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Published: 2011-08-23 01:25:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 617; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Hi everyone, Conrad here and i just drew this and i think it looks better than my other ones. If you would please comment and tell me what i did wrong and how i can do better please say so. Thanks guys you rock. XP
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lady-bird-258 [2011-09-01 00:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the head looks kinda oddly-shaped, might wanna look into that.

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sharpcdshrp In reply to lady-bird-258 [2011-09-01 01:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Yup i knows it looks horrible. I just could not decide on what the proportions of Tyson's head should be. I hope that i will get alot better than that. Thanks Wen.

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Impostor1 [2011-08-31 10:24:35 +0000 UTC]

He has a really... interesting shape on his head. Even if you tried making some mangaish stuff, those should still follow some basic rules of anatomy. For example bone structure and skull shape. To describe it the easiest, imagine that skull is a flattened ball with rectangular jaw attached. The face takes about half the height of the front. Jaw goes about 1/3 into the length. Ears are attached where the jawbone ends. Spine is attached about 2/3 into the length of the skull.

Basically, next time you draw something, make simple helplines and shapes following these instructions and then draw over them.

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sharpcdshrp In reply to Impostor1 [2011-08-31 10:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm. I will take your excellent advice thank you so very much for going in detail. I'm glad that another person took the time to tell me what i did wrong and gives hints on how i can improve. Thank so much man.
P.S: Hope that you will go far too.

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LauraS45 [2011-08-23 23:22:47 +0000 UTC]

that is an awesome shirt

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sharpcdshrp In reply to LauraS45 [2011-08-23 23:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I came up with the idea when i had a bad day.

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LauraS45 In reply to sharpcdshrp [2011-08-24 01:11:10 +0000 UTC]

AW I am sorry

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sharpcdshrp In reply to LauraS45 [2011-08-24 01:33:39 +0000 UTC]

Its ok im in a better mood since i posted my art and got alot of viewers. Thanks for caring anyway. x3

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LauraS45 In reply to sharpcdshrp [2011-08-24 01:36:23 +0000 UTC]

no problem <3

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sharpcdshrp In reply to LauraS45 [2011-08-24 01:39:21 +0000 UTC]

So i checked your file you like poems. Well i have one you might like read this:
Dark clouds envelope the bright spring sky. The warmth of the sunlight fades to a breeeze of cool air. Drizzle begins to massage the earth below. Too soon the rain becomes fatter and heavier.The branches are swaying,the grass bowing. The Landscape shall not be spared. I think of the before. Before the sheets of rain, before the quiet drizzle, and before the clouds. I think of the warmth of sunlight, the birds singing, and the sky a bright blue. I think of the aw. The aw before the storm.
Tell me what you think.

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LauraS45 In reply to sharpcdshrp [2011-08-25 00:38:10 +0000 UTC]

I really like this poem the symbolism in it is wonderful. You can feel all what he is feeling, like you understand all what he's been through. You can understand that all of his happiness is fading into this deep sadness. it was a excellent poem, I loved it.

who wrote it and what do you think about it?

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sharpcdshrp In reply to LauraS45 [2011-08-25 00:52:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm the writer. I wrote it to describe the essence of how beautiful nature is before you smell water. I do really like this poem i not only do drawings but poems as well. Thanks for your comment i will be sure to write some more. x3

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LauraS45 In reply to sharpcdshrp [2011-08-25 01:08:38 +0000 UTC]

you should put them up.

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sharpcdshrp In reply to LauraS45 [2011-08-25 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]

I dont think that their that good, but i'll be sure to post The Awe Before the Storm.

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LauraS45 In reply to sharpcdshrp [2011-08-25 23:07:20 +0000 UTC]

cool!!!!!

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sharpcdshrp In reply to LauraS45 [2011-08-25 23:20:10 +0000 UTC]

x3

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LauraS45 In reply to sharpcdshrp [2011-08-27 01:37:30 +0000 UTC]

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SutenSoon [2011-08-23 20:27:57 +0000 UTC]

You did a good job with the nose, which is always difficult from the angle you drew in The main thing I'd say to work on is how the back of the head meets the neck, because you drew it sort of the way a jawbone would be drawn from a 3/4 angle. Just take a look at some pictures of people facing the way you want your character to be facing and it will be much easier to draw Good work so far! :3

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sharpcdshrp In reply to SutenSoon [2011-08-23 20:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I will try to better on the head and the neck connection. Thanks for the hint. X3

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SutenSoon In reply to sharpcdshrp [2011-08-24 01:53:42 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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