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Published: 2005-05-03 09:59:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 2930; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 34
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Description Seduction

     The fire was warm.  Ironic that this would be the first thing to notice, but there it is.  The heat from the fire within the fireplace was warm and inviting.  The fleese blanket lain upon the floor was also warm in response.  The candles burning softly all around the room shed such an amber sheen
to area, like swimming in amber water.  All of the soft firelight seemed to collect around the slender figure in front of me.  She was bathing in warmth and light, inside and out.  I slowly reached out, running my fingers through strawberry blond locks flowing down her back as I kneeled down behing her, the vanilla sent mixed in with her unique scent drifting through my senses.  Slowly placing each hand palm downward upon her shoulders, I applied gentle pressure to the muscles tensed in her upper pack, using the heels of each hands and fingertips to slowly knead the tension out of overstressed muscles.  She leaned into each pass, a sigh and a slight moan escaping her lips in response.  Grinning slightly to myself, i thought that i must be doing something right. While continuing the massage, I slowly lowered my lips lightly to the nape of her neck, letting my breath caress the skin with each breath as i inched closer.  My lips slight gently upon the back of her neck with butterfly kisses, brushing my lips lightly upon silken skin.  A shakily
taken in breath of air and  a shiver down her spine was my reward.

     I grin impishly while slowly kissing down the back of her neck, i ran each hand up and down her sides, avoiding her breasts with less space each time, yet starting over right as I would have touched each swell, appling gentle pressure as i massaged her ribs. Laughing deep within my chest as i gently carressed her right ear with my lips as light as i possibly could, i gently exhaled into her ear. I was awarding with another shiver and a slight catch in her breathing as she leans a little heavier into my chest as i spread each leg around the outside of hers, the denim of our jeans scraping against each other.  Her skin was getting warmer by the minute and the hair cascading down upon my face felt as if several slender fingers of silk sliding over my skin as the silk of her shirt slip through my hands, each rib felt slowly as my finger slid slowly closer and closer to the underside of her bra.  Right when my fingers slid up ever so lightly towards the swell of the underside of her breasts, i lightly ran my index fingers towards each other, feeling the material of the bra slowly passing underneath me finger.  I laugh again low in my throat  near her left ear as i had gently kissed my way over the back of her neck from the right ear as my fingertips had lightly touched the starting of the swell of her breasts for the first time teasingly, again breathing into her ear as she moaned again and shiver exhaled, fingers lightly digging into each of my legs around her,

     lightly running one hand up her front from the start of the waistband of her jeans to right before her breasts start as the other hands desends the same way.  Laughing into her ear, I ask 'should I continue?' she laughs and squeezes each hand tightly into both of my thighs. "If you do, i will so kill you.' Laughing as I lightly kiss the valley behind her left ear, i slide my left hand slowly up her chest from the waistband of her pants, finally feeling the weight of her left breast through the silk button down shirt and bra as I gently press inwards as my right hand lightly runs down her right leg on the outside.  She gasps as I applied gente pressure to her left breast and slowly slid over  to her right breast, then running my fingertips back towards her left breast with my fingernails.  I gently drew her chin back and slowly kissed her velvet lips, from light brushes to gently appling more and more pressure with each second.  Her lips slowly parted and i lightly caressed  her bottom lip with both of mine, slowly pulling away and stretching her lower lip slightly as my fingers started near her belly button slid inbetween the gaps in each button, slowly caressing the skin underneath as each button slowly released.

     I ever so slowly ran my hands over her warm skin, feeling her breasts with each hand over her bra with the front and then the back of each hand, avoiding each nipple yet slowly circling closer and closer with each pass as i slowly kissed her again.  she gasps and moans as my fingers finally meet each nipple over her bra, appling gentle pressere with each hand in a circular motion as my right hand slowly slides under the cup of her right breast and lightly pinches the nipple. she shutters and leans into each hand as i whisper into her ear again; "shall i continue, my love?"  She nods as she runs fingernails over both of my thighs as my left hand slides slowy under the left cup of her black bra, appling gentle pressure with each hand as the nipples slide in between the second and third fingers first in an up and down motion, then in a clockwise fashion....
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Comments: 21

DarkCloudAssasin [2011-03-17 04:16:14 +0000 UTC]

nice XD

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nickbruno11 [2010-09-30 13:13:14 +0000 UTC]

Good detailed description.

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sapphire123 [2009-09-28 01:15:07 +0000 UTC]

O//////////////O

Seduction is win

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yourbonesmymirror [2009-04-05 20:40:06 +0000 UTC]

Very well done. It sent shivers up my spine...
"Shall I continue, my love...?"
...the exact words MY beloved used yesterday...

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Malery [2009-02-27 17:43:58 +0000 UTC]

i cant believe u put a filter... on a piece of writing... if a kid reads it he/she wont even know what half of it means omg....

pretty cool though

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itomicbomb [2008-07-28 15:22:15 +0000 UTC]

I would have stood up a e u applause, but all the blood in my upper body went to another place if you know what i mean.

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AaronHolden16 [2008-01-08 16:19:56 +0000 UTC]

i love it keep it up xxxxxx

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ShadowStrider In reply to AaronHolden16 [2008-05-04 13:50:43 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* the only problem is that i have to be utterly miserable to write anything decent. (lol)
I will try though

Strider

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whitesilkrose101 [2005-06-30 05:21:55 +0000 UTC]

... the perfect seducation may not exsist, but this comes fairly close. I find my heart beating faster and its getting harder to breathe. This is what a true seduction should be.

You've always written wonderful things that I can feel each emotion. This one was definitly no exception. I am greatly impressed by your abilities in writing such a romantic short story. I must also say that I am glad that you submitted this.

I'm sorry that it took me so long to view this deviation for multiple reasons.

Keep writing. I have yet to read something of yours that I don't like. *smiles*

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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2005-07-01 08:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. *grins*

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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-07-20 05:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. *smiles*

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kogitsune [2005-06-18 06:15:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow... oof, i just can't stifle my laughter here in the living room. It's making me tear up with the effort. i agree, it's not smut, and yeah, it's such a tease, hahaha. Nice. Got me all... nervously bothered, hahaha.

Okay, must shush now. >>;

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ShadowStrider In reply to kogitsune [2005-07-01 08:28:26 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* i'm glad you enjoyed it..and got such a good laugh *chuckles*

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LadyMuse [2005-05-04 01:13:56 +0000 UTC]

Whoa!!! So very different for you! not that I am complaining at all, but it caught me off guard...I like it...I like it alot...You should write romance novels!

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ShadowStrider In reply to LadyMuse [2005-05-07 04:23:44 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* so many people were writing erotic, so i thought that i would take a go at it (and it's not finished, I had to stop. *laughs*) I wanted to see if i could melt some icebergs. *laughs* I dont usually dwell too much into that part of my pyche. This is how I tend to view such things.

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ContessaDelaunay [2005-05-03 17:23:39 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully written. Very well done.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-05-07 05:03:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. *laughs* i couldnt finish it. i had to stop and take a cold shower, *laughs* I'm such a coward. *laughs*

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ContessaDelaunay In reply to ShadowStrider [2005-05-08 02:10:46 +0000 UTC]

*laughs* But by not finishing it, you leave so much to the imagination. *laughs* besides, cold showers don't always work.

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ShadowStrider In reply to ContessaDelaunay [2005-05-24 10:51:22 +0000 UTC]

True. *laughs* i know. *sighs*

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miscarlet [2005-05-03 12:22:12 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful. Not smut, I'm so happy to finally find that in the erotic section of DA. *applauds*

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ShadowStrider In reply to miscarlet [2005-05-07 05:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. This is how i feel erotica is, the teasing of all of the senses of the reader, seducing them with your words. *laughs* i may actually finish it. It teases the writer as much as it teases the reader. *laughs* . Something else is trying to be stated hear, give me a moment... True erotica is the act of giving something to someone without the thought of one's self. Just doing it because she likes it, not because of what she will do for you afterwards. I think this is what I'm trying to express, the pleasure of
giving just because you can. Anyway, thank you for taking the time to read it.

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