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Published: 2004-07-19 23:35:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 295; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 10
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PromisesWhat can I give to you today?
What can I do, or what to say?
Shall I build you a world, where all are judge fairly
Where people are just people, To be whom they may
Done-
Shall I create a landscape there, vistas galore
Where a lifetime may be spent, yet there is infinitely more
Done-
Shall I place starlight within your eyes, moonlight throughout your form
Everything looks to you for sunlight, angels sing when youβre born
Done-
Shall I bless all with happiness, laughter abounds upon the winds
Smiles greet all from the heart, Absolution for all sins
Done-
Shall I place upon you boundless grace, and wisdom within
Strength to move mountains, strength to withstand to the end
Done-
Open your eyes and look upon all I have made
But I must admit, I had to do nothing to this place
You did all the work ahead of me, For
you were already all of these things and more
Open your eyes
Itβs all waiting
-For You-
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Comments: 27
wow, i wish someone could do that for me!
+Aithne
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Done-
anything else while I'm at it?
*laughs*
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sure, ummm, ice cream! thats always good *giggles*
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Ice cream is good. *laughs* (mint chocolate chip...mmmm...chocolate...) *laughs*
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how did you know that was my favourite?!?!?
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*chuckles* because it is my favorite as well. great minds eat alike. *laughs*
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yay! i love that kind! its great that you do too!
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Thank you for your kind words and in taking the time to read my work. It is much appreciated.
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all almost completely unrealistic promises that seem all that bit more reasonable when in love, lovely writing
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Thank you. I just cannot right doom and gloom works all of the time. It's just too damn depressing. *Laughs* thanks for reading it.
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*smiles* That is so beautiful. I worhsip this poem.
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*smiles* Your too kind. My heart wanted to give some light to those within the shadows. Never give up hope.
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Your to modest. *grins* Its people like you that help me to keep my hope.
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Your too good to me. I have to give people something.
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funny, and here I was the one thinking that you were to good to me. *smiles*
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Never. I can always become better at being good to you. *laughs* consider it an eternal quest.
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*smiles* But you are very sweet. One of the sweetest people I know. So your quest will not take long
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It will take several lifetimes. I can always do better. *laughs* practice makes perfect.
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As long as you don't change to much. I'd never regonize you after that. *smiles* Then by all means practice
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Whisper sweet words to me
Entice the weary hearts to be
Forever growing into destinys
embracing feeling's litinys
Kind of heart, kind of deed
Soaring into fantasies
changing graces; symphonys
heralding the deity
Angels sings of the Flaming One
Eyes that shine as bright as the sun
Flowing Locks cascading; Fire's run
glistening rivers worth a diamond's sum
Harken to me, for the Flame goddess has come
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OMG
Thats so beautiful!!!! *smiles through tears* That was lovely.
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*Laughs* (Gives ya a big hug)
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That's beautiful *tear* Seriously, it's really good -favoritiesess it-
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Im glad you liked it. I just wanted to write something uplifting, since I've been down lately.
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