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Published: 2015-03-03 23:16:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 255; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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This is an OC, for now we'll call her Bay, that is a golden coyote, a fantasy based character who can change into a human on occasions. Her mane appears, growing from the puffy fur on her shoulders, when she is using her abilities. It looks cool in my head 'cause it's all flaring and sparkly. lol I'm probably going to do test colors for it. At least for now, this is her basic outline.Also, I'm allowing crit. because I'm curious if anyone likes her first full-body appearance.
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Wonderful e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
I would make some of the strands of the hair/mane flowing in a different way since it seems that wind is coming from the right. The muzzle would be better a little sharper and less rounded. The eye is very nice, but should be placed a little higher and a bit smaller. The placement of the lower front leg is nice, but should be thinner. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
It's a beautiful image! She has a noble expression and a brave stance.
The ears would be better if they were a bit smaller and thinner.
Other than that, awesome , man! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Love it, man!
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Another kind critique. I've been so very lucky to get nice people!
Yeah, I might add some strands or slim the ones that are there and have them wind more. I was a little shy, this is my safe version I guess. lol Thinner. Got it. ^^
I'm glad you think the of stance like that, totally what I was going for. Thaks so much!
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Thank you, man!
I'm glad my advice helped!
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I would straiten the muzzele end. The only part that should be rounded is under the nose. Dont be afraid to make the nose bigger. You can really see movement in the piece though. It would be amazing to see it colered. Your back legs do apear to be longer then the font though. I would carry them back a big and lower the lenth, Your tail and other parts are good theough. I can't wait to see what you do with this. Leet me know when you coler it. <3 Ill give this a 10/10 for now. Thank you if you read this.
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I'm glad the movement is as prominent as I went for. I was really, really trying to get that seen, and I'm beyond glad that it actually worked. lol Ah, that's twice now for a color request, though I suppose that's a good thing. I'll try to get up a colored version soon. Yeah, legs aren't my strong suit at all. Thank you for your comments. ^-^ I really appreciate that anyone actually bothered to critique it, and kindly, at that! I will definitely let you know when I color it.
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Beautiful. I just love your art style and the animal it self. I would love to see something like this is color. You have an nice and smooth art style and can draw fur very good, nothing like I can. The legs are a good shape and the fur flowing in the wind gives me the image of her standing on a hill with a nice breeze going through her fur, so maybe next time you can work a bit on the background. And the eyes are a pretty good style themselves. I just love your style. All-in-all, great job e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you so much! I'm quite nervous about coloring her because I don't have the best tools to color with, but I will definitely do it soon and upload it. I'm so gad you like her mane, that was my absolute favorite part to do. A background, ah, that's asking quite a bit. lol I think for now I'm going to leave the backgrounds to the imaginations of those who view. I've never really done a background, so I may have to work on those individually before I put them together with my other arts. I really appreciate what you've said. ^-^
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