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Published: 2004-09-25 06:47:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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ShiverIs it cold where you lie
Among tattered dreams and heart felt lies
In shadowed gardens of change feared times
Uncharted terrors frozen within tear laden minds
Does sadness spawn blades of ever slicing chills
Weeping over begotten things and long forgotten thrills
Tumbling within tapestries of emptiness fulfilled
Lamenting spirits clad within flesh that has been stilled
Plummeting ever downward towards the abyss
Pining over remembered things of times that are missed
Suspended over dynasties of feelings turned to mist
Walking upon the slender thread of love within the tryst
Is it cold where you dream
Of times long gone, of better things
When thoughts were bliss, what felt was seen
Can time rewind, can souls still sing
Is it cold within the sleep
Can you count all of the sheep
Can you span the fated leap
Or is it all slipping through the seams
Can two souls ever hope to meet
On even ground where all yet weep
To shattered dreams that all seems fleet
Chasing eternal those feelings leased
To all those gone misplaced dreams
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Comments: 21
AithneEtain [2004-10-05 02:26:19 +0000 UTC]
fuck yeah! (fav) i wish i could write half as good as you
+Aithne
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ShadowStrider In reply to AithneEtain [2004-10-24 05:18:50 +0000 UTC]
you write just as well as i do. Thank you for such kind praise.
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AithneEtain In reply to ShadowStrider [2004-10-24 20:19:07 +0000 UTC]
no, not really i dont, and it was not a probelm at all reading it. i love your work
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ShadowStrider In reply to AithneEtain [2004-10-30 04:43:23 +0000 UTC]
*laughs* i happen to think that you do. *grins*
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whitesilkrose101 [2004-10-02 20:11:24 +0000 UTC]
It can be cold, and dreams can hurt. Wonderful poem. I could feel myself sliding down into a place of dreams. *hugs*
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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2004-10-03 05:29:08 +0000 UTC]
*hugs* I'm glad you liked it. pleasant dreams.
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whitesilkrose101 In reply to ShadowStrider [2004-10-09 03:37:42 +0000 UTC]
I did. *smiles* My dreams are so odd. Hopefully they'll be pleasant soon.
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ShadowStrider In reply to whitesilkrose101 [2004-10-24 04:48:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure they are more pleasant than mine. *grins*
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ShadowStrider In reply to Shammrye [2004-10-03 05:52:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Thank you for reading it.
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Shammrye In reply to ShadowStrider [2004-10-25 05:16:01 +0000 UTC]
I try to read all your stuff! ^_^ Iz gud!
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ShadowStrider In reply to Shammrye [2004-10-30 04:33:51 +0000 UTC]
I am glad you like it so. *grins*
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LadyElle [2004-09-25 17:53:03 +0000 UTC]
Wow, very powerful work. I can't help be say I identify with it.
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ShadowStrider In reply to LadyElle [2004-10-03 06:22:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I am truly sorry to hear that. Thank you for taking the time to read it.
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ShadowStrider In reply to LadyMuse [2004-10-03 06:24:10 +0000 UTC]
thank ya. too powerful sometimes.
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