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I sit and watch the mirror's truthfulnessUnrecognized by even my own eyes
Completely overwhelmed by hopelessness
Can only watch as my reflection cries
The days pass by uncountable and dull
I'm sad and cold and hidden by my own
Pale ivory encasement of a skull
I'm suffocating with all that's unknown
Indifference is overtaking me
I'm faking smiles but cannot mask the sighs
I'm lonely and I fear no one can see
The longer I'm alone, sooner demise
I long now for acceptance and the end
Of time in which my hope does still descend
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Comments: 37
itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:05:43 +0000 UTC]
rhyming is not easy but you did a good job. And its about a topic everyone knows.
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:08:00 +0000 UTC]
It takes practice, but after some time, it starts to get easier.
Or maybe it was the fact that I had to take seven writing classes last year and the adrenaline from having to cram in order to not fail made me amazing.
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:09:30 +0000 UTC]
holy shit. seven? why? that is way to much writing. oh my poor wrists, they would be dead.
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:19:09 +0000 UTC]
Heh, it's a long story. That was on top of six other classes.... ahh, stressful year...
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:20:53 +0000 UTC]
i would say so. that's, way to many classes. was that college or HS?
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:22:45 +0000 UTC]
fair nuff. i dun know how old ya is. could have been college for all i know. why sigh?
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:23:32 +0000 UTC]
I is young. And the sigh was because it was stressful
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:24:55 +0000 UTC]
ya youngster. i remember back in my day......anyway yeah well least that year is done with :3 right?
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:29:38 +0000 UTC]
still in school or was that your last year?
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:30:12 +0000 UTC]
That was my freshman year. Hoping to graduate a year early though.
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:32:06 +0000 UTC]
sweet. why do you want to graduate a year early?
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:41:42 +0000 UTC]
Mostly because I can. I got so many credits last year that all I have to do is finish up all my required classes.
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:44:33 +0000 UTC]
cool. are you gunna take that year off and just chill? thats what i would do, actually i did do that XD
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:47:16 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what I'm going to do. Maybe try to complete a few goals. Who knows?
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:51:41 +0000 UTC]
cool. goals are good. i dont have many, finish college i guess.
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:53:14 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, goals are definitely good. I have too many. >_>
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:53:58 +0000 UTC]
to many eh? like what ^-^ if you don't mind me asking.
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 05:56:31 +0000 UTC]
Like... going on tour again with my dance troupe.
Rejoining an orchestra. Or a band.
Finally finishing a novel and/or a graphic novel.
Possibly getting back into acting.
Oh, I don't know.
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 05:58:32 +0000 UTC]
That is a lot, but those are all good goals. :3 what kind of dance? and what instrument do you play?
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 06:02:07 +0000 UTC]
It's like... a modern dance. It's called Eurythmy.
I play... Guitar, viola, violin by default, piano, saxophone, I've played flute a fair amount... Bass recorder. A few others.
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 06:04:08 +0000 UTC]
wow, thats all really impressive, i played the trumpet and that was about it, i dabbled with a guitar and violin but wow im really impressed. and i have no idea what kind of dance that is XD
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 06:06:27 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I've been pretty musical my whole life. I just couldn't keep a beat to save my life. Anything percussive is just too difficult for me.
And yeah... Eurythmy is pretty much unheard of. And as my friend once said, mystifying to the uninitiated.
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 06:09:08 +0000 UTC]
i cant much keep a beat either.
mystifying eh? sounds cool
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 06:12:34 +0000 UTC]
It's a little sad.
It is definitely cool. Very theatrical.
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 06:14:04 +0000 UTC]
whys that?
id like to see it :3 always been in aw of people that can do shows and stuff like that, im no good in front of people
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shadowedpixie In reply to itakun666 [2011-02-02 06:19:17 +0000 UTC]
Because I can't drum for shit. I'd like to
Performing isn't too hard after you do it a few times
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itakun666 In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 06:21:54 +0000 UTC]
im sorry, maybe, practice? and you will gain some beat skillz?
^-^;;; i have, anxiety problems, being in front of people, makes me ill. makes me feel like someones pulling a knife through my guts. not fun.
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PawPrince [2010-12-31 10:59:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow...this reminds me that I should get a dog or something.
Masterfully crafted though! This is very clean and flowing.
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shadowedpixie In reply to koneko-neko [2010-07-02 19:58:56 +0000 UTC]
sonnets are so evil. nothing rhymes with itself.
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kunalkunalkunalkunal [2010-03-16 15:11:10 +0000 UTC]
wow amazing... its hard as hell to write something with an iambic pentameter lol and it actually works.. lol gotta give your props on this one.. lol youve done it again!
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shadowedpixie In reply to kunalkunalkunalkunal [2010-03-16 23:57:21 +0000 UTC]
it took me like two hours to write! but i wasn't focusing on it the entire time, blame facebook. it stole my attention.
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kunalkunalkunalkunal In reply to shadowedpixie [2010-03-18 04:51:37 +0000 UTC]
lol.. GO FACEBOOK
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