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Published: 2010-03-11 01:34:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 88; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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His lips are soft like a little pink peachHe tastes like a peach too, ripe in warm sun
And when his arms embrace and for me reach
I know I should look forward to great fun
Sometimes his lips touch me as he greets me
But often, his kisses must be conserved
For times of passion had in privacy
So that our modesty will be preserved
But when we hide, I can hear his heart beat
And the breath in his chest as we both rest
Taking a break from the passion and heat
Looking forward to the next kissing fest
And when we are not together, we long
For the next time our ragged breath makes song
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This is good D. Is this written about one's own life's events to come?
I would not have known it to be a sonnet, and I think I've heard of iambic pentameter before, but no idea what it is....
I like it.
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iambic pentameter is a certain way the syllables are stressed naturally in speech, but they're still supposed to be in a certain way...... like a heartbeat basically.
and yes, this is based on fact.....
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Well, hope you have a wonderful time living out the words in your sonnet
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I've already experienced that wonderful time
haha
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