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Published: 2005-09-20 04:16:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 289; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Who: Shadow SweeperWhat: Basic Semi-Chibi Sketch
Where: Home
When: September, 19, 2005 - Took about an hour between 8 and 9 pm.
Why: He's the start to my revampidge
Sorry: My scanner smushed it a bit.
So if you've been read my latest journal you'd know that I'm in the proccess of remodeling Shadow Sweeper, the character and the account.
This, right here, IS Shadow Sweeper. Atleast a drawing of him. I have many things to to say:
First, thanks soooo much to Snapesnooger's Semi-Chibi Tutorial, for helping me model my character. ([link] ).
Next, believe it or not, I drew this. Using the handy tutorial I did a basic sketch of my latest favorite character (Sorry Blaze, Darkwind, and Flip).
Therefore, Shadow Sweeper (Also written as ShadowSweeper), is mine, mine, and all mine. I've lent the character to a friend of mine (Fang), to put in her story. In the long run there's a possibility it could be published. Who knows.
I've done a lot of things to make Shadow Sweeper more original than the picture I based him of:
-He's got spikey red hair, cause it looks cool
-Long flowing black leather cape jacket thingy, cause it also looks cool
-A definate change from the original is the black bandana, so i can draw his hair better
I've left out millions of details, mostly because semi chibi's dont need em, and because its just a start.
So...it look good? Need the critique...but dont burst my bubble...you can poke it and prod it, jus dont pop it
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Comments: 18
SS,
A while ago, I commented on one of your pictures [Blaze], and I haven't paid too much attention to your work in the last few months. However, now that I'm looking at your pictures, I think you've improved a lot since I last checked - there are some flaws, but we're human. Lady-Stargazer pointed out most of them, so I won't go over them. Do you have a page with Shadow Sweeper's biography and stats and all that? If so, I'd be interested in drawing him, and I'd alert you when I finish. Someone drew him for you before, and he gave SS a staff - was the staff correct, or does SS use another kind of weaponry?
Anyways... I'll wish you good luck on your art, and I'll end the comment.
Best/Dan
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Hey I remember you! You rock!
Well lets see here:
I understand i still have very far to go with improvement but I'm glad for the various compliments throughout your post.
I recently made a profile on my wonderous Shadow Sweeper, but it doesn't cover everything to the max; mostly cause I dont have a proper layout/format for it. I will elaborate on my profile as extensively as I can if you truly are intered in drawing him. It would truly mean a lot to me, because you are on of the few that actually elaborate on my work
As for the staff, I decided to get rid of it, mostly because it related too much to a copyrighted character. I have no true intentions of giving him a weapon, but instead, I plan on drawing a tatooed SS, this way the magic he uses will be expressed easier when his tatooes start to glow and stuff.
Thanks for coming back to my work, you are welcome anytime to contact me in any way and say anyword!
-Blaze
By the way, do you ever critique literature works?
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Oh yes, forgot to mention, the legs: They look like you seriously just gave up. They're like sticks. They're supposed to GRADUALLY yet thinner near the knee, but not that thin, I'm sure. It looks like you drew an A and then put lines on either side of the A and made them legs.
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Left side of the body, near the shoulder, shouldn't that have a slight indent in it so it doesn't look like the chest to the should isn't just STRAIGHT with no indent for the armpit? Or is it just the angle? Anywho, I still think it should have a tiny bit of an indent.
For the most part, the waist and up is very good, but when you got on the legs, it looks like you gave up. For one, the trenchcoaty thing looks kinda sillyish, waving out long in one part and short in the other, but, again, that could just be the angle.
Question: Why does one side of his trenchycoaty thing have TWO bumps and the other side only have ONE? It looks like he's mutated or something.
*pops bubble*
Don't you EVER pop my bubbles again.
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You're right about the legs though. I let them go. Also his outfit is a bit off, which I have realized, but i'm glad you're great percieving skills noticed it.
And to answer you're other rant, ya, sorry about the whole giving up on the legs thing. next addition will probably have better legs
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Look's spiffy, you should take up colouring, it would make it super spiffy
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aww you added me to your friendlies thingy, woo
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Ya, after taking you off like a month ago.
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You did? I hardly noticed
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Meh, I was expecting you to get an alert, but whatever.
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na no alert, what a shame
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Thank you
Glad you got a look
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