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Published: 2011-02-02 06:44:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 83; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Away from home too long
Tears rifts in your heart.
Over time your soul loses it's way back home.
The beating of your heart echoes over the empty distance.
And before you have had the time
To count all the stars, it is too late,
It is too late...
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Comments: 7

koneko-neko [2011-02-02 18:04:16 +0000 UTC]

Love the line about the stars.

Of course I would.

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shadowedpixie In reply to koneko-neko [2011-02-03 06:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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koneko-neko In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-03 07:01:35 +0000 UTC]

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Backwards-Math [2011-02-02 06:45:19 +0000 UTC]

I like how this said rifts, instead of holes.
Thought I should share that bit.

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shadowedpixie In reply to Backwards-Math [2011-02-02 06:50:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Backwards-Math In reply to shadowedpixie [2011-02-02 06:52:07 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!
I'm infamous for appreciating tiny things in writing...
But I think that's what makes writing great.

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shadowedpixie In reply to Backwards-Math [2011-02-02 06:52:42 +0000 UTC]

I think I must agree.

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