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Description ANeen awhile,huh? I apologize,and I hope this will make up for lost time!

                      
                               .ast Reflections:.
                              Chapter 1(Part 2)


"UGH! It was right infront of you!"complains a grey wolf directed towards the young wolf,Vince.While the rest of the pack just look at the wolf with a look that says that he needs to shut up.

But they guess they really can't blame him for acting this way,Vince did cause them to lose their dinner...

Not on purpose,of course.

The young wolf doesn't seem the least offended.He rolls eyes his eyes,"I saw it and I had it...but with the size of your big loud feet touching the ground it caused me to miss it."He snaps back at the slightly older wolf.

He growls back at him with the look in his eyes that he's about to rip Vince's head off in a couple of seconds.

He steps closer to the younger wolf,inches from his nose,looking him straight in the eye.

But before this could go even farther or even worse,someone cuts them off.

"Okay,that is ENOUGH!"A voice behind them rages with anger and slight annoyance at his pack behaving like this.

As he raises his voice each (not including Vince)fur on their backs stands up.

They turn their heads slowly in the direction the voice is coming from.

"There will NOT be any fighting going on in my pack,you hear me?" His voice is hard and his look is stern as he looks upon the two.

The grey wolf, takes a step away from the younger one and hangs his head.

The Alpha of the pack sighs,looking at the grey one."We all make mistakes."He looks at his nephew,"But each and everyone of us eventually need to learn from them,so we can get stronger,smarter to achieve the goal."He faces the pack.

"We caught enough that will do for tonight.We'll go early in the morning to search for more."He says to them."Now...let's get back home."He turns his back towards them then takes the lead.

....

Inside the hut(or den as they call it;it's much smaller than a ordinary hut) of the Alpha male and his nephew.He's cleaning his weapons but stops and looks over at his nephew who's laying on some kind of bedding, looking at the ceiling.

"You alright,son?"he asks softly,placing his weapon down.

"...Hm? Um,yea.I'm fine."He sounds a bit hesitant.

The elderly wolf raises his busy brow at his nephew,"You sure?" He faces him fully,folding his arms over his chest."You seem very quiet."

Vince sighs and lays on his side,his back facing his uncle."I said I'm fine"he says with a little force in his tone.

His uncle sighs softly rubbing his face,"Don't let Rock get to you,his teeth are sharper than his brain."A amused smirk appears on his old face.

"..."

Red Flag,the older wolf thinks to himself.He usually gets a kick out of me cracking jokes 'bout that ill-tempered wolf.

He's now convinced something is really bothering his nephew.

But what?

The old wolf gets up from his spot and goes over to his nephew,he sits down on the bedding,his old bones protesting at this.He winces the places a gentle hand on his nephew's shoulder.

His nephew's right ear twitches and he slowly turns his head half-way with one eye looking at his care-taker.

"You know...if it helps you feel better any,son.Your father had the same struggle as you.Following rules,accepting pack-life,and so on..."he says softly,"...but he kept on trying."His voice feels with sadness as he remembers his younger brother.It's so hard to believe he's actually gone.

"...Really?"The younger of the two asks as he sits up,looking at his uncle.

He nods.

"But you told me that he turned into a lone wolf."He looks at his uncle with a questionable look.

"Yes,and that is true."

"So he didn't keep trying to learn the ways of this 'pack-life'...then"

"Yes...and no"he replies.

Vince raises an eyebrow at this.

"He did learn the ways of the 'pack-life' but after an 'incident' involving your grandparents,he got upset and left the pack."The older one explains.

"'Incident'"?

He nods and says,"Your grandparents did something wrong,well...the pack claimed that anyways.You see,one of the pack members wanted to take over the pack.He's your late-uncle,and he started spreading lies about your grandparents and caused the pack to become angry with them and not respecting them anymore.Eventually,your late-uncle won control.Your father hated this.He knew the truth...and so did I.But no one...I mean no one believed us-"

"-so he left? Because they didn't believe him?That's a bit low...I'd expected dad to do something much...I don't know bolder"the young one interrupts.

"I haven't got there yet,son."

He grows silent and listens.

"Your late-uncle made your father leave the pack,in exile, for not 'respecting' him like he should.While he was on his exile...he met your mother and he fell in love with her instantly. Months passed.Your father came back from exile to proof that he was right.He had enough prove,thankfully with your mother's help,she saw the whole 'incident' your grandparents were supposedly responsible of.With that taken care of...your late-uncle was banned from the pack."

"Anything else happened?" The young wolf asked.

"Lots."

Vince lifts his head with a curious expression..

"Your late-uncle got really ticked off about this of course,he attacked your father,your father fought back,during the fight your late-uncle had your father pinned,but then your father grabbed his weapon and turned it towards your uncle and stabbed in the chest...he later died."

"So dad...killed him?"He snorted,"serves him right."

"...I guess your right."

"So...did dad get punished or something?"

"Actually,no.He was ashamed.So he left...along with your mother of course."

"I wouldn't be."

"You never been in that situation,son.You don't know how would you feel until it actually happens."

He just shrugs.

His uncle continues the story,"Months later...your mother became pregnant with you."His uncle smiles at him.

With embarrassment he looks away.

"Not long after that...your dad built a pack of his own,not very many,I'd say about 7 to 8 members."

"Then years later...dad got killed."Vince pointed out with a sad tone.

"..."His uncle looks at him."You still remember...?"

"...I see it every time I go to bed."The younger one replies.

His uncle places an arm around him and rubs his back.




TO BE CONTINUED...

WHEW! It's finished.Well,what ya think?
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Comments: 7

milo8890 [2011-05-27 01:20:56 +0000 UTC]

WAIT A MINUTE! I noticed something!

You seem to change perspectives. Like you go from third person to first person. *shakes finger* That's a no-no in writing.

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ShadowTHFan In reply to milo8890 [2011-05-28 19:18:27 +0000 UTC]

>< I noticed that after you told me. Thanks for pointing that out to me

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milo8890 In reply to ShadowTHFan [2011-05-31 17:09:09 +0000 UTC]

xD It's alright. Good luck with the next part! I can totally revise this for you.

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ShadowTHFan In reply to milo8890 [2011-06-03 21:02:48 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks. XD

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milo8890 [2011-05-27 01:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Past Reflections! It's perfect Love it. WRITE THE NEXT PART >:c


If this is his entire life, then Adalia will be in it <3 :3

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ShadowTHFan In reply to milo8890 [2011-05-28 19:18:58 +0000 UTC]

XDD Thanks sis I'm glad you liked it. I'll work on it soon XD

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milo8890 In reply to ShadowTHFan [2011-05-31 17:08:46 +0000 UTC]

:3 *hug* Ok.

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