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Published: 2005-01-04 07:17:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 6
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Description Frantic

Moonlight shimmers between the gaps in between the treetops within this shadowed forest.  It makes everything bathed within its light take on such a silvery hugh, yet the shadows are all that much inky blackness in contrast.  Yet one running through this forest does not have the opportunity to notice such things, running at such a breakneck pace and all.  For him, the trees are nothing but a blur, and the moonlight something to be avoided at all costs, for it silhouettes him distinctly from the shadows in which to hide in.  The only sounds that can be heard by him are the frantic beating of his heart, and the steady thumping of his feet slapping hard into the forest floor. The muscles of this individual are cramping violently, and the wind is whistling through parched lips from screaming lungs.
Yet still he runs on, as if his very life depends upon it, in which is does. A scream is rapidly building up force from within his throat, held at bay by grimacing teeth, and a diaphragm too tired to produce such sounds.  Still he runs onward, yet the shadow draws ever nearer.  He can feel it’s putrid breath on the back of his neck, and tattered claws stretching closer and closer to his sweat drenched back with every heartbeat.  One misplaced step, like this one on a tree root, will send him sprawling flat onto his face, just like this. The shadow is upon him as limbs convulse violently underneath its overpowering weight.  Bones crack and sinew stretches past its breaking point as crimson fountains into the moon drenched clearing.  Every part is separated from every other part of itself in loud, popping noises.  

The shadow raises a crimson drenched maw towards the moon and screams in primal joy, as fear runs down another victim into the ground and completely shatters him.  Frantic paces will get you nowhere when running away from yourself.  
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ShadowStrider In reply to ??? [2005-01-21 04:50:24 +0000 UTC]

I have chained certain aspects of myself out of fear. The very primal nature of the energy tends to scare me. I guess it would be the lack of control of myself when those energies are released. Therefore i do not release them. It leaves me cold, holding myself aloof in such situations. The struggles comes from the hurt that such actions cause, the fear of consequences of such acts from an experience from my past in my late teens, i was nineteen at the time. I have never been the same since. The struggle has only gotten worse, since i keep myself alone for all of these years. There is a side of life that I am completely unexperienced at, and it sets me apart from the rest of the world, for no one understands why. For them, it is fun. For me, it is a danger. It has hurt many people.

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dragondaughter [2005-01-11 23:15:09 +0000 UTC]

"in which is does" the is I think was ment to be an it. very well written...

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ShadowStrider In reply to dragondaughter [2005-01-15 08:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya thank ya. I think the spell checker grabbed that one, maybe i should read before clicking ok. *laughs*

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dragondaughter In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-16 17:19:51 +0000 UTC]

*chuckle* I do the same thing...desn't help that I do most of my work late at night...most of the time I'm too tired to put forth such effort.

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ShadowStrider In reply to dragondaughter [2005-01-21 04:06:15 +0000 UTC]

i may have to now, since i'm taking my second composition class this semester. I have to constantly apply what i have learned to the fullest. Perhaps it will improve my writings. *laughs*

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dragondaughter In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-22 19:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Cool, learning is always a good thing...improvement is a good thing...although I think your writing it pretty solid as it now stands

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ShadowStrider In reply to dragondaughter [2005-01-25 00:48:02 +0000 UTC]

That's the funny thing about time, i tend to improve with it's passing. Thank's for the vote of confidence.

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dragondaughter In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-25 05:26:02 +0000 UTC]

*chuckle* no thanks required!

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ShadowStrider In reply to dragondaughter [2005-01-29 05:03:38 +0000 UTC]

But it shall be offered none of the less. *grins*

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dragondaughter In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-31 04:51:38 +0000 UTC]

You're just stubborn! *chuckle*

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ShadowStrider In reply to dragondaughter [2005-02-01 05:03:08 +0000 UTC]

Dont i know it!

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whitesilkrose101 [2005-01-09 20:32:23 +0000 UTC]

yikes, that was well written. I got shivers. Very creepy but I like how it ended. We are only running from ourselves, but we aren't that fast. ^_^

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-01-15 08:49:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya. *laughs* I was going for the creepy feel. I'm glad it worked.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-16 06:36:49 +0000 UTC]

trust me it worked well

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-01-21 04:14:35 +0000 UTC]

*laughs gleefully* there is hope for me getting better yet!

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-02-03 05:33:56 +0000 UTC]

*smiles* silly goof ball

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-04-28 00:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Who, me?

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-02 20:36:30 +0000 UTC]

do you see any other goofballs around?

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-05-03 06:46:40 +0000 UTC]

lots, but its not polite to point them out. *grins*

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-14 01:48:30 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* Well I'm talking about the goofball talking to me.

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-05-24 10:45:45 +0000 UTC]

thats gotta be me then.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-06-01 02:28:16 +0000 UTC]

of course *laughs*

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-06-08 08:08:31 +0000 UTC]

*shrugs* i've been called worse.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-06-24 00:27:00 +0000 UTC]

being called a goofball is not a bad thing.

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-07-01 08:25:30 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* nor is it a good thing either.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-07-20 05:37:14 +0000 UTC]

it can be *pouts*

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-07-21 04:44:22 +0000 UTC]

From you i will take it as a compliment and an honor

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-08-13 23:00:20 +0000 UTC]

good, for you should. I only call my friends goofballs, never anyone else.

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-10-26 03:11:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. *smiles* I guess guys are much meaner, for we call each other much meaner names.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-10-27 04:10:38 +0000 UTC]

actually I just hate being really really mean. Girls are viscious.

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-10-29 03:35:37 +0000 UTC]

I think girls are much easier hurt, and much more vindictive afterwards.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-11-03 20:49:40 +0000 UTC]

so true. I'm already hurting and nothing has happened yet.

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-11-15 07:15:13 +0000 UTC]

So what is causing this pain? try to find the source before it's too late. I dont want you to feel like i did.

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-12-21 06:03:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure why I was hurting, I'm not anymore. I just hope the pain doesn't come back.

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-12-28 09:34:11 +0000 UTC]

It might, or it might not. It's really hard to say.

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ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-04 18:05:07 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it's best to give into the shadows willing. There's less pain and force that way.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-15 09:01:23 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* very good point. Sometimes the shadow scares me though. Nothing a few years of therepy wouldnt cure. *laughs*

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-15 21:38:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes, the fear the shadows creates. *grins* therapy is over-rated.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-21 04:17:03 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* dont i know it. I have doing self analysis on myself for years.

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-21 22:12:01 +0000 UTC]

Ah, the joys of the self-analysis. Ironically enough, the only thing therapy ever told me was what I already knew. *shakes head* Rather ridiculous.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-25 01:15:53 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* i have always been afraid of anaylising the psrink instead of him helping me."How are you feeling?" "Fine, and how about you?"
*laughs*

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-25 01:34:06 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* my favourite was always "And how does that make you feel?" I've always wanted to turn around and ask them how I'm supposed to feel. *shrugs* I've never been a big fan of the infamous shrink.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-25 01:38:47 +0000 UTC]

It makes me feel that i should be wondering on how you asking me how i am feeling is making you feel in the process of feeling it. *laughs*

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-25 01:53:49 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* who cares? just feel what you're feeling and go with it. Don't worry about anything else.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-25 03:38:42 +0000 UTC]

Dont Panic...*laughs*

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-25 23:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Panic? Who said anything about panic? I don't recall saying anything about that. *shakes head* so confused...

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-29 05:02:00 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* it's from the Hitchhiker's guide to the Galaxy. The only words printed on the cover of the guide were "Don't Panic".

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-30 04:06:45 +0000 UTC]

*nods* I see...no I don't. I'm still confused. *shrugs* but that's ok, it's practically a permanent state of mind for me now.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-01-30 04:56:37 +0000 UTC]

You would have to read the books in the series. It was quite entertaining. Then you would get the joke. *grins* Why are you so confused? (if you dont mind my asking...)

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-01-30 06:34:51 +0000 UTC]

I don't mind you asking... It's probably from the state of exhaustion I tend to live in. But, I see to be less confused now. However that works. *shrugs* I give up. for now at least.

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