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Published: 2014-05-24 18:40:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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  take me down to the place where my soul
      clamors yes to your sterling inquiries-
 surfeit-sweet as clover honey and just as cloying.
    shut the doors tight, draw the curtains:
             where you go,
                i will follow.

admire
      that which you created, here under shimmering candlelight:
  this delicate lunate, capitulate,
    the phalanges, spider-long like yours,
       the pallour of my skin, the ghostly azure network just beneath-
    vena innominata strung through your operating cross.

let me into the labyrinth of your head, your heart-
promises like pomegranate seeds,
      the bitter fruit of the Underworld
   where devotion is the bitter poison
     that lashes swift and deadly at my shattered soul,

stammering
         this indelible knowledge;

  just a tangled marionette.
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Comments: 7

KingofNothingRoA [2014-06-15 21:18:42 +0000 UTC]

And there gos my sanity.Once again you have crafted yet another beautiful peace of art,i just can't begin to describe how much i admire your writing skills and my disbelief that no one such beauty.Well,a diamond does come from coal,it just takes a little time and some shaping for it to turn into the wonderously intricate otherworldly jewel that it is.

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sharp-side-up In reply to KingofNothingRoA [2014-06-15 21:24:06 +0000 UTC]

You flatter me! What is it about my spiraling poetry that draws you in? I couldn't imagine another person being drawn to my lunatic scribblings... but I am glad you are.

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KingofNothingRoA In reply to sharp-side-up [2014-06-15 21:30:46 +0000 UTC]

It may just be me but,the way you write draws me in in a certain way and i get the feeling that theres something lying underneath the false later sleeping,waiting.It reminds me of how i am with my friends and family,waiting for the perfect day to tell them how i really feel,what i think,to stop lying and hiding behind my self-endulgent daydreams and let out all the emotions i've damned up for the past 7 years.

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sharp-side-up In reply to KingofNothingRoA [2014-06-15 21:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Some of my poem are acrostics, some have embedded messages, all are self-indulgent fever dreams.

I'm not actually a violent person, but I do have certain [literary] tendencies to write taboo and perverse vignettes. As you can see, I'm rather fond of medicine as well.

What are these emotions of which you speak? There's no danger in confessing to a faceless internet stranger, right? [but of course you are not beholden to me in any way; silence is a valid response.]

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KingofNothingRoA In reply to sharp-side-up [2014-06-15 22:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Emotions such as despair and sorrow.Feeling as though i'm drowning in every single false smile i plaster on my face,and every time my lies pull me down deeper into my sea of tears.As if my life is worthless,like i'm an empty shell of a human being and well thanks for listening to my senseless drabbles.And who knows those faceless internet strangers could turn out to be one of your best friends. 

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sharp-side-up In reply to KingofNothingRoA [2014-06-15 22:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Okay so I'm trying to learn more about Fairy Tale- Lucy reminds me [visually] of Noel Vermillion of BlazBlue. :u

Hey, if you're an automaton, I'm utterly convinced of your viability! I understand pain too deep to express, believe me. I've been in hospital for it. I don't know anyone you know, so tell me anything you need to.

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KingofNothingRoA In reply to sharp-side-up [2014-06-15 22:24:53 +0000 UTC]

I'll be holding you to those words.

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