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Published: 2008-09-16 03:34:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1423; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 45
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Dance oh ye, epitome of destruction, d a n c e ...For ye only witness be the galaxy
the m o o n
and the wilderness you wreck havoc upon ...
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I actually want crit this time, CRITIQUE people, or try
I would appreciate that, cause i feel like I forgot something in this. That moon was living hell btw XD though I only spent like 20 minutes on it
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Thanks! I think this one is one of my favorites Ive ever done, dunno why XD
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Oh beautiful!! I love the moon, it looks great, as does the sky and tree tops. Perhaps a blob of critique for you would be that I think perhaps Brimmy could be more in silhouette s he's in the shade of the light of the moon, but art from that it's perfect! <3333 Well done!!!
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thank you! 
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lol s'okay my honey~ and you're we;come!!
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Bah no matter how long I stared at this I can't find any mistake worth of mentioning. Really nice work! C:
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aww, thanks! :3 I'm stupidly proud of that moon XD
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Really cool painting. It's shows off the characters personality and your skills at the same time. That Moon steals the show!
Ok now the crit- Brimmy losses allot of his freedom and the feel of flying threw the air cause you grounded him to the edge of the frame. His back hooves and tail are cut off. Not only does it limit his power, it leads our eyes of the page.
This is the reason the trees don't work as well. They are also grounded. I'm telling you, if you just moved Brimmy over, totally into the painting, everything would work, including the trees. That may mean a slightly smaller Brimmy, or , a different pose.
Awesome Job on all the rest!
Very Impressive.
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Thank you! I was thinking about that a bit, and I'm wonderingdering (YES, i just made up that word XD ) if I would be able to patch that up looking as smooth as the rest. Cause I know what I do on my home monitor look very different on a school monitor and I catch a lot of mistakes up there, so it might become trial and error. But thanks for the awesome crit! I would have never expected such an awesome review of my work
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Your welcome!
I appreciate when people crit me too. It helps so much.
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*brimmy jumps*
cool
*brimmy lands on me*
uff -_- *flat*
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Oooo the moon looks so pretty! 8D very nicely done!
The only critique I can think to give is the with the front legs, the back one looks a bit wider/bigger then the one closer to us, and if should be the other way around - the one close to us should appear larger then parts further back. Though, it also could just be the way the fur is XD lol - But other then that, I think it's awesome! XD nice job!
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XD yay You're welcome!
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to be critical, maybe the trees aren't necessary, but they do give the viewer a sense of grounding the character within the world. 
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i know, I was like trees...no trees....trees...no trees, and then I just left em XD I'm gonna see if anyone else catches that. the little eye tool on photoshop works wonders <3
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i think the trees are fine. what's the eye tool? (i don't see one in cs3)
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lol, the one that turns on and off the transparency in the layers box XD lol
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oh, lol, so you've got the trees on their own layer, good idea
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yeah, in case i hate them 
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The moon was really good but I didn't even really notice it because of how wierd Brimmy looked. Lol. I'm crying because I just watched the last episode of House again, and it's adorable and heart-wrenchingly sad at the same time. I was about to start bawling. Really.
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awww like how I cried in I Am Legend? awwwww, 
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You HAVE to see it! It was SOOOOO SAD!!!!
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I love how we feel the need to share that X3
I really wanna see it though, I was getting mad cause I had nothing to watch 
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You have to watch it tonight! Quick overview, House woke up in a strip club and didn't know how he got there, so he went outside and there was a bus crash, he had a wound on his head and he couldn't remember the last four hours. He went to the hospital and he remembered seeing a symptom of something on the bus and that whoever had that symptom was going to die but he couldn't remember who or what is was. So the whole episode is spent trying to figure out what happened. Then they fix a guy who they thought was it, but he was still having dreams about this lady who wasn't on the bus, but who knew what he was trying to figure out. He gets everybody on the bus to see if it'll jog his memory, then he puts his heart into overdrive with some alzheimer's medication and he has a heart attack, but he remembers that he was with Amber (Wilson's girlfriend) on the bus and that she was the one who was going to die. That's only the first episode, I'll tell you the rest later but it all comes down to House having a concussion, heart attack, passing out a few times, having brain surgery, a siezure, and a coma.
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awwww, <3 Hoouuussseee! I saw the end of the one I think, cause I saw Chase cryign and they were talking about stuff like that T~T
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Chase didn't cry, I can't remember when he ever cried. Huh.
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sorry, typed the wrong name, but now i can't remember, but it's House's friend who works on a different team ..that guy XD
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Wilson? Yeah he cried cause his girlfriend died. And he resigned in the new episode! He said it was because he needed a change of scenery because of Amber dying but at the end he said that the real reason was because he and House weren't friends and that they never had been and that House was just a jerk and that he made everybody miserable, so much that he had to quit his job and move away from House! I was like crying.
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awww, what an A$$ (bleep) >D that's all I can really say
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epic ule here XD srsly nice job on the pose, and beautiful detail there blacky ^U^
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thank you! I wanted to show the more lizard side of Brimmy
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XD well id certainly hope hes not ordinary considering he melts things where he walks and his tail could like kkill a man O_O XD
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lol Brimmy pwns EVERYONE XD maybe not dragons though XD
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XD brimmy pwns...haha begining to sound like an epic free GA XD
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I really like the background in this, especially the moon 8D
The only thing I can see that is a bit off is the front left foot- its bigger than the other one and looks kinda weird.
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cool, thanks :3
I'm actually getting crit! COOL. XD
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No problem!
Lol, you asked for it. Even though it is kind of hard to crit when pretty much everything in this picture looks good XD
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k, changed the foot
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I spent quite a few minutes trying to find something to crit and the only thing I could think about was his tail looks a little stiff.
Not sure if that's the design but you might want to make it a little less "L-shaped."
It looks a little awkward.
Orsomething u___u;
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lol, k thanks, that was really good! I'll look into that thank you
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