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Master,I do not give this title lightly at all.
Master,
The one man I trust not to let me fall.
Master,
The man I give myself to..all of me.
The man who I respect more than anyone,
The man who sets me free.
Master,
The title I give a man who I hold on high.
The man who I trust utterly,
The man who refuses to let me cry.
Master,
The man who brings this Amazon to her knees.
The man who makes me beg,
The one who I say "Please..?"
Master,
The one who owns my very soul.
The man who completes me,
The one who helped me to become whole.
Master,
God among men is what he is to me.
The man who I yearn for,
To whom I'd crawl to on my knees.
My heart belongs to my Master,
As does my body and soul.
All that I am is his.
He made me burn again when I was cold.
Master,
My love..my heart.
My extra push in life,
The man who helped me start.
The one who
Ignites my fire,
Master..oh Master..
The one who consumes my desires.
My every thought and dream,
Master, is of you.
You ARE my soul.
You give spirit to all that I do.
You make flowers seem more beautiful,
The stars shine more luminous in the night sky.
I trust Master truly
Because Master never lies.
I'd do anything for Master,
All he has but to do is ask.
Master, the one who with one look
Saw through all my masks.
The man who makes me want
To help myself, to LIVE my life.
The man who hardens me
To be able to handle strife.
Master, oh Master,
How can words say
That I give you all that I am forever?
That I wake and smile because of you each day?
How can I prove to you
That I deserve to be with you
Master? I give you my life, my love, my all.
You give me love like I've never knew.
Master,
The beat of my very heart.
The hand that holds my leash,
That I've loved from the very start.
The man I bow to,
The only man I listen to.
Master, my wonderful God of a Master,
There will only EVER be you.
Forever more I am yours,
Yours and yours ALONE.
For wherever my Master is
IS my home.
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Comments: 34
This is great poetry and great expression. Intensity and love.. interwined in all those words.
... The only one to whom i say "please" .. hehe.. *sight*
You must have a good place. I am happy for you.
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Thank you for writing thes words...you have writing the words that I have been trying to find thank you
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that's how a Sub should feel... the Master should also be what you have written
i like... thumps up
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this is so beautiful
you have touched my heart and my soul with it.
I never knew how to express my feelings to my master, but thanks to you I know it now.
thank you so much for this wonderful inspiration
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As a master with a loving servant, I love finding literature that portrays deeper master-servant bonds than the stereotypical dominating, whip-using masters who are cold to their slaves and servants who are abused doormats. Β Thank you for writing this. Β Hopefully, over time, people will come to understand that our relationships are not twisted forms of abuse. Β They're just our way of expressing our devotion to one another.
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you make me feel all warm inside
i am very happy
you just made my day
i am going to start crying
your work is of that of talent itself
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wow
i am a slave to a master 2
who is your master?
mine is HYPNOTICVAMPIRE19
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Absolutely beautiful. Really well written and full of emtion.
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I absolutely love this. It has so much feeling in it.
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I must say this was really well written. I loved it.
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Wonderfully written, I can easily relate, as for the most part I feel the same way about my Sama~ ("lord" or "master") I love the way you described the feelings
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may i add thsi to my book? [link] it is so well done it mus tbe in my book. i am trying to get a collaboration of views of others revisions poetry and anything i can get my hands on.
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This girl has just come across this wonderfully lovely poem and cant quit reading it over and over. You have captured her feelings for her Master as well. She would just like to say thank You for putting this poem out here for others to read and appreciate.
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...um...
Ever... ever seen Doctor Who?
I just put 'The Master' in the dA search and this was one of the things that popped up, I really like it. It's just... 'the Master' the one and ONLY master, to me... is this guy: and this guy don't forget this guy and we WISH we could forget this guy this guy still counts and ESPECIALLY... THIS GUY!
These are all the same person, believe it or not...
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were i your master, i would be very pleased by you...
i think it is a very good peice.
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have you ever read the manga called sekirei? there are these humanoid aliens called sekirei that are in the form of beutiful women(yes i read echi, sue me) and the sekirei can make life bonds to a human but they only get one chance and they are then a slave to the human forever, they apparently experience a very pleasing feeling when they are near their master... this poem reminded me of that.. quite beautiful, i applaud you for almost making this dark heart turn light
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i only dream of ever feeling like that. how beautiful.
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to be a slave means alot i am a master and my slave read this and she took on a new life she now fully understands what it means to be a slave
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this is what it truly means to be owned but free...thank you....you are one of the few the understand the beauty of it....
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lovely, and it almost brought me to tears. i feel the same way for mine
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done very beautifully I am sure your Master is pleased
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odd, this master, seems to be the master without willing it to be so, but rather you willing it to be. How strange that you enslaved yourself to him willingly. If history is any indicator, it is usually the master who is self-declared.
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Mock not that which is a path not walked... such submission is a beautiful thing when it is truly understood, with one soul binding to another (for the Master binds to the slave as well) in such a fashion is a feat beyond the means of a many people's understanding. Don't take offence for none is intended but you will never tell me there is any bond more sacred and beautiful than ownership and the submission that entails, religion aside.
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I wish people would understand the relationships we have with our masters so much better then they do now. It really is such a beautiful thing. I believe more beautiful than the typical bf/gf relationship, because it is not just the slave/pet giving herself all to her master, but her master giving himself all to her as well.
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i love this poem. it captures certain emotions so well...
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this is beautiful, i feel the same way, but i don't hav a master though, if i did , i would give him everything he would ask of me
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This is beautiful.
i admire your love and respect for Him...i can relate to the line that He is the only man you listen to, who can bring "this Amazon" to her knees. I get a lot of grief that I have a man as my Master.
I really liked it, that's all I was trying to say.
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