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shadowsofentity — DARKENED BRIGHTNESS
Published: 2010-10-04 23:26:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 167; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description There's a light in the distance
It's drawing me nearer
But there's blood in existence
It's reflecting just like a mirror

I can see the end, it's just right there
But this blood just gets deeper
The more I hurt, the less I care
The path is gonna get steeper

I see a light in the distance
It gets further and further
Every step creates more resistance
But the light is proof that my beliefs are still pure

I see faces fly by really fast
Those were the people that helped create my future
I have to move forward, have to forget my past
Ambition is just part of my nature

I see a light in the distance
But this blood is getting heavy
A weight is added to the resistance
I cannot move the blood is gonna kill me!!

I see the light in the distance
But it's on another path!!
I know that soon I'll be gone from existance
My blood will flow from the smite of gods wrath.

I chose the path I wanted as my destiny
I knew there would be resistance but not this much
Now my dreams are shattered for eternity
As I was raped by the devils touch!
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Comments: 10

Britt-Kun [2010-10-09 21:12:32 +0000 UTC]

no it this pic
[link]

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shadowsofentity In reply to Britt-Kun [2010-10-09 21:22:44 +0000 UTC]

i cant find you
i dont get it...
here i may be easier to find. im victor cody boal.
send me a message then ill know
or if you dont want to it doesnt matter

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Britt-Kun In reply to shadowsofentity [2010-10-09 21:30:44 +0000 UTC]

is there a girl with blond hair in the picture

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shadowsofentity In reply to Britt-Kun [2010-10-09 21:34:08 +0000 UTC]

yep, and a guy with messd up hair beside her?

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Britt-Kun [2010-10-07 02:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Its a really good concept the flow is kinda off but all in all really good. I would go and re read this and just put in what seems to fit better or look in the thesaurus for less words to repeat or put more of the repetitive words. It is very good still. I just dont think it is finished yet for some reason.

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shadowsofentity In reply to Britt-Kun [2010-10-07 02:03:03 +0000 UTC]

nope, i just dont know what to put. plus i fell asleep
thanks
your the best hun

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Britt-Kun In reply to shadowsofentity [2010-10-07 04:00:00 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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shadowsofentity In reply to Britt-Kun [2010-10-09 20:38:34 +0000 UTC]

do you have facebook?

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Britt-Kun In reply to shadowsofentity [2010-10-09 20:53:30 +0000 UTC]

yes Brittiany O'Neil

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shadowsofentity In reply to Britt-Kun [2010-10-09 20:56:41 +0000 UTC]

is it the one with the two girls in the pic? lol
the ones that are doing a surprised laugh like thing

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