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shadowedpixie — Tongue Triumph
Published: 2012-06-15 16:52:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 206; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description My tongue afraid of the teeth
It cringes back from the powerful bite
And, yes, it escapes! It pulls back and celebrates
With a celebratory grin,
And then my throat lets forth
A joyful squawk!

My tongue has triumphed! Hooray!
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Comments: 6

SilentKittyEater [2012-06-17 19:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Give my congratulations to your tongue, will you?

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shadowedpixie In reply to SilentKittyEater [2012-06-18 04:18:29 +0000 UTC]

My tongue thanks you.

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SilentKittyEater In reply to shadowedpixie [2012-06-19 02:02:24 +0000 UTC]

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Fluffyboy66 [2012-06-16 09:45:18 +0000 UTC]

I really love the way you've increased the value of such a simple situation with powerful adjectives and an exciting flow. I like that in writing.

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shadowedpixie In reply to Fluffyboy66 [2012-06-18 04:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I tried to make it as interesting as possible.

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Fluffyboy66 In reply to shadowedpixie [2012-06-18 06:56:25 +0000 UTC]

You were very effective!

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