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Published: 2008-04-22 09:51:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 811; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 51
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Long story made short: This is my rendition of the infamous Firefox-tan, the personification of the Firefox web browser that seemed to propagate the Internet in this day and age, though not as much as Futaba Channel's OS-tans.Critics, you know what to do
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I'm not much of a critic, but I love your firefox girl xD She looks so sweet and innocent like a child. She's someone who I'd love to hang out with x3 Absolute cuteness!
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sharpen the logo, girl is nice and crisp, background logo isn't. this could be an attempt to create debth, better ways of doing this though.
you've taken advice on lighting i see :]
vast improvement.
theres a few little white spots on the inside of [her] right leg that looks to be nothing more than a mistake in leaving things forgotten in layering.
used a gradient for her hair shine - which is okay - but you didn't do anything for her tail. which. if she did in fact have a tail, it would probably have the same amount of shine as her hair. [unless she didn't take care of it as much as the hair on her head.]
uhhhh... other than that you're improving quite nicely, uh, i hate the gradient in the background, it feels cheap just cause its just white to gray. add some solid black to put weight back on the right side for balance.
if you don't wanna do that, then ill go ahead and comment on how the brighter end of the gradient is on the left, and the light source for her is on the right.
this is all assuming that the gradient as it stands is unintentional. if it is intentionally the way it is, then other than the black and sharpening, i got nothing.
OH make sure there is local light on the girl. IE her raised arm generates shadow if it is getting in the way of the light source. and the bandaid, though mostly in the light, still would have lighting of its own due to texture and such.
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Ahh yes, her tail (note:the foxlike ears and tail are the most common characteristics often seen in all Firefox-tan renditions). Indeed, I've entirely forgotten about her tail due to all of the time spent on her hair. I cursed like Homer Simpson by the time I've noticed the faux pas, just right after I've submitted it
That aside, thanks a ton
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Np. Though I don't follow the... "Firefox-tan" renditions, was just going from the picture.
Also, check out her inner ear. Okay to make the outside the same color as her hair, cause thats what happens, pick up a cat and examine it if theres one nearby. the inside of the ear doesnt usually grow hair. though hair grows in the ear, it usually isnt fur, its kind of like a whisker.
So I dunno. Your call on that one, just shouldnt be the same dark color as seen in her hair.
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(Hurriedly scribbled notes into a random piece of scrap paper) Thanks again, dood
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