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Published: 2007-10-20 07:22:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 306; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description
Trapped in a dark closetshut out from the world
Always left behind the rest
Never to tell of the light
that puts the dead to sleep
As I stand upon my ground
I feel alone in this place
Of myths and ancient creatures
Looking around to find their prey
As if it was a race of life
A path to the mystic ways
But do not worry about me
While others laugh, I cry
this is nomal for me, don't feel
sorry as I just dont have a
perfect life
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Comments: 3
This is neat. You do a really good job of creating a fantastical, majestic feel, and that's very awesome. I would say, however, that the dragon's nearer foot is at a bit of an odd angle, and it might look a tad more natural for it to be positioned towards the point of view. It's also a little odd how much thicker the outline of the tail is, so I would make it a bit thinner.
But, that--and what Blue said--aside, it's quite breath-taking.
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Yeh I was going to go over all the lines of the dragon and make them thicker but I only did the tail, as I like the sketchy look from the pencil. I guess I will fix the tail or even go over the lines later but for now I am just leaving it. Also I will probably smooth the front clouds later.
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This is really nice and simple. I like the sketchiness of it , it creates a nice soft feeling in the clouds. The sun rays in the background are nicely done too. The only thing i would suggest is to smudge/blur those clouds in the foreground a little more, to make them blend and become softer.
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