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This was the second assignment for my Intro to Sequential Art class. We were supposed to create a two page comic only using silhouettes to show emotion and action, etc. It's a little unclear in some places (like panels 14 and 15).Materials: Sharpie marker on bristol board
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J-Cleo [2009-04-24 19:11:55 +0000 UTC]
Greetings, bucket of the shadow variety! I come back from the grave to bring you this important message:
That's an amazing comic. XD There was only one panel where I was slightly lost where the mermaid was crying, but otherwise I understood perfectly what was going on. I think it's amazing how much of a story can be told with little or no details as long as you have gestures down.
And also, how are you? 8D
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shadowbucket In reply to J-Cleo [2009-04-26 06:02:33 +0000 UTC]
It's you! I'm doing well! Been busy with school work and life in general.
Yeah, I didn't realize the issues with those panels untill after I filled them in, and by that point I couldn't do anything to fix it D:
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SilverSugar [2009-04-19 02:08:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh my God, so funny~!
Must. Resist. Laughing. Out. Loud. And. Waking. Dog.
*snicker*
This is a really, really neat idea. Silhouettes can either be really pointless, or really amazing. Your comic is flat out ingenious! I love it.
Hm...If I ever get money again, I think I'll take another art class. Do you like yours?
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shadowbucket In reply to SilverSugar [2009-04-19 03:06:50 +0000 UTC]
Yay, I'm glad you like it
I love all of my studio classes...but then again, I'm going to art college for a reason, lol XD The class I did this for is difficult, but in a good way. I'm really pushing myself to be a clearer story-teller.
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SilverSugar In reply to shadowbucket [2009-04-19 05:41:41 +0000 UTC]
Are you taking a writing class too? That might help. Maybe one for fiction. I know they offer something like that at my local college, so maybe they have better classes at a "real college". Either way, best of luck to you, clearly you've got the talent. *smile smile smile*
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shadowbucket In reply to LucasAG [2009-04-18 06:21:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I always seem to draw comics that have something to do with karma, haha.
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LucasAG In reply to shadowbucket [2009-04-18 06:23:08 +0000 UTC]
That's a good theme, keep on this way
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shadowbucket In reply to shiawase-chan [2009-04-13 03:04:04 +0000 UTC]
YEAH Maybe we SHOULD.
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Bemused-Dreamer [2009-04-12 04:20:31 +0000 UTC]
lawl lawl. I really like the panel where she angrily comes out of the water. You and angry women.
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shadowbucket In reply to Bemused-Dreamer [2009-04-12 16:00:37 +0000 UTC]
XD I know, right? I need to start drawing more versatile characters...
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Sintitiks [2009-04-11 05:49:59 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm I love the clarity. Something about the silhouettes makes it easy to read what's going on. Good job!
And what is it with you and karma... first the spitting and now littering... xD But it's funny so I don't care.
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shadowbucket In reply to Sintitiks [2009-04-11 23:03:41 +0000 UTC]
haha, yeah, I tend to think of stories with retribution ect. as large themes XD
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phychoticsilence [2009-04-09 06:47:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice. It's very expressive but the only part where it looks like it could be better is when the mermaid cries. Maybe showing her arms a little more extended from her body or something of the such.
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shadowbucket In reply to phychoticsilence [2009-04-09 06:49:08 +0000 UTC]
yeah, I realized that after I filled in the silhouettes T_T There was no way I was gonna redo the whole page, so I just let it be.
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caged-Remix [2009-04-09 06:16:44 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of Bon Jovi. The water effect is cool though.
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Tamao [2009-04-09 03:54:50 +0000 UTC]
That's so cute and funny, haha! XD I love how the mermaid throws something back at him.
You conveyed the story really well!
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shadowbucket In reply to Tamao [2009-04-09 05:10:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^_^;; Intro is a lot harder than I thought it would be...it's all about story telling, which I definitely need help with T_T
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