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Published: 2016-02-29 13:03:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 503; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Song: www.youtube.com/watch?v=xqds0B…Finished It. It may not be perfect, but meh...Idk.
Critiques would be very welcome! ^-^
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Kylo Ren (c) G.Lucas, Disney
Art (c) Me
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Comments: 6
Vision: The vision of who this is supposed to be is very clear, the lightsaber and the blood on the snow make it obvious that this is Kylo Ren even with you not explicitly saying so in the title so kudos there.
Originality: I only gave three stars since this is depicting a moment in the movie and not something out of your own imagination (i.e. Kylo making his lightsaber, training with Luke, something like that which is not shown in the movie.)
Technigue: What you have so far is a very good start. However Kylo's face is very flat and a bit oddly shaped. For the leg which is up in the air, the way you have the bottom half pointed means you should be able to see the rest of the leg and his foot coming out from the other side of the cloak. Also if you look at pictures of Kylo his outfit does go down to his ankles, so you have the bottom half too short. Finally for the lightsaber it should be white in the middle, not black, but maybe you did this on purpose to make him seem darker, I don't know. The snow on the ground and the snow that is falling are fantastic though.
Impact: The movement and the emotion in this piece does help it have more of an impact so good job here.
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Thankyou very much for the critique!
I'm trying to improve as i go along. Humans ain't my specialty.
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Woah! That looks awesome! Great work! (I'm very bad at writing critiques)
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