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Shawnlabomb — Sending the Message pg 3
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Published: 2016-09-03 19:37:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 19845; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 21
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It's finally finished. I wanted to try improving my backgrounds and scenery. I'm trying desperately to make the visuals interesting and not bland. I'm really pushing myself. I've came a long way from paper drawings. That was so much simpler. But I must keep going.Prev page: fav.me/daeynhy
Next page: Sending the Message pg 4
Bonus: I know the hand writing's shit. Don't worry My newer pages will include the text tool to make it easier to read.
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Comments: 31
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The part where lynn says "ill say" what was she about to do
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Max: I think lynn has a secret with lincoln, she wants her boyfriend with him.
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LOL clearly she doesn't know Bobby... he'd fall into depression if he accidentally ruined Lori's hair or something.
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Laughed so hard when she bellowed "WHERE IS MY BABY?!?" down the school halls! Brilliant! More, please? 😂
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Don't worry, dude. I'm still working on this piece.
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This is a knocking-free zone right here, I guess!
Poor Lincoln, seems like this turn of events is really adding insult to injury!
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I like the colours here, and the character designs are interesting. Keep it up!
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I could never do comic strips they took to long. Great flow here and super cute.
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Very interesting comic and you did a good job on the backgrounds. Please keep up the good work.
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I like how much detail that is in the characters and background. Great job!
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I seen what you said and you should just keep pushing yourself. I did a short comic about 30 pages and it's decent. Before I don't think I could of even made drawings interesting enuff for me to want to keeping making more pages for it. So yea yours looks great...the most important thing about it is that you don't won't,your backgrounds will improve with time!
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Nice work so far on this comic series, the style and drawings are pretty well done, and there's just enough background detail to illustrate the scene well. The only thing I would suggest is try to make the text a bit neater and easier to read as in places it is hard to read (not everywhere though). Though the handwritten text does give it a great hand made feel. Great work, keep it up!
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Haha , the comic is so true ! Expecially the knocking ? Nope parents never knock on you´re door part made me smile!
So the charackters are drawn in a carttony style..hmmm I don´t really like that kind of style but I still think you did a really good job !
Also the shading and coloring is really good!
The only problem is that you can´t really read the text at some places and I would use the Text option for that !
Have a nice day ! And stay Awsome!
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Wow, i'm impressed. The humor of this actually brought a smile to my fce. Thank you!
The thing I didn't like was that the text was difficult to read -- this font you're using looks very original, but it's also hard to decipher at times.
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this style actually reminds me of a cartoon but i cant remember it. XD
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i really thought this was funny, I also love the way the parents reacted differently to seeing the girl in the room~ nice work
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This is really funny, I feel like something had improved on this, and I really looking forward into this.
The hand writting feels more better than the last time I left a comment. Except for the 2nd box, this one would need to be rewriten, I can't understand what the boy say.
But this is very adorable! I persoanlly like your style.
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OH MY GAWD
I love that you're not showing us the parents faces.. NOSTALGIA FEVAH
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My powers grow stronger and stronger everyday.
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WHY DID YOU HAVE TO END THE MOMENT?IT WAS GETTING GOOD THEN THE PARENTS APPEAR ENDING THE MOMENT ,VERY BAD
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