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Shadowstar-287 — Weightless by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-07-30 03:42:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 398; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 1
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Description I wonder what it'd be like to stay down here forever.
No strings, no worries, just breathing my only endeavor.

To be weightless, the closest thing to flying
But then the burning in my lungs, constantly reminding

Me that it doesn't last more than a minute or two.
But I can repeat it again and again as much as I want to.

It's freedom. It's space. It's endless.
Is getting lost here such an impossible request?

I look up and see sunlight flitting through the surface to the bottom of this sea
And I'm once again reminded of the beauty that surrounds me.

I think we all need these reminders every now and again
If merely so you don't spend

Your life sinking to the floor with your griefs and stress
To enjoy this life and allow yourself to rest.

I'm not sinking anymore.
I'm soaring like I never have before.

And i'm enjoying being weightless here a few moments more.
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Comments: 12

MakaykayFOshizzle [2010-08-05 20:17:59 +0000 UTC]

hmm. this is reallyy gooddd. (:

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Shadowstar-287 In reply to MakaykayFOshizzle [2010-08-05 22:48:38 +0000 UTC]

thank u! (^_^)

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MakaykayFOshizzle In reply to Shadowstar-287 [2010-08-06 02:26:31 +0000 UTC]

of course

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APrinceAmongKings [2010-08-01 23:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of a state of...purgatory for some reason...

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Shadowstar-287 In reply to APrinceAmongKings [2010-08-02 02:04:39 +0000 UTC]

hmmmmmm i didn't think about it like that... more of... content. but i can c that 2

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APrinceAmongKings In reply to Shadowstar-287 [2010-08-02 03:13:10 +0000 UTC]

mmmm

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bookworm1394 [2010-08-01 18:16:39 +0000 UTC]

We're proud to have this in

keep up the good work

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Shadowstar-287 In reply to bookworm1394 [2010-08-01 20:43:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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Palett-de-Fru-It [2010-08-01 07:06:52 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!
I think what catches me the most is its effortless flow. It is a very liberating piece, in a way.

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Shadowstar-287 In reply to Palett-de-Fru-It [2010-08-01 13:36:15 +0000 UTC]

ty!

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mistsofavalon4ever [2010-07-31 14:15:42 +0000 UTC]

Pretty. It has a sort of seamless rhythm

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Shadowstar-287 In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-07-31 19:15:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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