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Published: 2004-11-21 19:08:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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The world sets an idea for how we should be,and if you're confused, just leave it to me.
Try to be patient and don't be too proud,
Don't be too quiet, but don't be too loud.
Shut up and listen, and try to understand
You should keep your head out of the clouds,
and your feet in the sand.
Stay true to your god, be kind to your friends,
And when you hurt someone, try to make amends.
Let your imagination run, but hold a tight rope,
Be able to change, and never lose hope.
Don't tell twisted truths nor spread rumors or lies,
And don't ever fall for the clever man's guise.
If you can follow this good advice, my friend,
You'll live a good life right up to the end.
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Comments: 5
Shattered-Moon [2004-11-22 01:05:27 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful! I wish that I could be able to follow that advice, but for me I don't think it's possible. Awesome work though!!
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Shadowed-Perception In reply to Shattered-Moon [2004-11-22 11:46:58 +0000 UTC]
Thankies Crys!
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TarnishedSilver [2004-11-21 19:13:11 +0000 UTC]
I really like this piece. I mean, alot of poetry can be good in their one aspect or so, but i really liked this piece because it was just about the actual scheme of things, life and such. I mean, of course, poetry is a personal expression and as long as you like it and feel for it heart to heart, thats all that it needs to be beautiful, but i thought id say: this piece was oh so good.
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Shadowed-Perception In reply to TarnishedSilver [2004-11-21 19:26:50 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Now if only I could follow that advice..
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TarnishedSilver In reply to Shadowed-Perception [2004-11-21 19:28:20 +0000 UTC]
lol, no prob holmes.
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