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Published: 2019-08-25 20:09:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 374; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Hi!ยIm redesigning some OC of othersย
Today we have Rose by RoseTheRealSansGF/RoseUTsansWife
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Thoughts?
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im really sorry....But itโs worse than vanilla.
Colors clash together too much and Design itโs just terribleย
like WTF kind of species is she? A dead Pegasus?
she evens uses sans as a sex slave
she needs a lot of improvement ย
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Hereโs What I changed
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Name:Rose Marigold
race:Skeletonย
Age:18
-She loves collecting flowers,her favorite are marigolds
-Her favorite Tradition isย dรญa de los Muertos
-She would sometimes give Flowers toย Charlie for no reason
-She Hates sans(Lol)
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Credits
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Original rose is by
Rose Marigold is by me
The redesign idea is by
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Comments: 3
CallMeYukari [2019-08-25 22:33:44 +0000 UTC]
Well, the design's nice but the description's pretty bare bones.ย
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ShantaCake In reply to CallMeYukari [2019-08-26 21:12:57 +0000 UTC]
*WHEEZE*
ima bad writer
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CallMeYukari In reply to ShantaCake [2019-08-26 21:20:41 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you could separate them into two paragraphs explaining:
- What could be fixed about the OC
- What the redesign OC is, with points that are or aren't directly linked back to the original
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