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ShadowSweeper — Opposites
Published: 2006-06-02 00:38:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 274; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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He wanted her,
She wanted him,
He flirted everywhere,
She seduced guys without care.
They were always more then friends,
But they carried different trends.
He wanted to sleep through the day,
She wanted to drink the night away,
She’d greet him with a kiss,
And they’d sit back and reminisce,
On all the good times they had. (extra)
He valued the little things,
While she’d be on her flings,
He could disarm you with a smile,
But staying with her was worthwhile.
It seemed like they were made for each other,
But they were always seen with another,
Except for one faithful weekend,
Where they each lost a friend.
He was her favorite boy toy,
She was his Helen of Troy,
To someone he gave his heart,
And eventually they grew apart,
Only to find what truly made them glad,
Was the love that they always had.
So now they live under the same roof,
Which only shows as proof,
That what I say is a fact,
Its true,
Opposites do attract.
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Comments: 26
I like this poem, plus the rhyme and rhythm are good.
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^___^ Alej, I've always loved your writing. You lucky duck. I'm jellouzzz. Heh.
-Psy.
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Aw. I'm so moveded! thanks for coming back to me Sisi, i'm glad you like my work
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I like the imagery and the rhyme and rhythym... very nice.
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That's great. Thanks so much for the favorite aswell!
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Hiiiiiiiiiiiya!
Yeah, this is halfway up my watchlist, but I'm skipping ahead to comment on it anyhow.
Um, it is a song. I can see it being country. I can see a pop or rock group doing it. It's not . . . sophisticated. It's plain language to speak things we're supposed to understand. The nature of the story is very pop or country-ish.
I think you have written well into the genre. Landed perfectly.
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Thank you very much wolfie. It must have some real flaws if you're not critiquing it. Come on, I know you're itching to take a bite out of it. What I do wrong?
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What? Oh, I think it fits perfectly in the genre. Seriously.
It's not a genre I'd listen to, mind you, but it's a place and you fit it. For its intent, it is good and doesn't need critiquing. ^^
Didn't expect that, eh? I got no bite to take.
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Hmmmm. If you say so...
Alright, I'll take your pretty words and smile
Thanks Wolfie.
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I do say so!
And you're very welcome.
Hope this means you'll keep posting writings. I'm sorry it's taking me so long to get through my devs.
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Ha, i'd keep posting writings even if no one wrote a thing so you don't have to worry about hurting me. I feel honored to have you skip to my work over everyone else's
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^^
I just sorta stare at my devlist (Down to 45 for like the first time since Easter . . . sad . . .) and pick something I feel like doing. And I was like, "Hey, poetry by Shadi, how the cheese did I miss this?!"
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Sure thing, boss. You know how I love this community stuff.
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That one last line sums up the whole thing nicely.
If you ask me, it sounds very country. Like, Alan Jackson country, or Paul Brandt country. I can easily picture them singing this song
Excellent job, my friend.
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Hmm. Thanks.
Ya it isn't the first time I've matched a country tune to my music. Thanks for the nice words and thoughts
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No problem ^_^
And again, no problem! -salutes-
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XD Wooooah! 
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Ha, that's really only what I like about this (and the theme). I can't seem to say it outloud.
But thank you very much for your comment.
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Great Job!
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Thank you very much for your kind words
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