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shadowedpixie — If I Could Be
Published: 2010-07-30 23:11:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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If I were a soundI'd be the silence of snowfall
The whispers on a gentle wind
Eyelashes brushing against the cheek of a lover.
If could be
Everything you wanted
I'd leave red lipstick marks on your heart and in your dreams.
I would be the light you see
When you close your eyes for the breadth of a moment.
If I would dream
Of anything but your embrace
I'd never wake to see the sky again
Because that's where you always look when I ask too much.
If I could stand
Close enough to touch you
I hope you'd kiss me first.
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Comments: 4
i was never good at poetry, and the only poetry i really read is poe and lovecraft. well and yaknow wu-tang, guess that's technically poems xD with dope beats. But anyway, this is nice, good imagery :3 you seem to know how to plant a picture in my head well.
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I'm sure you could improve if your practiced! If you'd like to, of course.
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i think creative writing or reviewing is more my thing. really i just kinda let my thoughts gush out onto the page. seems to work for me.
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