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Published: 2007-09-12 16:36:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 3028; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 41
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yup, still practicing.....with a lil' original style of naruto drawing....
seems weird huh? I know...
C&C are accepted..... Help me to improve myself, OK?
naruto is created by Kishimoto Masashi, author of NARUTO manga..
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Icy-Alice [2014-07-17 02:05:01 +0000 UTC]
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Wicketwitch [2007-09-15 17:17:14 +0000 UTC]
His hair looks a bit tame, but so incredibly fluffy i do <3 it
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zettaiyamikoe [2007-09-13 12:45:23 +0000 UTC]
IT's Nice, but the hair's just alittle to short ^^
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KaelNgu [2007-09-13 09:34:42 +0000 UTC]
lol trying new style eh?
naruto look a bit feminine in this one,and his hair...er too short...FOR ME ONLY!!XD
haha practise more^^
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Shigatsu-sama [2007-09-13 03:30:40 +0000 UTC]
It's a beautiful piece! The only thing I would say about it is that it could be a little sharper instead of blurry. Other than that it is perfect!
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Hessmix [2007-09-12 22:04:05 +0000 UTC]
Eye's need to be a smidge smaller
"Whiskers" bother me for some reason
and I think the nose is a little big.
Other wise AWESOME job man!
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tom321 [2007-09-12 21:19:04 +0000 UTC]
hmmmmm I would like to give critic but alas I have no talent for any kind of colouring
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FallenYangeL [2007-09-12 20:37:54 +0000 UTC]
Wow really awesome I love his stare and his hair (that rymed lol) The only thin I would say is that his clothes are a little blurry.
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5enbonzakur4 [2007-09-12 20:13:56 +0000 UTC]
this looks pretty good, and i know i'm no expert, but there are a few things that i noticed. His eyes are a bit wideset, and also appear to be a bit offset. the nose looks a little off. it depends on what age you are going for in this picture, but since it looks like post-time jump, i'd widen the nose a little bit to make it more masculine. his eyes look pretty good, but if you're going for a more realistic approach, you might want to flatten and widen them a bit more. Otherwise, the shading looks spot on, and the colors look like real skin (something i'm not quite good at yet xD)
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MajorasMasks [2007-09-12 19:32:32 +0000 UTC]
I like the skin and hair coloring, but the clothes and expeciallt the hair look too rushed...
The style is fine, it's nice to see something different for once. ^^
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FullMetal-Chrno [2007-09-12 19:29:43 +0000 UTC]
I don't see where there are lots of errors. But maybe for a better look or whatnot, you could try using the wet edges selection for the brush. Or turn the opacity down. 8D I think..o_o
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irenukia [2007-09-12 18:40:13 +0000 UTC]
Since you said C & C accepted...
First of all I think you did a wonderful job choosing the colors and painting the face; while they're all very realistic, you still kept the characters' original features
I think, however that his hair looks too fluffy-like. If you wanted it too look more realistic you should have contrasted the colors a lil' bit more. If you wanted it to be a bit more cartoony, like I think the eyes are, then the strands should look similar to the normal Naruto.
I think the face is really well done, except maybe it is a bit too childish for his age, but that really depends on what you prefer & your interpretation is
To make it more interesting maybe next time add a secondary light source: it will define better the features you painted and will make it look more realistic ;3
Otherwise this painting is great, it's different from what you usually do but it's still great. I'd like to see more characters in this style
>> Sorry for the rant, I got carried away~~<3
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sharingandevil In reply to irenukia [2007-09-12 18:43:36 +0000 UTC]
thank you!
really appreciate your CnC!
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Dragon-jade [2007-09-12 18:28:27 +0000 UTC]
I think the hair too short and the nose feels weird, but you have a very nice job in here
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ValkyrieRandgris [2007-09-12 18:19:57 +0000 UTC]
he looks a bit too feminin, i like the way you did his hair, but his left eye's too far left and his nose is too long.
sounds like i'm bitching, but that's just critique.... C:
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TeaAndCookies [2007-09-12 16:48:29 +0000 UTC]
hair a little longer...but that's probably just me because I like long hair on guys
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DarkyJunks [2007-09-12 16:39:52 +0000 UTC]
it's pretty good, though the eyes should be darker, the scars a bit darker aswell, I'd love if u used his gofy grin on those lips and the hair should be longer and more unruly other then that great job u deserve a hug*hugs u*
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