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ShadowStrider — Apologies
Published: 2004-07-23 07:24:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 10
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Description Apologies

I can remember when your eyes would shine
Starlight captured within an azure dream
Laughter would ring out from within
Lightly dancing inside those who had heard
Your back was not bowed with the weight of the world
Your concerns weren’t racing with china for the most populated area
Perhaps I may carry some of the weight for a while?
Then maybe you could look me in the eyes without tears
Why does your soul cry with such agony?

Would it ease your frayed mind if I offered an apology?
Could it rest upon soft fields of green, evergreen dreams
Shall you finally find some rest within the arms of an angel
Sheltered within silken, feathery, gossimer thin hopeful wings
Put down the world and resign as the manager of the universe tonight
Close your weary eyes and float away within tides of serenity’s kiss
Put down the mountain I say, set it over there next to the others
Perhaps the group of us could start our own mountain range
The Slumbering Giants, surrounding the dreaming isles

Locked within this blackened tower I pondered storm raged skies
You kept knocking upon it’s stout gates to no avail, no soliciting!
Always down, all I could see of you were your shoes, (Nice!)
Missing out upon the windows of new yet familiar vistas above
Your light still hurts my eyes, still staring into the sun
I would offer you this heart, but it keeps slipping through my fingers
Do you have any tape? Perhaps glue for the puzzle pieces?
It still beats as a drum (with no head)

Wait, I need to collect my thoughts (scattered sheep)
Crying baaah! And running away from nothing
Shepard’s sleep while caring for the world of me
I’m sorry for being me, yet losing me (where am I again?)
Please hold this light for me up high
For it keeps going out on me (needs more fluid)
Even stars burn out, yet still reborn with fiery glory

Hope, meet you, you, meet hope
Get to know each other, you’re staying together for quite a while
Careful, she gets lost easily, being so distracted
With pretty butterflies and ivory birds
Still carrying the world?
Can you not rest yourself for one day?
After all, time doesn’t exist until last Thursday

What was my mind saying?
I’m sorry for losing the light (and my mind)
The dark keeps hiding it from me (within my mind)
I’m confused (no, really?)
Forgive me (find me)
Just rest
Please?
I’ll watch over you
Until the Day is reborn
Floating upon cotton clouds
And azure dreams drenched in starlight.
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Comments: 13

AithneEtain [2004-09-15 19:12:30 +0000 UTC]

w..o..w.. that was amazing. there were so many lines in there that i just fell in love with. simply beautiful
+Aithne

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ShadowStrider In reply to AithneEtain [2004-09-15 19:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ever so much. I am honored for such kind words.

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AithneEtain In reply to ShadowStrider [2004-09-15 19:22:50 +0000 UTC]

you are most welcome love, its the least i could do

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fullonemptiness [2004-07-26 18:03:40 +0000 UTC]

this is pretty lengthy! s'all good though, some interesting bits in it too, baaah!

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ShadowStrider In reply to fullonemptiness [2004-07-30 04:12:30 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, I tend to write long ones sometimes. Thanks for taking the time to read it.

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whitesilkrose101 [2004-07-25 02:48:48 +0000 UTC]

*_____________________________________* Whoa O.O

That was so good. So much emotion. I am frozen in awe.

'Your light still hurts my eyes, still staring into the sun
I would offer you this heart, but it keeps slipping through my fingers'

This is my favourite line. Its like you want to giver her your heart but even you don't own it. *teary eyed* This poem is so beautiful. Why must you write so good and make me the amatuer? *grins*

*spins* I loved this poem, it made me really think.

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2004-07-30 04:52:23 +0000 UTC]

You still put me to shame. I am the sum of those who inspire me. Thank you for such kind words. I am speechless in the face of such praise.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2004-07-30 16:21:31 +0000 UTC]

*smiles*

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2004-08-01 06:00:45 +0000 UTC]

*grins and bows* I am honored

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DevilsStitches [2004-07-23 19:36:06 +0000 UTC]

oh very nice, I loved it. good job!

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ShadowStrider In reply to DevilsStitches [2004-07-24 04:44:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya very much.

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LordOfSenses [2004-07-23 17:57:51 +0000 UTC]

this was great! i loved it!
wheee!

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ShadowStrider In reply to LordOfSenses [2004-07-24 04:45:07 +0000 UTC]

I thought you might appreciate this one. *laughs* thanks.

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