 UTC]

epicness

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fluffyattackify [2011-07-02 19:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Why is she crying? Just kidding, I know. This is really awesome!

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ParaphaPanda [2011-07-02 19:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is amazing...I loves it!

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