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ShadowStrider — Flowing
Published: 2005-03-31 18:39:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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FlowingTime stands still
freezes ...
stops.
The sun rains warmth and light upon me
seeping into every pore
through every crack
into every space
The wind blows around me
through me
as it bears my weight away from me
floating upon the wind
flowing,swimming through the air
nothing but light footfalls upon the track floor
walking in circles
in cycles, through the patterns
everything and nothing changes around me
through me
yet time stands still
slowly oozing foward
creeping
crawling
and I finish blinking my eye once.
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hmm they may be ponderings, but they are very good ponderings. I love the words you used in this. They really make everything come alive. n.n
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I'm glad ya liked it. *grins* i was afraid i was getting rusty. *laughs* I'll be so glad when this damn research paper is finally done, then i can start writing some more.
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guess your research paper is done. Now I have to go read your new deviations.
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Beautiful. Wondefully descriptive, I can feel every word.
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