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Shadowdeep — What I Used To Be
Published: 2006-02-09 04:59:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description I am here, as much as I detest this
Broken
Shattered
Scattered
Amidst this great precipice
Of indecision
Created of my own vision
Hope is a virtue I've long since neglected
My tears abandoned are solemnly reflected
And the wind sings of painful consequence
As I dangle on the edge of this chasm
My innocence lost to all that was
A dark panic consuming, fear fueling
Me and all these broken pieces
Of what I used to be...
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Comments: 5

ShadowStrider [2006-02-11 07:27:52 +0000 UTC]

nice.

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verdin [2006-02-09 15:00:21 +0000 UTC]

This is really good. Did you still want to go over a couple of things with this char?

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Shadowdeep In reply to verdin [2006-02-11 17:02:33 +0000 UTC]

I still need to. I will note you via DA when I have time.

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solid-snake-587 [2006-02-09 12:08:27 +0000 UTC]

the choice of words..............really, kudos

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firefly16 [2006-02-09 05:01:32 +0000 UTC]

i like it!! verry good^^

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